Hello TL!

My good friend and roommate recently got back into composing electronic music. He does a very good job of it (more so than his humility will let him say), so I figured it would help motivate him to continue composing if i posted one of his songs and let him know what kind of feedback it generated.

Here's the link, (updated version of the first one) Enjoy!

Here's the new one

An update

Entertaining

Canada793 Posts

March 16 2011 02:03 GMT

Its pretty good.... its missing something. Sounds more like in game music. Definitely a start.

JCpingpong

Canada35 Posts

March 16 2011 02:07 GMT

Sounds awesome, it sounds kind of like background music.

Atticus.axl

United States456 Posts

March 16 2011 02:16 GMT

On March 16 2011 11:03 Entertaining wrote:
Its pretty good.... its missing something. Sounds more like in game music. Definitely a start.

Yeah he was really into 90's/2000's video games. Most of his stuff sounds really ambient too. Thanks for the feedback ^_^

vileChAnCe

Canada525 Posts

March 16 2011 02:28 GMT

I like it alot whens he gonna make more :O keep us updated

synapse

China13814 Posts

March 16 2011 02:36 GMT

I really like it. I think an extra 30 seconds - minute of this track would make it a great song.

I'm a sucker for music like this.

wrags

United States379 Posts

March 16 2011 02:50 GMT

this is legit

edit: yea, i feel like the track ended a bit prematurely but overall pretty good

zulu_nation8

China26351 Posts

March 16 2011 04:10 GMT

Agreed with ending too soon, otherwise very good.

Atticus.axl

United States456 Posts

March 16 2011 04:43 GMT

Don't know about length, but here's an updated version he just did today.

Enjoy again!

wrags

United States379 Posts

March 16 2011 06:51 GMT

#10

sounds good, but still feels like he stops abruptly when it starts to build

edit: maybe cocktease would be a good name for this track

Atticus.axl

United States456 Posts

March 16 2011 10:49 GMT

#11

On March 16 2011 15:51 wrags wrote:
sounds good, but still feels like he stops abruptly when it starts to build

edit: maybe cocktease would be a good name for this track

hahaha

Navane

Netherlands2727 Posts

March 16 2011 14:54 GMT

#12

nice dude!

Hypnosis

United States2061 Posts

March 16 2011 16:04 GMT

#13

A A A A A A

G G G G
F
F
F

haha nice progression, simple yet good!

Atticus.axl

United States456 Posts

March 20 2011 23:07 GMT

#14

Hey again everyone! He's come out with another piece, different than the first, so I'll update the OP with a link. It's another short one, but it's great :D