I've posted some stuff here in the past, and gotten some very helpful criticism. This one is a progressive house track I made two days ago while laying home sick, and deadmau5 fans will probably notice the similarities to his Brazil track. Dunno what else to say, hope someone will enjoy it, also appreciate criticism be it negative or positive. :3
Also OT question, I've been looking to purchase some decent monitors in part just for listening purposes (EDM) and in part for monitoring/mixing/mastering bass lines and such properly, but I can only spend around ~$200 per speaker. Anyone got some advice?
Well first off let me say I love your kicks, they are very nice.
Recommendations:
Bring our your counterpoint/second melodies a bit more, they are so quiet. Plus you didn't even have like a second part in integrals, which you def need.
More stuff! I know this is prog house, but I started losing interest as you just went over the same chords again and again. You can either go the route where you just switch up the melodies a bit more or you can try to emulate more of what like mau5 does in brazil and maintain interest by constantly moving the filters. Listen to that track again and notice that there isn't a single part where he just sits on his progression, there is always a part either coming in or going out very gradually (but audibly).
oh, in integrals right after :44 I could swear that you hit a sour/wrong note
On the speakers I would say that any mainsteam monitor will serve you well. Your price pointis a bit on the low side and I would seriously recommend spending about 500 for the pair, as that seems to be the break point where speakers go from being crap they just call monitors to actually solid equipment for cheap (plus anything really small is not going to have the bass you want for electronic). M-audio/rokit/mackie/genelec and all that kind of stuff are all going to be good, I wouldn't deliberate too much just find some and get them.
On May 15 2011 02:12 ShoCkeyy wrote: Amazing stuff, I really like it. I wonder the same as wrags?
On May 15 2011 01:58 wrags wrote: sounds good, is that all you have or just all you have on soundcloud?
On May 15 2011 01:57 ZergoV wrote: Dude this is so Cool ! my ear are loving it ! seriously man this is good shit !
sorry for my english im french lol
Thanks!! Well, I have a tendency to remove some old stuff the minute I add something new, and due to 2 hard drive failures in less than a month I lost most of my projects. I'll upload stuff on occasion to my soundcloud though.
On May 15 2011 02:13 sob3k wrote: Well first off let me say I love your kicks, they are very nice.
Recommendations:
Bring our your counterpoint/second melodies a bit more, they are so quiet. Plus you didn't even have like a second part in integrals, which you def need.
More stuff! I know this is prog house, but I started losing interest as you just went over the same chords again and again. You can either go the route where you just switch up the melodies a bit more or you can try to emulate more of what like mau5 does in brazil and maintain interest by constantly moving the filters. Listen to that track again and notice that there isn't a single part where he just sits on his progression, there is always a part either coming in or going out very gradually (but audibly).
oh, in integrals right after :44 I could swear that you hit a sour/wrong note
On the speakers I would say that any mainsteam monitor will serve you well. Your price pointis a bit on the low side and I would seriously recommend spending about 500 for the pair, as that seems to be the break point where speakers go from being crap they just call monitors to actually solid equipment for cheap (plus anything really small is not going to have the bass you want for electronic). M-audio/rokit/mackie/genelec and all that kind of stuff are all going to be good, I wouldn't deliberate too much just find some and get them.
Thanks for the criticism/recommendations. You're right in that it certainly needs more elements right now. I listened over brazil and there's a lot more stuff going on with several plucks and moving filters so I'm gonna work on this track a little further. About that sour note it's probably synth clashing with delay.. Grrr.
and yeah I suspected 200 per speaker might be a bit on the low side, I might end up waiting and getting something in the 250-300 range, but right now I do everything by headphones which probably isn't the best idea. >_<
On May 15 2011 01:57 ZergoV wrote: Dude this is so Cool ! my ear are loving it ! seriously man this is good shit !
sorry for my english im french lol
Thanks!! Well, I have a tendency to remove some old stuff the minute I add something new, and due to 2 hard drive failures in less than a month I lost most of my projects. I'll upload stuff on occasion to my soundcloud though.
On May 15 2011 02:13 sob3k wrote: Well first off let me say I love your kicks, they are very nice.
Recommendations:
Bring our your counterpoint/second melodies a bit more, they are so quiet. Plus you didn't even have like a second part in integrals, which you def need.
More stuff! I know this is prog house, but I started losing interest as you just went over the same chords again and again. You can either go the route where you just switch up the melodies a bit more or you can try to emulate more of what like mau5 does in brazil and maintain interest by constantly moving the filters. Listen to that track again and notice that there isn't a single part where he just sits on his progression, there is always a part either coming in or going out very gradually (but audibly).
oh, in integrals right after :44 I could swear that you hit a sour/wrong note
On the speakers I would say that any mainsteam monitor will serve you well. Your price pointis a bit on the low side and I would seriously recommend spending about 500 for the pair, as that seems to be the break point where speakers go from being crap they just call monitors to actually solid equipment for cheap (plus anything really small is not going to have the bass you want for electronic). M-audio/rokit/mackie/genelec and all that kind of stuff are all going to be good, I wouldn't deliberate too much just find some and get them.
