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Chapter Nine
His name was Benjamin. His legs no more, only tatters of flesh. He warns you of what is out there. An "invisible" beast. You hold his head up while he chokes on his blood.
“Listen,” he first began, “to me.” He coughed and surely there were blood.
You felt compassionate and compelled in hearing his story; for it is his story that will save your life. He opened his mouth but no words came out. You shook him gently with a whispered hello, followed by questions that would resound what he should have answered.
His eyes started to dart and roll back and you shook him again.
The lights above you began to dim. You look up at it and back down at the dying man.
“Please, I need to know what happened,” you said to him.
And with the last of his breath, he says, “there is a room, the combination is… BXT5505XXC… surveillance… will show you everything…” with that, he passed away. The light continue to dim yet it was never pitched black.
Poll: What do you want to do?
(Vote): Backtrack to the surv. room
(Vote): Keep going
Voting ends on 3/27 9KST
  
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Backtrack obviously. Watching an invisible beast on tape should be interesting.
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I decide to picked up the body ontop of floor is.
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search him for items and if there is none kik him couple of times till u get bored or the graphic fades away then go to surv. rm so u can control the remote turret machine and kill the invisible but not really invisible beast
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I don't even care if it kills us
I'm curious
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It'd be fun to just keep on going, but i guess it makes sense to follow the plot and head to the surv. room. : )
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Canada8035 Posts
Invisible beast capable of killing lots and lots of armed people with ease? It's obviously Predator.
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Don't go back you'll forget the code :o
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On March 23 2009 07:34 GhostKorean wrote:
Don't go back you'll forget the code :o
It's typed in a blog and stored on a server. Silly GhostKorean.
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I think your roman numerals are off..
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what happened to 9 and 10...
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lolol. i meant to put ix. MUST REQUIRE MOD TO EDIT!! D;
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On March 23 2009 11:21 Last Romantic wrote:
Fixed title.
That's either fail or win not sure.
Edit: Nevermind, has to be intentional. Hohohoho
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I wish we still had the option of going to sleep, since I bet hes getting a bit sleepy right now.
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LOL LR. NO. NOOOOO.
On March 23 2009 12:31 Sentenal wrote:
I wish we still had the option of going to sleep, since I bet hes getting a bit sleepy right now.
honestly that option was going to be on every chapter but people are like NOOOOOO.
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wat about hunger? doesn't he get the option to turn cannibalistic?
EDIT: i mean doesn't every man deserve the rite to become a cannibal in such a dire situation?
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On March 23 2009 13:18 R3condite wrote:
wat about hunger? doesn't he get the option to turn cannibalistic?
EDIT: i mean doesn't every man deserve the rite to become a cannibal in such a dire situation?
good point. which gives me idea for next chapter.
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Did you happen to see the continuations people did of your story?
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On March 23 2009 12:47 Raithed wrote:LOL LR. NO. NOOOOO. Show nested quote +On March 23 2009 12:31 Sentenal wrote:
I wish we still had the option of going to sleep, since I bet hes getting a bit sleepy right now. honestly that option was going to be on every chapter but people are like NOOOOOO.
 I think it should get brought back, especially since we are getting closer and closer to the monster.
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I'd prefer a use the save point option.
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China3094 Posts
On March 23 2009 14:37 Raithed wrote:
i did, i ignored it.
Personally, I liked theirs better.
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On March 23 2009 14:02 Raithed wrote:Show nested quote +On March 23 2009 13:18 R3condite wrote:
wat about hunger? doesn't he get the option to turn cannibalistic?
EDIT: i mean doesn't every man deserve the rite to become a cannibal in such a dire situation? good point. which gives me idea for next chapter.
the invisible monster ate the dudes LEGGGGGSGSSSSS
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thanks FA for the title change.
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this is intense
On March 23 2009 16:18 conCentrate9 wrote:
I'd prefer a use the save point option.
rofl yes!
maybe the MC becomes so hungry that he eats the monster...
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