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SevenOfNine
Profile Blog Joined March 2011
Sweden48 Posts
July 18 2012 04:22 GMT
#1
Hello there guys! I'm a person who loves to play around in programs like PS, C4D and some others ofcourse. So today (18:th july 6.00 AM) I finally finished one of my "projects" which is an animation to an intro. I think it all went nice and smooth and I want your oppinions on what i can improve and maybe some ideas since I have a lack of them .


It's in 1080p!

REMEMBER this is my first animation in C4D

Do never give up! Never surrender
Iranon
Profile Blog Joined March 2010
United States983 Posts
July 18 2012 04:40 GMT
#2
Nice! One thing I think I might have done differently is to reverse the direction the logo is moving. As it's coming together, it starts in the lower left, moves up and right, then tilts back. At the end, when the words are completely assembled, your view of the logo is somewhat hard to read due the angle -- it might make more sense to have it start tilted and near the center, and then pull it towards the viewer and down to the corner. Depending on what this is for, you could even have it end in some position that would persist into an overlay.
jrkirby
Profile Blog Joined August 2010
United States1510 Posts
July 18 2012 04:44 GMT
#3
I've been doing 3D as a hobby in blender for 2.5 years. I've never used C4D, but it's probably about the same. Nice job, did you follow a tutorial for it?

Nice modeling on the letters, and nice post-processing.

Keep at 3D. There's a whole world to learn out there. It takes forever to learn it all, but learning it is the fun part.
JieXian
Profile Blog Joined August 2008
Malaysia4677 Posts
Last Edited: 2012-07-18 06:43:54
July 18 2012 06:41 GMT
#4
I think you need a better font or just better word design (at the end) I needed to rewatch a few times and ended up pausing to see what the word was.

animation was fine though
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Profile Blog Joined November 2011
Canada932 Posts
July 18 2012 09:42 GMT
#5
I think it would be better if you slowed into the word rather than started slow at the beginning. I haven't used C4D, does it have a graph editor? If it does, try not to let the computer spline in and out for you. The computer is your enemy.

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