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WINNERS HAVE BEEN ANNOUNCED

I now present the winners of Wax's Fanfic Contest, sponsored by Nerf NOW!!! The prompt for the contest was "ByuN's mysterious disappearance and return."

First place: ZigguratOfUr "Rebirth"—$50 and one month of TL+

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Rebirth

The depots rose eventually, locking the remaining SCVs in with the zerglings and banelings. ByuN stared at the remains of his mineral line for a few more seconds before GGing out. IEM São Paulo wasn’t going to be his.

The last few weeks had been difficult ones. His losses felt hopeless, and his wins felt undeserved. Sascri should have been an easy opponent, yet victory had slipped away all the same.

ByuN cuddled his puppy. He hadn’t felt this poorly about Starcraft since GSL Open Season 2. “I was playing Protoss back then,” he reminisced. “Now that was a nightmare.” In truth, it wasn’t the game itself that was troubling him these days. It was the stuff outside of it that poisoned his enjoyment.

ByuN’s phone rang. He looked at the caller ID. It was Gerrard. He considered not answering. The thought was very tempting, but he knew there would be a price to pay for doing so. Was it worth it? The phone rang again. ByuN answered.

“So you lost again.” said the unpleasant voice of Prime’s coach. “Why am I not surprised?”

“It’s only a foreign tournament,” answered ByuN. “The GSL qualifiers are coming up. I can get back into form before then. I will do better there.”

“You will try no doubt, just like you will also try to show good game for the fans, yes?” said Gerrard. “Luckily there is no one around with enough expectations to be disappointed in either.”

ByuN contained his rage in silence, aware that at the other end of the line Gerrard was waiting, hoping for an outburst, an opportunity to deliver more scathing comments. Five seconds went by. Then ten. Gerrard chuckled softly. “You know you have not done the team proud this year ByuN. It was all Maru, and with Maru gone who will step up to the plate? You? No, you do not have the skills anymore. So how exactly will you help the team?”

ByuN remained silent again, but he knew that this time the silence was not on his side. Gerrard was going to try to convince him again.

“Why won’t you participate in the tournament, ByuN. Do you not owe it to Prime? Owe it to me?” said Gerrard. “Rich gentlemen are willing to sponsor us in this.”

“There is no... honour in this underground cup.” said ByuN haltingly. “It is wrong.”

“Only the skillful have the luxury of choosing their stage.” said Gerrard. “You do not deserve the choice in such matters.”

“These rich men are Jopok.” eventually said ByuN. He had wanted to avoid bringing that up. He knew what was coming next. “Morally, I cannot work for them.”

“Morals?” hissed Gerrard. “You didn’t have any of those when you shamed me by match-fixing with CoCa at the ESV Weekly. And worse yet, getting caught. You better lose your new-found morals or lose your position on the team. And remember how much you owe me.”

Gerrard hung up before ByuN could reply, not that there was anything to reply to that. That’s how it always went. Over the past few weeks Gerrard had seized every opportunity to hound him about this underground tournament. The Jopok wagered incredible sums of money on these illicit tournaments. Many Jopok even had their own secret teams made from tempting successful players with money, or by recruiting the dregs of the Starcraft scene. ByuN had heard rumours of these dark tournaments even back in his NEX days, but had never believed in them.

ByuN turned to the ladder. It was the only thing to do. The other players would not practice with him, not with Gerrard this angry at him. And maybe, just maybe, if he found his skill again and made it to the GSL, Gerrard would be happy and would stop trying to get him to play in that tournament. ByuN lost the first five games to blink stalkers. And then he lost a game as long as the previous five to swarm hosts. ByuN decided to go to sleep.

***


When he woke up, there was a man sitting next to his bed.

“Who are you? How did you get in?” asked ByuN.

“Your coach was nice enough to lend us a key.” answered the man. ByuN knew Gerrard did not have the key to ByuN’s flat. Or shouldn’t have the key.

“Get out immediately. I will call the police.” said ByuN.

“You won’t.” said the man. “You know better.”

“Maybe I won’t, but I still won’t work for you.” said ByuN.

The man seemed to think a bit about, and then pulled out a card. “All right. I will leave now. Call this number if you change your mind. My master is not a patient man, and he badly needs a terran for his team.” The man placed the card on a table, and then calmly left.

ByuN knew this was too good to be true. The Jopok didn’t make house calls without a reason. He felt like he had just spotted a warp prism leaving his main without doing anything. There had to be a reason.

ByuN looked around. And then searched the apartment. They had taken his puppy.

***


One week later, ByuN was at the studio with Gerrard. He hadn’t been able to sleep. His practice had gotten worse. And yet he had to play.

“Relax ByuN.” said Gerrard slightly sarcastically. “You said you would be able to crush the GSL qualifiers after all. An underground qualifier like this means nothing to you. Nothing except for a lot of prestige for our sponsors and a lot of money for us.”

“My puppy...” started ByuN.

“Will be returned to you in due time once our friends are satisfied.” interrupted Gerrard. “Crush these amateurs and you’ll be fine.”
With deep misgivings, ByuN followed Gerrard to the player area. He didn’t recognize anyone, though many of the players seemed to be wearing odd masks with barcodes printed on them.

“Some players use their skills to gain fame in the public scene, as well as for making money in the underground scene,” explained Gerrard. “So they hide their faces behind barcode masks, so people don’t recognize them. Of course many of these underground circuit failures choose to wear the masks to intimidate their opponents. Don’t worry about it. Your seat is here.”

ByuN took his seat. The person seated next to him seemed to be a foreigner. He wore sharp sunglasses, and carried a wheel of Gouda with him. ByuN had the impression that he had seen him before.

“Taiwanese mercenary.” said Gerrard who was just as surprised as ByuN when the foreigner pulled out a second wheel of Gouda out of his bag along with his keyboard and mouse. “Some groups that don’t have the influence to secure a top player in Korea try to use their overseas connections. Now focus on the games.”

Despite ByuN’s nervousness, the first series went well. His opponent 10 pooled every game (even on Alterzim), and lost every game. “Now why would he go for such a bad build?” wondered ByuN.

The second series was even shorter. The opponent had monitor issues and tried to pause, but typed “pp” instead of “ppp”. Immediately men in suits appeared, seemingly out of thin air, and led him out of the room through a hidden door. ByuN glanced inquiringly at Gerrard, and was shocked to see the sweat beading down Gerrard’s forehead. Everyone in the room was deadly scared of those men (except for the foreigner who was too busy killing a zerg with mass carriers). Gerrard answered curtly: “Dark KeSPA. Don’t ask.”

The third and final opponent ByuN had to face looked vaguely familiar. He had seen him before. Maybe in Proleague? But now wasn’t the time to worry about others. He had to win for his puppy.

