I feel like your voice sounds a little robotic, as-you-tend-to-pro-nounce-ev-'ry-syll-a-ble-ex-act-ly-the-same-and-at-the-same-pace. ("This-is-the-new-sta-tus-quo.")
As an aside, which two prime numbers? Your post count is currently 38, so I'm running with 2 and 19 until you post again (3 and 13!) or say otherwise ^^
I'll be honest here man. Your beat, good. Your rap to accompany it was completely off and it didn't feel like it meshed at all. I think that your robotic style could be cool if it were paired with a different speed of music and if your vocals were louder to standout more against the beat. I also think that this kind of music really (REALLY REALLY) needs to have a seriously creative tone to it. You aren't playing an instrument, you aren't doing anything that I can't do with a computer, so you have to show me why you're Kanye and I'm not. Otherwise nicely done man.
Thanks Nahmu. I still have a lot to learn in terms of mastering and improving the way vocals pop over the track. Right now I am massively 'homebrew' lol.