EPTStarcraft: Rebirth of the Swarm (Machinima) - Page 9
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Trasko
Sweden983 Posts
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Dr.Sin
Canada1126 Posts
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RiceAgainst
United States1849 Posts
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sCCrooked
Korea (South)1306 Posts
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Knee_of_Justice
United States388 Posts
+ Show Spoiler + The animation was fantastic! There were some nice action shots, and the scene with the colossi was very impressive. The music was also pretty good. For constructive criticism, I found the dialogue and voice acting very weak. My advice is to go play through the protoss missions in broodwar. Note that the protoss not only have a particular voice filter (so they sound like advanced aliens), but also a particular way of speaking that makes them sound different from the Terrans. They sound haughty and powerful. Your voice actors need to emulate this (dont worry, SC2 seems to mess this up too IMO). Also , before the fight, the red marine sounded like he was trying to not shout too loudly, which made the entire scene very difficult to take seriously. As has been pointed out, the dialogue needs a lot of work: if english isn't your first language, look around on TL for a native speaker to make the dialogue less cumbersome. I thought the ghost had the best voice, so it wasn't all bad. Dont let this criticism depress you though. It's far from perfect, but its incredibly well done. You and your team should be very proud of your work! :D | ||
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Yuriegh
United States327 Posts
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Crainy
Germany83 Posts
The full 60 minute long movie can ofc be watched here: | ||
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sCCrooked
Korea (South)1306 Posts
Look forward to seeing what's in store next! | ||
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sashkata
Bulgaria3241 Posts
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SecondHand
United States329 Posts
Other than that I really liked it, although the zerg blood was a little over the top. | ||
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Forikorder
Canada8840 Posts
only problem i had was the captain marines guy voice sounded like the voice actor was trying to yell while being as quiet as possible | ||
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CrazyF1r3f0x
United States2120 Posts
The infested Terran The voice acting was spotty here and there (mostly in the parts that involved yelling), but compared to most machinimas voice acting it was fantastic. | ||
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Titusmaster6
United States5933 Posts
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CrazyIvanPL
Poland220 Posts
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Weavel
Finland9221 Posts
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Crainy
Germany83 Posts
Keep and eye out for that and thanks so much for watching my movie  | ||
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Hylirion
Netherlands968 Posts
On the other hand, the voice acting was sub-par, the marine captain was really bad. And there were too much very slow panning shots of the scenery which made the pacing too slow, especially in the beginning. Also extreme zoom in on blurry textures isn't very great to look at. Some times you try to convey emotions by the characters looking at each other, but due to the low res of the models and the marine/ghost wearing helmets it just didn't work for me. | ||
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Arkitek
United States51 Posts
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SkaPunk
United States471 Posts
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-Dustin-
United States717 Posts
But seriously great job! If you make another movie I will watch it for sure. | ||
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