This opponent was a very good player playing a very aggressive roach style that threatened to overwhelm ByuN at every turn. Eventually ByuN prevailed more out of luck than anything else. He had won, and his puppy lived to fight another day. He picked up his mouse and keyboard and was about to leave after Gerrard when he saw his last opponent pleading at the feet of some Jopok. He was begging for another chance. The Jopok slowly shook his head and signalled to his henchmen; they surged forward and grabbed ByuN’s unfortunate opponent.

As they dragged him away ByuN’s opponent cried out: “I am Bear. I am the Unofficial World Champion, and nothing you do can change that. Someone, please, remember me!” ByuN sadly shook his head—was that to be his fate one day?

***


It was the day of the new year. It was the day of the Ro32 of the unnamed underground tournament. It was the day ByuN would get his puppy back.

ByuN’s first opponent was the foreigner. This time he had come equipped with a wheel of provolone, and was arguing with the referee, pointing out that ByuN was allowed his Pocari Sweat. Grudgingly the referee acquiesced to the provolone’s presence in the booth.

The first game was on Habitation Station. ByuN decided to open Gangnam terran, but found to his horror that there were three probes there waiting for him, trying to block his CC. Despite ByuN’s superior worker numbers the probes ducked and weaved preventing the CC from landing. Eventually they went away, and ByuN was able to start to mine. “It’s going to be alright.” thought ByuN. “He must have delayed his economy to do this.” Then the cannons started to shoot the SCVs from the low ground.

The next game was on Alterzim. ByuN was ready this time. His opponent was nothing but a cheeser. As long as he was prepared, there was nothing the opponent could do. The Taiwanese Protoss opened with a cannon rush, but this time ByuN held it with ease. He was slightly surprised by the follow-up oracles, but they too were eventually held off. The DTs succeeded in getting quite a few kills, but ByuN pushed them back. Then 20 void rays flew into his natural and destroyed everything.

ByuN was now facing elimination, so he watched his potential opponents’ games with greater intensity than he had ever done before. Both of his possible opponents were zergs wearing the barcode mask. They were both frighteningly quick at micro-ing their zergling, baneling and locusts. It was ZvZ, so he didn’t learn much, but there was something disquieting about one of the players’ zergling micro. It was hauntingly familiar.

Six hours later, ByuN was facing that zergling micro himself. It had a magnetic quality, an ability to enthral both opponents and viewers. And it was micro ByuN had often seen on the public stage. It was micro that had won a GSL more than a year ago. And it was micro that was outclassing ByuN today. ByuN was crying now, and he didn’t know if he was crying for himself and his puppy, or for the future of the Starcraft scene.

ByuN stumbled out of the studio. Gerrard had left the studio right as ByuN had left the game. He had to find him to ask for another chance. He would play in any tournament Gerrard asked him to. He would do everything for him without a question. He just needed another chance.

As he crossed the road, ByuN heard a barking sound. He turned around. It was his puppy. They were giving it back to him after all. Gerrard was giving him another chance. His puppy stumbled towards him from across the street.

Neither ByuN nor the puppy saw the car coming. They didn’t hear it accelerate right as the puppy crossed the road. But ByuN saw the car’s front wheel strike his puppy. He heard the sickening crunch of his puppy striking the road and bouncing down the street. He heard Gerrard’s bitter laughter as the car rolled away. And he heard his own despair resonating across the city.

***


“Are you ByuN?”

ByuN looked up. There was a Chinese man standing there. He didn’t know any Chinese men. It couldn’t be him he was talking to.

“You are ByuN.”

ByuN looked up again. The Chinese man was still there. Maybe he was talking to him. Or maybe not. Did it matter?

“What have you been doing over the past few days? You are filthy.”

ByuN couldn’t remember the past few days. He couldn’t remember the past few minutes even. There had been a Chinese man he thought. Or maybe there hadn’t been.

“I know what happened at the underground tournament ByuN. I am sorry for you and the others.”

The Chinese man that might not be there was sorry for him. Sorry for what? ByuN tried to remember, and then regretted his decision immediately. There was nothing to remember. It was safer not to remember.

“You must shake yourself out of it ByuN. I know it’s hard, but we can’t keep letting things like this happen. We have to clean up Starcraft ByuN. We have to act.”

The Chinese man was reminding him of uncomfortable things. Of people he knew. Of things he had done. Of how he had once loved Starcraft.

“I will sponsor your myself ByuN. We will join their underground league and destroy it utterly from within. I have introduced others into their league, but I still need a champion to succeed. You can be that champion ByuN. I know you have the potential.”

Potential. He had thought he had had that once. Before Gerrard. Before everything had happened.

“We will bring them to justice ByuN. All of them. No matter how long it takes. And then you will be able to get away from the dark side of Starcraft. You will be able to return to the Starcraft scene we love.”

ByuN looked up, and kept looking up. The man was extending a hand. ByuN considered it for a while, and then took it. Starcraft still needed him, and he still needed Starcraft.


2nd place: Seeker "A Drink to Remember"—$30 and a pencil

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A Drink to Remember

“Thanks for everything,” Choya stated as he shook MarineKing’s hand. “It was a pleasure,” replied MarineKing as he hoisted his bag over his shoulders and put on his shoes. Both men bitterly looked in opposite directions as MarineKing prepared to leave the MVP team house for the last time. As he opened the doors and stepped outside, MarineKing pondered just where everything went wrong. He had such great plans that were supposed to establish an unbeatable legacy… But after everything that went down, the only thing he wanted to cross off his list was to hit nearest bar scene and get magnificently wasted off his ass.

MarineKing found the nearest bar in the area through his phone and headed over there immediately. When he got there, he opened the doors and went inside. The bar was nearly empty aside from a couple of people already taking up several tables. Realizing he needed to be alone to gather his thoughts, MarineKing walked over to the counter, and grabbed one of the stools near where the bartender was working.

The bartender looked up from the register and addressed MarineKing. “Sir, what will you be having?” MarineKing responded by putting his arms on the table and burying his face in his hands. “Whatever you recommend that will allow a man to forget about the past five years of his life…” At this, the bartender chuckled and reached down toward the bottom shelf. “So you’ll have the ‘Secret Combo’ order #5 then.”

As the bartender took out a giant glass and began pouring MarineKing his drink, MarineKing suddenly felt movement to his left as the stool next to him moved and a man sat down. The man took his seat, placed his jacket on the counter, quickly ordered his own drink, and then took a deep sigh. MarineKing turned for a split second to his left, nodded his head to address the man’s presence, then turned back to his own drink. Suddenly MarineKing felt movement again and noticed out of the corner of his eye that the man next to him had turned towards his direction. At this, MarineKing smelled a familiar scent that he had once smelled a long time ago.

