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The high pitched sound that goes on every other phrase for the first minute or so almost made me turn it off tbh. It just isn't an interesting addition to the song, but that is only my opinion, and first impression. Perhaps modifying it so its more of a high pitch tone that shifts more pften or something, rather than a weird squeal that is the same phrase after phrase. After I listened to the rest I was much more pleased and liked the whole piece a lot more than I did at first. Like I said though, it was just my first impression, and I'm not trying to shit on your work, just providing constructive criticism.
In the end, I think you did a great job and produced a really cool bit of work. It doesn't sound nearly as amateur as some other stuff I've heard, so special props for that. Keep it up.
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Couldn't do it. It was too strident. The sound was caustic almost, it was painful on my ears dude. I'm a mellow guy when it comes to music, and while I can handle some shrill noises, this was too much from the get-go. You need to make it less so from the start out, if you want to build up into it, sure, but don't just start in medias-res with music.
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Your kick mastering is really bad.
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I'm more into trance so I didn't like it until after 1:00 in or so, and then afterwards it was pretty nice. My only complaint is that all the different sounds seem really blurred together.
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More dynamics, I think. It could be a really interesting song if you introduced some flow to the noise level.
Also, the layering is pretty bad, and that descending siren sound is...out of place IMO.
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no real cohesion/flow/progression at all...
was just a bunch of sounds played at random intervals.
the high pitched ghost sound was really random and offputting.
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am I the only one that like this?
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