Thanks for the criticism/recommendations. You're right in that it certainly needs more elements right now. I listened over brazil and there's a lot more stuff going on with several plucks and moving filters so I'm gonna work on this track a little further. About that sour note it's probably synth clashing with delay.. Grrr.
and yeah I suspected 200 per speaker might be a bit on the low side, I might end up waiting and getting something in the 250-300 range, but right now I do everything by headphones which probably isn't the best idea. >_<
also remember that monitors are a one time purchase, if you treat them well you can use them for 20 years
On May 15 2011 01:50 hifriend wrote: I've posted some stuff here in the past, and gotten some very helpful criticism. This one is a progressive house track I made two days ago while laying home sick, and deadmau5 fans will probably notice the similarities to his Brazil track. Dunno what else to say, hope someone will enjoy it, also appreciate criticism be it negative or positive. :3
Also OT question, I've been looking to purchase some decent monitors in part just for listening purposes (EDM) and in part for monitoring/mixing/mastering bass lines and such properly, but I can only spend around ~$200 per speaker. Anyone got some advice?
I reccomend that you run down to 4sound on folkkungagatan and actually listen to the stuff before you buy. Any brands previously listed is bound to have a model that suits you. Also ask the personell there for assistance, they are great.
On May 15 2011 01:50 hifriend wrote: I've posted some stuff here in the past, and gotten some very helpful criticism. This one is a progressive house track I made two days ago while laying home sick, and deadmau5 fans will probably notice the similarities to his Brazil track. Dunno what else to say, hope someone will enjoy it, also appreciate criticism be it negative or positive. :3
Also OT question, I've been looking to purchase some decent monitors in part just for listening purposes (EDM) and in part for monitoring/mixing/mastering bass lines and such properly, but I can only spend around ~$200 per speaker. Anyone got some advice?
I reccomend that you run down to 4sound on folkkungagatan and actually listen to the stuff before you buy. Any brands previously listed is bound to have a model that suits you. Also ask the personell there for assistance, they are great.
indeed, that's where I bought my headphones and it's also right where I live. :D
Since you're both into production I have a question for you. I easily get really tired of working on my projects and pretty soon I'll end up hating listening to my scores over and over, so I find myself abandoning any given song I'm working on after a couple of hours rather than polishing them and working on finer details. Do you get that as well? Do you usually work on multiple songs at the same time?
i know people who do have multiple projects at the same time, but personally i generally only work on one project at a time and focus on that. But im only making singles atm, if i were doing a full album id probably do several tracks simultaniously to make sure they work with each other.
I have folders of ideas. I can work an entire night on something, listen to it the day after and condemn it as crap. But i save the project, and later on i can bring the ides in it into another project. It has happened multiple times that the lead that was missing in a proper production was to be found in one of the scrap projects done earlier.
Nowdays i get less crappy idea projects though. It comes with experience and Its all about making the foundation of the track exactly like you want it otherwise you will start going back and change stuff later and the song will derivate away from your initial concept which in turn can lead to you getting bored of the project. To avoid it, plan your work and make sure you nail the sound you want before you add in more stuff on top of it. Thats how i do atleast.
On May 15 2011 01:50 hifriend wrote: I've posted some stuff here in the past, and gotten some very helpful criticism. This one is a progressive house track I made two days ago while laying home sick, and deadmau5 fans will probably notice the similarities to his Brazil track. Dunno what else to say, hope someone will enjoy it, also appreciate criticism be it negative or positive. :3
Also OT question, I've been looking to purchase some decent monitors in part just for listening purposes (EDM) and in part for monitoring/mixing/mastering bass lines and such properly, but I can only spend around ~$200 per speaker. Anyone got some advice?
I reccomend that you run down to 4sound on folkkungagatan and actually listen to the stuff before you buy. Any brands previously listed is bound to have a model that suits you. Also ask the personell there for assistance, they are great.
indeed, that's where I bought my headphones and it's also right where I live. :D
Since you're both into production I have a question for you. I easily get really tired of working on my projects and pretty soon I'll end up hating listening to my scores over and over, so I find myself abandoning any given song I'm working on after a couple of hours rather than polishing them and working on finer details. Do you get that as well? Do you usually work on multiple songs at the same time?
Yes, but it doesn't really help for me. I probably have in excess of 500 song starts on my computer accumulated over several years.
The only way I finish tracks is if I use a friend and basically send the project file back and forth adding and revising each other's contributions.