“Whoa! A #5 SC combo? Haven’t had one of those for myself in a while. What’s the occasion? A bad breakup or something?” MarineKing laughed out loud. “Ha, I wish... I wish it was about a bad breakup… Or a death of a loved one… Or a terminal disease revelation from my doctor… Anything would be better than what I’m feeling right now…”

“Holy shit, something terrible must have happened,” the man said as he received his drink. “Want to talk about it?” MarineKing didn’t respond and just continued to down his drink. Realizing that MarineKing had no intention of responding, the man initiated again. “I know how you feel. When you feel like utter shit, the only thing you want to do his drink away your sorrows… But you know,” the man said as he reached out to grab his own glasss, “Nothing beats having a drink with a stranger you just met at a bar and spilling your guts out to him.”

With that, the man raised his glass and pointed towards MarineKing. “To you, good sir. To you…” Realizing that the man had no intention of leaving him alone, MarineKing raised his glass and clinked with the man’s glass. “Down the hatch!” The man popped his head back and downed his drink in one gulp; MarineKing followed suit.

After finishing his drink, MarineKing placed his glass down and let out a deep sigh. Since he had already consumed such a large amount of alcohol, MarineKing’s felt his body’s tension just fly away. Smiling for the first time in ages, he turned towards the man and said, “You know what? I’ll take you up on what you just said. Why the fuck not you know? Why not spill my guts out to a complete stranger?”

“That’s the spirit!” The man firmly slapped MarineKing on his back and looked him straight in his eyes. “So, spill. What’s going through that head of yours?” MarineKing arched his back, combed through his hair with his right hand, and briefly closed his eyes. “Shit man… Where do I begin…? I guess I’ll start at around four years ago, right as 2012 was ending.” MarineKing gestured over the bartender to pour him another drink before resuming his story. As the bartender headed over with the giant pitcher, MarineKing realized that he could smell that familiar scent again. Shrugging it off as insignificant however, MarineKing proceeded with his tale.

“In order to understand this story, you should probably know that I was a professional StarCraft II player. In 2012, I was, as everyone would say, ‘the shit’. I had it all. Money, fame, fortune, you name it, I had it. I didn’t think anything in the world could bring me down… But I was wrong. After my second MLG championship win… Everything just fell apart….” The bartender poured MarineKing his second glass. He grabbed it and drank half of it in one gulp. He wiped away the remains on his mouth with his left hand and continued talking. “I had a teammate, his ID was ‘ByuN’… Or ‘GhostKing’… I think it’s back to ByuN now…. Or whatever the fuck he calls himself these days…. Anyways, my teammate was… starting to completely overshadow me… He was slowly becoming… ‘The real shit’.”

The man patted MarineKing on his back. “So your teammate was on the verge of stealing the spotlight.” “Exactly,” MarineKing replied. “My former teammate, Polt, had already done it to me once. I just couldn’t afford to let it happen again… I just had no other choice… I had to stop him… I had to make him disappear… At all costs…” The man stopped patting MarineKing and look him in the eyes. “What did you do?”

“What else could I do? I pulled the most despicable and humanly degrading move anyone could do. I collaborated with my head coach and worked together to try to bring him down. The coach sold his computer without his knowledge. I tried to release his puppy outside to see if it would get lost. We fed him false information and taught him useless strategies to try to sabotage his games… Nothing worked. The guy was completely unfazed… Hyun-woo was a beast. Nothing could break that concentration of his…” Suddenly, MarineKing stopped talking, and just stared at his drink.

“And then?” The man asked. MarineKing waited a long time before finally answering. “And then… I sank to rock bottom. I pulled him aside one day and gave him an offer I knew he couldn’t refuse…” The man leaned back and started stroking his chin. “What did you offer him?” MarineKing once again paused for a duration before giving a response. “I… I told him… That I would offer him half of my championship winnings if he agreed to stop practicing… He would get the money as long as he… Intentionally stopped working hard and gradually allowed his own skills to deteriorate…”

“Holy shit! Half your winnings?! That sounds like a fuckton of money…” MarineKing shook his head as he chuckled sadly. “It really was. I foolishly thought that I would make four times as much in due time just as long as he went away from the scene… God… If I had only stopped there…” “There’s more?” The man asked curiously. “Yeah, there’s more…” MarineKing replied. “I had to make sure there was no chance that he would go back on his promise. So I spent the other half of my winnings bribing two celebrities to sleep with him. Women and money… What more could a gamer nerd want in life, you know?

“Damn… Who were they?” MarineKing drained the rest of his glass before talking. “They were nation sensation women that every man dreamed about. Superstar Lee Hyo-ri and kpopstar idol, Hyuna.” The man spat out the drink he had just sipped. “Holy shit! What?! Are you for real?” MarineKing nodded his head. “Yeah, I’m for real. And it worked flawlessly too. They both secretly met him at a luxurious hotel and spent the night with him… Lucky bastard…”

MarineKing got the attention of the bartender and signaled for a third drink. The man signaled for his second. “It worked like a fucking charm. After a 3rd/4th place finish at the 2012 GSL Season 3, ByuN literally just ‘disappeared’ from the scene. He packed up his shit and moved out of the team house. He stopped showing up for tournaments. People started forgetting about his existence… It was all supposed to be the perfect plan…” MarineKing once again stopped talking. He closed his eyes and brought his palm to his face. The man looked at MarineKing and asked his question again. “What happened? Did something go wrong with your former teammate?”

“No… Nothing went wrong with him… Everything went wrong with me… I couldn’t live up to my own expectations… I fucked up hard… I pretty much fell into a slump that I never got out of. I had one ‘miracle run’ in 2014 and that was it… I was a failure in everyone’s eyes… Joining a new team didn’t help… I had no choice… I retired and left for good…”

At this, the man put his glass down and put his arm around MarineKing. “I’m terribly sorry to hear that. It’s rough when shit goes down… Do you by any chance, think karma had something to do with it?” MarineKing once again laughed out loud. “Of course karma had every-fucking-thing to do with it. I threw away my own integrity as a human being and a professional gamer for my own selfish pride and desires. I screwed over a precious friend and teammate all for the sake of my own reputation… If only I could see him again… Let him know how sorry I am… Let him know how foolish I feel for what I said and did… God damn it… I deserve every last bit of this…” With that MarienKing grabbed his glass and in one gulp, downed his third serving.

