The only real criticism I have is that it should have been longer. I'm sure Mr Bitter has more interesting things to say.
This was such a teaser. I wish it was much more specific on the actual work you do. I'm not an outsider so I see where the connections are and I understand the message. But I feel like outsiders may miss that part of the video and blow off the work as hard work instead of smart work that is also hard. "Work smart, not hard" Well starcraft is both hard and you gotta be smart.. this may make it sound like if you put in the time you'll be good, you have to put in smart time.
Anyway loved it, also leave the names/titles text up longer, i feel like it goes away very quickly.
Note. I'm just trying to be overly picky because the video was actually a 10/10 imo. Just trying to give any constructive ideas I can POSSIBLY think of.