rooms in text. I've got some ideas to build a forest and a beach. They don't have to be really huge though. Just 5 rooms will do. I'd like to know how you guys would describe them so I could have some clues to make rooms with good description. Your help would be greatly appreciated

e.g
Room 1
A darkened part of this huge forest. The trees stand ominously tilted inwards
toward the path casting a dark shadow over most of the area. A cool breeze blows
by rustling the leaves on the trees causing some to fall on the ground. A very
faint light finds its way through the almost unbreachable canopy giving the only
light here.
Room 2
A long row of trees stand beside a rarely used cart path. The trees are quite
old seeing that their trunks are very wide. They also tower high into the sky,
blocking most of the light from the sun from getting through. The ground here is
a nice, soft dirt. An occasional dead log lies on the path.