“Do you know what I got in my mailbox recently? A letter from him… Date was June 18, 2016. In the letter… He said he had gotten into Code S for the 2016 GSL Season 2 tournament… He also wrote about how he has been killing it in Legacy of the Void… His final comment was that he would stop one day to see me… As a champion…”

“Ahh… I see… But… Doesn’t that break his promise? Doesn’t coming back to the scene go against the terms set forth in your deal with him?” MarineKing took a long and deep sigh before giving his response. “No, it doesn’t. Because the deal was that he would stay away as long as I remained relevant… I became a nobody as time went on… So he was more than in his rights to come back… And I heard on the news that… He won the most recent GSL and is now considered one of the greatest in SC2 right now…” MarineKing laughed out loud in despair and bitterness. “How ironic… Fate really is a cruel thing…”

The man nodded his head and once again patted MarineKing on his back. “I hear you buddy… Fate really is a cruel and harsh thing… Reality is something that we can never avoid…” MarineKing didn’t respond. He was far too depressed at this point to even say anything. Realizing this, the man decided it was his turn to do the talking. “Listen, friend… I can’t tell you that what you did wasn’t wrong… But from what I hear, it sounds like everything worked out for that ByuN guy. So… Maybe you should just be happy for him. And happy for yourself too! You had the privilege of getting to know this man. Sure, you threw it away because of your own greed but… I’m sure wherever he is, he has already forgiven you and just wants the best for you…”

MarineKing sat up and looked over to the man. “Yeah… I guess… Well, let’s stop talking about this. I just realized I never even asked about you. What do you do? How’s your life?” The man smiled and placed his hands on the counter. “Well, I can tell you without any doubt that my life is absolutely terrific right now. I went through a long period at one point in my life where I felt small and insignificant. But I just recently won a tournament and am feeling like I’m on top of the world. I’m pulling so much tail these days that it’s not even funny. I guess you could say, my life is perfect…”

MarineKing smiled and nodded his head in agreement. “Well, at least one of us is enjoying life.” At this, the man chuckled and and grabbed his drink. “You bet. Here I am at a bar with a complete stranger, and I don’t feel anything but happiness and satisfaction. I know you’ve gone through some rough times friend, but… Don’t worry. I’m sure everything will work itself out.” The man drained his glass and got up from his seat. “I came here because I wanted to meet up with an old friend and patch things up but... I think I’m good now. It was great to meet you. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors. In fact, you know what? The drinks are on me. Take care of yourself.”

With that, the person slapped down a 50,000₩ bill, put his jacket back on, and walked out of the bar without looking back. MarineKIng stared down at the bill, flabbergasted at such a generous tip. He quickly got up from his seat and ran out of the bar to see if he could track down that man and find out his identity. But as he stepped outside, tried to look left and right vigorously, he could see that it was of no use; the man had disappeared with no having left no traces behind.

Confused and bewildered, MarineKing walked back into the bar and took his seat at the counter again. As he swilled his drink and got ready to take his final gulp, he abruptly stopped. He put his glass down, turned toward the seat that the man had previously sat on, and stared at it for a good ten seconds without saying anything else. He had suddenly remembered where that familiar scent had come from: The Prime team house.

Suddenly, MarineKing dove over the counter and grabbed the bartender’s left arm. “Excuse me, but do you know who that person was that was sitting next to me just now?!” Although the bartender took a step back from this surprise action from MarineKing, he quickly gathered himself again and resumed wiping down the dirty glasses with his cloth. “Of course I know who that was,” stated the bartender in disbelief at MarineKing’s ignorance. “That was the most recent GSL champion and greatest LotV player to date, Byun Hyun-woo.”

At these words, MarineKing released the bartender’s arm and slowly sank back into his seat. He sat there quietly without saying another word for a good five minutes. During those five minutes, it was almost as if MarineKing’s entire life was flashing before his eyes. Then, he got up, finished his drink, and prepared to leave. As he put his hand into his pocket to take out his phone, he suddenly noticed something in there that he hadn’t felt before. He pulled out something from his pocket and looked at it; it was a picture.

At the sight of this picture, MarineKing lost all the feeling in his body and slumped down to the ground in agony and disbelief. The little parting gift from ByuN was too much for him to handle. The picture showed the one thing MarineKing never thought he would see in a million years: a picture of Lee Hyo-ri, Hyuna, and ByuN’s puppy, all simultaneously licking the GSL championship trophy. On the picture, in big black, bold letters were the words: You are forgiven. Suck on this. Love, ByuN


3rd place: Thouhastmail "50 Shades of Adept"—$15 and I'll follow you on Twitter

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50 Shades of Adept

The booth beside King Sejong Station was silent and dark. there were no shades of adept nor any widow mines and the hill was between two Destructible Rocks. On the corner of the map there was the calm shadow of command centre and a supply depot, made of H-beams and iron panel, blocking the narrow passage of the first base. The Korean and the boy with him sat at the booth in the shade, outside the station. It was a warm muggy August day and the weather was bringing queer atmosphere between two men in the booth. Though both were recognising awkward atmosphere surrounding them, the silence was broken only by clicking noise of marines.

The odd ambience was soon stopped. "What should we do?" the little boy asked. He had taken off his coat and put it behind the gaming chair.

"It's pretty hot," the man said. "Let's do something we’re good at."

"Sounds good to me." the little boy whispered to the man.

"You mean, you guys are going to do that?" a KeSPA referee asked from the doorway of the booth.

"Yes. We’ll do That."

The referee disappeared with an inscrutable smile, looking at the man and the boy. The boy was looking off at the line of Fog of War. his cheek was flushing whilst the map was blue and dark.

"It looks like Nada’s body." the boy said.

"I don’t see it," the man microed his troops.

"Sure, because you wouldn't have seen it."

"I might have," the man said.

The boy stared at the man’s face. "You wouldn’t have, just like you haven’t seen me for 10 months."

The man said. "Does that matter?"

"Sure, especially for me."

"Why?"

“10 months is a plenty time to give birth.”

“What the—”

"Just saying."

"I don't know," the man answered. "Is it that important to you?"

"Yes, of course! "

"You gents want some Pocari Sweat?" asked the referee.

"Yes, with Tropicana Sparkuling."

"It literally tastes like sweat," the boy said and put the bottle down.

"That's exactly how our life tastes."

"Yes," said the boy. "Yes, you're right. Especially the things you've wanted so long for, like your return."

"Cut it out."

"You started it," the boy said. "It was YOU who started it."

"Okay, my bad. Now let's have a fun time."

"All right. Let’s have a fun time. First, let me take my shirt off –it`s hot like hell– I’d like to wear nothing but T-shirts. OK, now that's better. What were we talking about?”

“Talking about Fog of War and sweat.”

“Yes, Fog of War. Doesn't that look like NaDa’s body?"

"But NaDa’s body is sleek, streamlined and curved; whilst the fog is not."

"I want to see something new. Maybe that's all we need to do now. You know— looking for new things?"

"I guess so."

The men used scanner sweep across the fog.

"It`s such a lovely map," The boy said. "They don't suddenly vanish–I just meant the hills and Vespene Geysers of the map. Could we have another Tropicana Sparkuling?"