On May 15 2011 02:39 WindOw wrote: I like the sound, but there's a lot missing to it ....could definitely be improved Anyway good job ^^
On May 15 2011 02:42 Starparty wrote:
On May 15 2011 01:50 hifriend wrote: I've posted some stuff here in the past, and gotten some very helpful criticism. This one is a progressive house track I made two days ago while laying home sick, and deadmau5 fans will probably notice the similarities to his Brazil track. Dunno what else to say, hope someone will enjoy it, also appreciate criticism be it negative or positive. :3
Also OT question, I've been looking to purchase some decent monitors in part just for listening purposes (EDM) and in part for monitoring/mixing/mastering bass lines and such properly, but I can only spend around ~$200 per speaker. Anyone got some advice?
I reccomend that you run down to 4sound on folkkungagatan and actually listen to the stuff before you buy. Any brands previously listed is bound to have a model that suits you. Also ask the personell there for assistance, they are great.
indeed, that's where I bought my headphones and it's also right where I live. :D
Since you're both into production I have a question for you. I easily get really tired of working on my projects and pretty soon I'll end up hating listening to my scores over and over, so I find myself abandoning any given song I'm working on after a couple of hours rather than polishing them and working on finer details. Do you get that as well? Do you usually work on multiple songs at the same time?
Yes, but it doesn't really help for me. I probably have in excess of 500 song starts on my computer accumulated over several years.
The only way I finish tracks is if I use a friend and basically send the project file back and forth adding and revising each other's contributions.
On May 15 2011 02:39 WindOw wrote: I like the sound, but there's a lot missing to it ....could definitely be improved Anyway good job ^^
On May 15 2011 02:42 Starparty wrote:
On May 15 2011 01:50 hifriend wrote: I've posted some stuff here in the past, and gotten some very helpful criticism. This one is a progressive house track I made two days ago while laying home sick, and deadmau5 fans will probably notice the similarities to his Brazil track. Dunno what else to say, hope someone will enjoy it, also appreciate criticism be it negative or positive. :3
Also OT question, I've been looking to purchase some decent monitors in part just for listening purposes (EDM) and in part for monitoring/mixing/mastering bass lines and such properly, but I can only spend around ~$200 per speaker. Anyone got some advice?
I reccomend that you run down to 4sound on folkkungagatan and actually listen to the stuff before you buy. Any brands previously listed is bound to have a model that suits you. Also ask the personell there for assistance, they are great.
indeed, that's where I bought my headphones and it's also right where I live. :D
Since you're both into production I have a question for you. I easily get really tired of working on my projects and pretty soon I'll end up hating listening to my scores over and over, so I find myself abandoning any given song I'm working on after a couple of hours rather than polishing them and working on finer details. Do you get that as well? Do you usually work on multiple songs at the same time?
Yes, but it doesn't really help for me. I probably have in excess of 500 song starts on my computer accumulated over several years.
The only way I finish tracks is if I use a friend and basically send the project file back and forth adding and revising each other's contributions.
On May 15 2011 02:39 WindOw wrote: I like the sound, but there's a lot missing to it ....could definitely be improved Anyway good job ^^
On May 15 2011 02:42 Starparty wrote:
On May 15 2011 01:50 hifriend wrote: I've posted some stuff here in the past, and gotten some very helpful criticism. This one is a progressive house track I made two days ago while laying home sick, and deadmau5 fans will probably notice the similarities to his Brazil track. Dunno what else to say, hope someone will enjoy it, also appreciate criticism be it negative or positive. :3
Also OT question, I've been looking to purchase some decent monitors in part just for listening purposes (EDM) and in part for monitoring/mixing/mastering bass lines and such properly, but I can only spend around ~$200 per speaker. Anyone got some advice?
I reccomend that you run down to 4sound on folkkungagatan and actually listen to the stuff before you buy. Any brands previously listed is bound to have a model that suits you. Also ask the personell there for assistance, they are great.
indeed, that's where I bought my headphones and it's also right where I live. :D
Since you're both into production I have a question for you. I easily get really tired of working on my projects and pretty soon I'll end up hating listening to my scores over and over, so I find myself abandoning any given song I'm working on after a couple of hours rather than polishing them and working on finer details. Do you get that as well? Do you usually work on multiple songs at the same time?
Yes, but it doesn't really help for me. I probably have in excess of 500 song starts on my computer accumulated over several years.
The only way I finish tracks is if I use a friend and basically send the project file back and forth adding and revising each other's contributions.
Nice track. Really diggin it. As far as monitors go, I use Rockit 5s. I DJ and I use them for mixing at home. Check em out. Pretty nice monitors for a decent price.
On May 15 2011 03:49 mikehall683 wrote: Coming from a fellow musician: very nice track! Deadmau5 would be proud :D
oh yeah deadmau5, king of progressive house, right lol? imo this pluck synth styled "progressive house" has to go, since it is just slowed down trance with those chordmelodies.
anyways, very solid and crips production quality but 10% inspiration.
oh edit: some inspiration from older tunes and newer ones:
oh and sasha & digweed are still the kings of progressive house (well Diggers is more of a tech-house guy), look through any of their tracklists for inspiration and influence.