Clan site design - Page 3
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Kenpachi
United States9908 Posts
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fanta[Rn]
Japan2465 Posts
Maybe change the navigation to be more outstanding, if you have only a few buttons (like you seem to do) a vertical menu beneath the logo works quite well (see TL) | ||
MasterOfChaos
Germany2896 Posts
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
On June 15 2010 07:34 fanta[Rn] wrote: It looks like a blog because it's the news page showing. Pretty sure once you see different content, clan roster, etc. it won't look like a blog. Maybe change the navigation to be more outstanding, if you have only a few buttons (like you seem to do) a vertical menu beneath the logo works quite well (see TL) I thought about that, too (a horizontal menu), but the dilemma there is that there really is only 3 main parts of the site: news (home page, archive, and individual post page), forums, and replays. I don't think that's enough items to justify putting a menu under the header and pushing everything down more (and if I push things up it'll just look cluttered). Anyhow, I toned down the drop shadows.. | ||
Thrill
2599 Posts
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fanta[Rn]
Japan2465 Posts
Looks very nice now! Now the only thing that needs improvement is the clan name text, if you manage to make it stand out yet be decent it's a very nice concept. Use a different font for that one, notice how a lot of company logos are text that has been adjusted slightly? For example, Microsoft has that little cut out-o and s brought close together: bigfile has those green dots and the "squarish" ending curves going It makes your logo more distinguishable! (You can turn font into selection paths and adjust those in case you don't know how to make these things) Edit: Oh and how do you plan to integrate this into your browser? Because the marine picture at the top right will look cut out if you just insert it into a black background. Unless you want to map your site to the right top corner of the browser you should enlarge the picture add some fade out to black. | ||
gLyo
United States2410 Posts
However, it seems like a lot of the content isn't very organized or hierarchical. It's difficult to immediately (and I mean instantly – there is no leisure on the web) tell what is most important, what is second most important, etc. Everything looks a bit too similar (and not in the intentional, consistent design way). Moving your boxes around and working them into a strict grid system might help with the hierarchy, as might more interesting typographic choices. A custom logotype, like fanta suggested, is pretty much always a good decision. Also, never use Arial for anything but body text (and even then, only on the web)! Good start, keep at it. | ||
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blade55555
United States17423 Posts
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
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blade55555
United States17423 Posts
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fanta[Rn]
Japan2465 Posts
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Spartan
United States2030 Posts
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disciple
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beg
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Xeris
Iran17695 Posts
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