"Why not?"

The warm breath of the men blew each other’s cheek.

"It’s nice and cool," the man said.

"So sparkuling." the boy said.

"It's really nothing but a very simple promise, Byun" the boy continued. "You don’t have to guarantee anything. Just give me your word."

The man looked at the ground the Gyuri’s legs rested on.

"I know you won't give a damn about this trivial thing, Byun. It's literally NOTHING. All I want is your word that you won’t leave me and this scene."

The man did not say anything.

"I'll go with you, stay with you, and watch everything with you all the time. Just come back and play SC2 –everything will be right then."

"After then?"

"We'll be happy ever after. Just like we were before."

"Why on earth you think so?"

"Look, I have won two premier tournaments, whilst you’ve got nothing; that's the only thing that bothers us. It's the only thing that burdens us."

The man looked at the boy’s face, put his hand out and grap the boy’s ears.

"And you think then we Terrans will be all right."

"I’m sure we will. You don't have to be afraid. I know you’ll get GSL trophy when you come back.”

"Okay then" said the man. "And we’ll be that happy."

"Well," the boy said, "If you don't want to, you don't have to. I wouldn't compel my ideas on you. But I know it's the best way for us to take."

"But you really want me to do it?"

"My only wish is to watch you winning premier tournaments. But I don't want you to do it if you don't really want to."

"And if I return, you’d be happy and, and–you'll look at me?"

"Absolutely. I’m definitely going to watch over you." "And Ren, of course." the boy suddenly added.

"I see. But if I return, people would mock my teamless situation. And, and– would you still look at me?"

"Yes, but let’s keep it aside; do not worry. Just think about bright future and all the moneys you’re gonna get”

"Then I won’t do it. Because you don't care about me."

"What do you mean?"

"You only care about my prize."

"Well, I do care about you."

"Oh, yes. I’m sure you do care about me.”

"I don't want you to do it if you feel that way."

The man stood up and left the booth. 50 shades of Adpet glided across the field and he saw his precious workers slayed by them. Somehow, that touched a raw nerve of him; all the frustrations and smothered anger suddenly broke out.

"This is all we got." he shouted. "We Terrans could have everything with Marauders but every day David Kim make it more impossible."

"Sorry. What did you say?"

"I said we could have EVERYTHING."

"Still we can."

"No, we cannot."

"We can have the Blizzcon."

"No, we can't. GSL nor SSL isn't ours anymore."

"Come back in the booth," The boy said. "Let’s keep doing what we’re doing."

"I just got to know. I can see things now."

"All right. But you've got to know what—"

"I realise," the man said. "Maybe we should just stop talking. I`m gonna crush that fxxking protoss."

They sat down at the chair and looked the fog on the dark, shady side of the map.

"Would you do something for me now?” the man asked.

The boy exactly knew what the man wanted, though he never heard anything. He picked a mouse and keyboard up and carried them to the man.

"Do you feel better?" the boy asked.

"Couldn’t be better" the man said. "Hell, it’s about time."


Congratulations to all the winners! I want to give a big "thank you" to everyone who participated! Also, a huge "screw you" to everyone who didn't. Finally, I'd like to thank Nerf NOW!!! for supporting us and letting us show you good fanfics. Please visit the site at (www.nerfnow.com), if you like fan service about video games disguised as a webcomic.



Original posting

Passion is a word that gets thrown around heedlessly in the StarCraft community, but fans have never been called upon to truly prove their devotion. Until now.

There's only one mark of genuine, unbreakable fandom: the willingness to share your god-awful fanfiction on the internet. And so, I'm proud to announce the inaugural Wax's Fanfiction Contest, sponsored by Nerf NOW!!, a gaming webcomic that sometimes draws really cute Zerglings (www.nerfnow.com).

The prompt for this contest is: ByuN's mysterious disappearance and return.

Here are the details for the contest:
  • Where to submit/deadline: Post entries as a reply to this thread. Entries must be submitted by September 27th, TeamLiquid time. Participants are limited to a single entry.
  • Length/format: There is no word limit for this contest. Just keep in mind that if your fanfic is too long, no one will read it. The use of images is prohibited. Explicit sexual content is not allowed. Tasteful erotica is permitted, but no straight-up smut.
  • Judging: Judged by solely by myself (Wax), but I'm definitely going to be heavily influenced by public opinion.
  • Sponsored by: Nerf NOW!! (www.nerfnow.com)
  • Prizes:
    • First place: $50 + mystery prize
    • Second place: $30 + mystery prize
    • Third place: $15 + mystery prize

  • ALL THE ABOVE ARE SUBJECT TO CHANGE FOR NO REASON

I'm cheering for you guys, so please show me good g̶a̶m̶e̶s̶ fanfics.


Updates
  • 9-20-16: WE'VE SOLD OUT. We're now sponsored by Nerf NOW!!! (www.nerfnow.com). Prizes have been added.
  • 9-20-16: Addition to length/format section: Explicit sexual content is not allowed. Tasteful erotica is permitted, but no straight-up smut.
  • 9-20-16: Change to Prizes section: Mystery prize for the winner.
AdministratorHey HP can you redo everything youve ever done because i have a small complaint?
Edpayasugo
Profile Joined April 2013
United Kingdom2216 Posts
September 19 2016 15:26 GMT
#2
haha, this sounds good!
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Thouhastmail
Profile Joined March 2015
Korea (North)876 Posts
September 19 2016 15:29 GMT
#3
my subtitle will be '50 shades of Adepts'
"Morality is simply the attitude we adopt towards people we personally dislike"
Seeker *
Profile Blog Joined April 2005
Where dat snitch at?37044 Posts
September 19 2016 15:32 GMT
#4
Meh... I guess I can take a break from Plexa & Waffles to do this for a bit
ModeratorPeople ask me, "Seeker, what are you seeking?" My answer? "Sleep, damn it! Always sleep!"
TL+ Member
BLinD-RawR
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
ALLEYCAT BLUES50587 Posts
September 19 2016 15:48 GMT
#5
someone will end up doing "inno is love, inno is life"
Brood War EICWoo Jung Ho, never forget.| Twitter: @BLinDRawR
Makro
Profile Joined March 2011
France16890 Posts
September 19 2016 16:08 GMT
#6
inno x byun would have been a possibility
Matthew 5:10 "Blessed are those who are persecuted because of shitposting, for theirs is the kingdom of heaven".
TL+ Member
DinoMight
Profile Blog Joined June 2012
United States3725 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-19 16:58:36
September 19 2016 16:58 GMT
#7
On September 20 2016 00:23 Waxangel wrote:


Updates
  • 9-20-16: Addition to length/format section: Explicit sexual content is not allowed. Tasteful erotica is permitted, but no straight-up smut.



BAHAHAHA
"Wtf I come back and find myself in camp DinoMight all of a sudden, feels weird man." -Wombat_NI
itsjustatank
Profile Blog Joined November 2010
Hong Kong9162 Posts
September 19 2016 17:50 GMT
#8
patiently waiting for jaedong x lomo part two alternate universe
Photographer"nosotros estamos backamos" - setsuko
Heartland
Profile Blog Joined May 2012
Sweden24592 Posts
September 19 2016 19:03 GMT
#9
Tasteful erotica is my middle name.
Thouhastmail
Profile Joined March 2015
Korea (North)876 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-19 19:45:05
September 19 2016 19:04 GMT
#10
Nay, needs more time.
"Morality is simply the attitude we adopt towards people we personally dislike"
Waxangel
Profile Blog Joined September 2002
United States33492 Posts
September 19 2016 20:11 GMT
#11
Update: I've sold out and can offer prizes. SHIT'S GETTING REAL.
AdministratorHey HP can you redo everything youve ever done because i have a small complaint?
Aeromi
Profile Blog Joined August 2012
France14461 Posts
September 19 2016 20:20 GMT
#12
WHY DOES WAX SUCKS A BIT


ByuN was looking for the Bisu article but he was furious that you are a slacker then come back to win gsl. Fin.
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Blargh
Profile Joined September 2010
United States2103 Posts
September 19 2016 20:21 GMT
#13
Aww shit yo. Hey, at least you picked about the most innocent sponsor ever. Those comics are cute.
SetGuitarsToKill
Profile Blog Joined December 2013
Canada28396 Posts
September 19 2016 20:35 GMT
#14
NerfNow is super cute. Good sponsor

[image loading]
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ZigguratOfUr
Profile Blog Joined April 2012
Iraq16955 Posts
September 19 2016 20:39 GMT
#15
Time to start writing, though Aeromi's submission looks very difficult to beat.
NinjaToss
Profile Blog Joined October 2015
Austria1383 Posts
September 19 2016 20:48 GMT
#16
hell, it's about time to get writing
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opisska
Profile Blog Joined February 2011
Poland8852 Posts
September 19 2016 21:23 GMT
#17
Why the hell does someone who is not wax throw actual money on this? I had no idea making webcomics is such a cash cow .... well If I had, I would have to deal with the two small problems, namely that I'm not funny and can't draw, but ...
"Jeez, that's far from ideal." - Serral, the king of mild trashtalk
TL+ Member
stuchiu
Profile Blog Joined June 2010
Fiddler's Green42661 Posts
September 19 2016 21:25 GMT
#18
Now I'm not trying to influence people, but I suspect a fanfiction about how Has is a superior human to every other SC2 player currently playing would do well.
Moderator
shiroiusagi
Profile Blog Joined September 2011
SoCal, USA3955 Posts
September 19 2016 21:33 GMT
#19
How did I just see this.
Graphics@shiroiusagi_ | shiroiusagi.net
Thouhastmail
Profile Joined March 2015
Korea (North)876 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-25 13:38:51
September 19 2016 21:41 GMT
#20
50 Shades of Adept

The booth beside King Sejong Station was silent and dark. there were no shades of adept nor any widow mines and the hill was between two Destructible Rocks. On the corner of the map there was the calm shadow of command centre and a supply depot, made of H-beams and iron panel, blocking the narrow passage of the first base. The Korean and the boy with him sat at the booth in the shade, outside the station. It was a warm muggy August day and the weather was bringing queer atmosphere between two men in the booth. Though both were recognising awkward atmosphere surrounding them, the silence was broken only by clicking noise of marines.

The odd ambience was soon stopped. "What should we do?" the little boy asked. He had taken off his coat and put it behind the gaming chair.

"It's pretty hot," the man said. "Let's do something we’re good at."

"Sounds good to me." the little boy whispered to the man.

"You mean, you guys are going to do that?" a KeSPA referee asked from the doorway of the booth.

"Yes. We’ll do That."

The referee disappeared with an inscrutable smile, looking at the man and the boy. The boy was looking off at the line of Fog of War. his cheek was flushing whilst the map was blue and dark.

"It looks like Nada’s body." the boy said.

"I don’t see it," the man microed his troops.

"Sure, because you wouldn't have seen it."

"I might have," the man said.

The boy stared at the man’s face. "You wouldn’t have, just like you haven’t seen me for 10 months."

The man said. "Does that matter?"

"Sure, especially for me."

"Why?"

“10 months is a plenty time to give birth.”

“What the—”

"Just saying."

"I don't know," the man answered. "Is it that important to you?"

"Yes, of course! "

"You gents want some Pocari Sweat?" asked the referee.

"Yes, with Tropicana Sparkuling."

"It literally tastes like sweat," the boy said and put the bottle down.

"That's exactly how our life tastes."

"Yes," said the boy. "Yes, you're right. Especially the things you've wanted so long for, like your return."

"Cut it out."

"You started it," the boy said. "It was YOU who started it."

"Okay, my bad. Now let's have a fun time."

"All right. Let’s have a fun time. First, let me take my shirt off –it`s hot like hell– I’d like to wear nothing but T-shirts. OK, now that's better. What were we talking about?”

“Talking about Fog of War and sweat.”

“Yes, Fog of War. Doesn't that look like NaDa’s body?"

"But NaDa’s body is sleek, streamlined and curved; whilst the fog is not."

"I want to see something new. Maybe that's all we need to do now. You know— looking for new things?"

"I guess so."

The men used scanner sweep across the fog.

"It`s such a lovely map," The boy said. "They don't suddenly vanish–I just meant the hills and Vespene Geysers of the map. Could we have another Tropicana Sparkuling?"

"Why not?"

The warm breath of the men blew each other’s cheek.

"It’s nice and cool," the man said.

"So sparkuling." the boy said.

"It's really nothing but a very simple promise, Byun" the boy continued. "You don’t have to guarantee anything. Just give me your word."

The man looked at the ground the Gyuri’s legs rested on.

"I know you won't give a damn about this trivial thing, Byun. It's literally NOTHING. All I want is your word that you won’t leave me and this scene."

The man did not say anything.

"I'll go with you, stay with you, and watch everything with you all the time. Just come back and play SC2 –everything will be right then."

"After then?"

"We'll be happy ever after. Just like we were before."

"Why on earth you think so?"

"Look, I have won two premier tournaments, whilst you’ve got nothing; that's the only thing that bothers us. It's the only thing that burdens us."

The man looked at the boy’s face, put his hand out and grap the boy’s ears.

"And you think then we Terrans will be all right."

"I’m sure we will. You don't have to be afraid. I know you’ll get GSL trophy when you come back.”

"Okay then" said the man. "And we’ll be that happy."

"Well," the boy said, "If you don't want to, you don't have to. I wouldn't compel my ideas on you. But I know it's the best way for us to take."

"But you really want me to do it?"

"My only wish is to watch you winning premier tournaments. But I don't want you to do it if you don't really want to."

"And if I return, you’d be happy and, and–you'll look at me?"

"Absolutely. I’m definitely going to watch over you." "And Ren, of course." the boy suddenly added.

"I see. But if I return, people would mock my teamless situation. And, and– would you still look at me?"

"Yes, but let’s keep it aside; do not worry. Just think about bright future and all the moneys you’re gonna get”

"Then I won’t do it. Because you don't care about me."

"What do you mean?"

"You only care about my prize."

"Well, I do care about you."

"Oh, yes. I’m sure you do care about me.”

"I don't want you to do it if you feel that way."

The man stood up and left the booth. 50 shades of Adpet glided across the field and he saw his precious workers slayed by them. Somehow, that touched a raw nerve of him; all the frustrations and smothered anger suddenly broke out.

"This is all we got." he shouted. "We Terrans could have everything with Marauders but every day David Kim make it more impossible."

"Sorry. What did you say?"

"I said we could have EVERYTHING."

"Still we can."

"No, we cannot."

"We can have the Blizzcon."

"No, we can't. GSL nor SSL isn't ours anymore."

"Come back in the booth," The boy said. "Let’s keep doing what we’re doing."

"I just got to know. I can see things now."

"All right. But you've got to know what—"

"I realise," the man said. "Maybe we should just stop talking. I`m gonna crush that fxxking protoss."

They sat down at the chair and looked the fog on the dark, shady side of the map.

"Would you do something for me now?” the man asked.

The boy exactly knew what the man wanted, though he never heard anything. He picked a mouse and keyboard up and carried them to the man.

"Do you feel better?" the boy asked.

"Couldn’t be better" the man said. "Hell, it’s about time."
"Morality is simply the attitude we adopt towards people we personally dislike"
Mizenhauer
Profile Blog Joined February 2015
United States1902 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-27 15:55:33
September 19 2016 22:12 GMT
#21
The sand was coarse. Strong moonlight cast it an ethereal cobalt. The wind was docile, but chill. Its biting touch swept over the neatly formed dunes which bordered the well-lit street. Gwangalli Beach – its was a name spoken in reverence, a ground upon which champions had been crowned. For many nights one man had strode upon it in a lonely pilgrimage. What is it he sought? Sometimes, even he could not recall.
He reveled in feel of the granules beneath his bare soles as he indulged in dreams of triumph yet to materialize. He had been gone for quite so time. So long, in fact, that many had forgotten his name. Whatever legacy he might have carved had been decayed by time and those younger, more able than him. Gwangalli was quiet, as it always was at this hour. It was desolate but also pristine, unmarred by the dangers of the future. It represented newness and opportunity. And as one man, a forgotten warrior named ByuN, who in his own mind had already ascended the throne, raised his gaze from the silvery waters to the beaming radiance of Busan, a single thought escaped his lips.
“It’s my time,”
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Phredxor
Profile Joined May 2013
New Zealand15076 Posts
September 19 2016 22:13 GMT
#22
Is this a sneaky way to give stuchiu a bonus?
Waxangel
Profile Blog Joined September 2002
United States33492 Posts
September 19 2016 22:16 GMT
#23
On September 20 2016 07:13 Phredxor wrote:
Is this a sneaky way to give stuchiu a bonus?

can you give a bonus without base pay?
AdministratorHey HP can you redo everything youve ever done because i have a small complaint?
eviltomahawk
Profile Blog Joined August 2010
United States11135 Posts
September 19 2016 22:41 GMT
#24
Only good can come from this
ㅇㅅㅌㅅ
Katocorp
Profile Joined February 2015
United States5 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-20 01:42:40
September 20 2016 01:40 GMT
#25
Katocorp
Profile Joined February 2015
United States5 Posts
September 20 2016 01:43 GMT
#26
On September 20 2016 07:16 Waxangel wrote:
Show nested quote +
On September 20 2016 07:13 Phredxor wrote:
Is this a sneaky way to give stuchiu a bonus?

can you give a bonus without base pay?


I think thats called a tip?
AxiomBlurr
Profile Blog Joined November 2012
786 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-20 07:40:07
September 20 2016 03:35 GMT
#27
Dark Stalker

by AxiomBlurr

As the glorious red and flame-black battle mist swirled around the entangled armies, I espied the Terran warlord. Although weakened from destroying a PF that gained detection moments before I cut it down, I seized the moment. With the power of the Khala coursing through my psi-blades, I released a furious swipe towards his chest, "I strike from the shadows!"

The sound of the blow resonated electrically as it parted the space and time between us. A single instance before he was to be smote down however, a sweeping scan revealed my position. A sharp hiss and white steam then burst from the seams of the Terran's armor, the human's eyes dilated immensely and he was suddenly thrice the speed of his companions; he slipped my attack with ease.

Whereas before his rifle emitted only a casual spatter of tracer rounds, it now unrealistically rained fire upon me at such a rapid rate that my shields were depleted within a second. A sentry saw my predicament and cast a force field between myself and my foe, but it was too late, a medley of rounds pierced my chest in a horrid splatter and I fell to the ground. The bloodshot clouds hung in the air amidst the chaos as I lay dying, slowly the Void absorbed me, I had failed.

The nothing, the all, the aether and the rift crackled, somewhere in the infinite spirals of galaxies a voice of wisdom beckoned me forth. I floated towards it through innumerous and gargantuan gas pillars lit bright in crimson and gold by neighboring white dwarf stars. I possessed no feeling, I had presence but no physicality, the Khala was still with me but faint like a forgotten dream. Suddenly - a terrible whirring sound pulsed beneath me and then a pain like no other gripped my consciousness; it teased and tormented, it squeezed and augmented my perception. A sharp light flooded my universal field and I felt a corporeal quad-mechanical twitching where my legs once were. I was again, but metamorphosed, before me stood one of the high templar... A second chance. "Cold is the Void..."
MrFerkles
Profile Joined September 2013
3 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-26 10:10:11
September 20 2016 09:39 GMT
#28
Title TBD

by MrFerkles

Sunset had long since passed, and the light of his computer monitor was the only illumination of the room. Sitting back in his chair, ByuN wiped the sleep from the corner of his eyes and pushed his glasses up his nose. He contemplated the victory screen he was presented with. At length he seemed satisfied. It had been far too long since he had felt this kind of power. His fingers still felt agile despite the exertion with which he had been hammering out his macro. His eyes felt sharp, tracking the sharp edges of the Terran decal. Only his mouse hand felt strange - numb from the wrist down. He dismissed this train of thought. Hadn’t he just played the best game of his life? The result was in front of him, lighting the room in triumph, and the memory of how his micro had been impeccable, as if guided by a higher power, burned bright in his mind’s eye. At last he smiled and acknowledged a dark shape slumped in the corner behind him. “Thank you, Jung Jong Hyun.”

Whispers began of a titan of the Ladder. A player who could make impossible plays, crushing stronger armies with flawless micro, grinding mineral lines to a bloody pulp. The names of the defeated didn’t register anymore. Nor did he pause to contemplate the victory screens. They were an annoyance to him now, partly because he cringed to remembered how alluring it was to him at the beginning, partly because they were an unnecessary step between him and his true focus. He gazed at the graphs now displayed on his screen. “Supply blocked, 58 seconds”, he mused whilst rubbing his wrist. It was still mostly numb, but there was now a small discomfort there too. He stared at it. Was that a red bump forming? So what if it was, that’s not what matters. He looked back at the income values. He was behind the whole time, only his micro had made the victory possible. His fingers which once felt so agile seemed clumsy and sluggish in comparison to the blistering speed of his micro. Something had to be done. ByuN turned his chair to face where the slumped figure had once been. Above that spot, on the wall now hung a picture. Idly massaging his wrist and staring at MVP’s smiling face, ByuN thought hard. “I need another. I need Innovation”.

He did it at an offline event. He stood to one side of the crowd, listening to their shouts. They made him anxious. They rode a wave of emotion that could crash in a second. The protoss was balancing on a razor’s edge and his fans blindly cheered on unable to see the impending disappointment when Innovation finally choose to engage. His control was a bit sloppy; the Protoss was far more skilled there, but it didn’t matter. Innovation’s bio crashed through the stalkers and gunned down the overcharged pylons. ByuN felt small in the face of such overpowering macro, unsure if even his micro would have swung that engagement. He shook his head. Even if he had won that engagement, the macro machine would have thrown wave after wave at him. He could have won that battle, but the match would go to Innovation. He smiled at the thought, and stepped closer to the front of the crowd to wait patiently, rubbing his wrist.

When the event finally ended, most of the crowd headed home. Only the diehard fans stayed to give gifts to their favourite players and take pictures. Only the diehard fans, and ByuN. Innovation drew the biggest group, so ByuN had to wait even longer. His patience was wearing thin now. As the last fan finished thanking Innovation for showing such great games, ByuN stepped in and gave Innovation a shy smile. “I’m sorry I haven’t brought a gift, but perhaps may I take a selfie with you? You are a great Terran, I can only dream that my macro can be as strong as yours.”
Innovation seemed a little surprised, but recovered with a smile, “Of course!”
ByuN took out his phone and stood close next to Innovation. Reaching his left arm out in front with the camera in selfie mode, he brought his right to around Innovation’s shoulders, resting his hand lightly upon him. As he did so, his sleeve slipped a little to reveal an angry red bump on his wrist, which ByuN pressed against Innovation.

The camera shutter clicked.

“Thank you, Innovation. You have given me a great gift”.
“Y-you’re welcome”, Innovation managed to say, as his team coach came to fetch him. As Innovation and his coach walked away, ByuN listened to their conversation.
“Are you okay Inno, you look a bit pale?”
“I think so, just a tough match I guess”.
ByuN smiled to himself, and looked at the picture he had taken. Innovation’s face was smiling uncertainly. ByuN’s smile was wide and radiant, but not as radiant as the light centered around his wrist. The picture had caught the exact moment when the bump had made contact with Innovation, and it glowed with power.

“I think I am ready”, he said.
“Good”, came Amon's reply, “I have made you my champion, given you the power to crush any that stand in your way. Go. Do not hesitate. End the infinite cycle of the GSL, and release these mewling specks from the suffering of their victories”.
ByuN's hands vibrated with the unbridled power of MVP's micro and Innovation's macro. He smiled. None would be able to oppose him now. He allowed the fans to swirl around him. They were oblivious to him now, but it was time to step from the shadows. He walked out into the Seoul sunshine, and disappeared among the crowd. For now.
NinjaToss
Profile Blog Joined October 2015
Austria1383 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-23 17:46:06
September 23 2016 17:40 GMT
#29
Would INnoVation Care

The humid air in Dasan Station didn’t waver the crowd, in fact, it seemed like it has passed on hysteria to the spectator. The man that sat closest to the stage was smiling proudly to himself as he took a sip of Hot6ix. It wasn’t a waste of time coming here, watching his idol, his inspiration, the most important person of his life displaying his strength.
On stage, INnoVation, or also known as The Machine, was demolishing his foe. Poor Protoss didn’t stand a chance against his relentless attack waves. After his last failed attempt to counter attack, the Protoss finally signaled his helplessness and surrendered. With a clean and beautiful set score of 4-0 to seal the deal, the Terran advanced to the final battle to face the reigning king, $O$.

“If only I was that powerful” - ByuN thought to himself while waiting in line for a chance to meet the victor. When it was finally his turn, he took a picture with The Machine and got an autograph like everyone else. Afterward, he found himself at a loss for word; out of nowhere he spurted out all at once.

“I… I have been a fan of you for a long time. You are my inspiration, and I strive to be like you… If only I was as strong as you are. I… I wouldn’t be able to be here without you. You’re the most important person in my life.”
INnoVation paused as if his brain was not processing the information at a fast enough rate. He then finally said his thanks in a disinterested tone, and turned to the next person, who was clearly impatient about ByuN taking too much time.
It was that moment that reality struck him. He was a nobody, why would INnoVation cares about him and his feelings. It’s idiotic, really, for him to be this shaken about this situation, but he felt like everything that was building up his life has suddenly collapsed. He found sparkuling tears blurring his vision as he walked away.

If only he could disappear from this world.

“Stop right there!” - A voice said. When he turned his head to the person speaking, NesTea was standing right behind him.
“Your disappearance will lead to the unavoidable eventual destruction of this universe. You have been chosen by me myself to keep this universe in tact. If you fail to finish your quest, I won’t even be here to be disappointed.” Before ByuN got to question him what his so called fate and mission was, the Creator of the Universe already disappeared into the Void.

And then he saw himself.

Or rather, it was him from the future.

“Who are you? Why are you here?” - ByuN asked

“I am from the future, or the alternate universe if your mission comes to a success.” - His futuristic self replied.
“Mission this, mission that. First it was NesTea, and now even you. What’s with this mission thing?” - His impatience that was building up ever since the previous abrupt conversation has finally surfaced. He needed an answer to this mysterious prophecy that was going on.

“Okay, listen carefully, I can’t stay here for long. Has of the House Yoe, first of his name, Lord of the Pylon Walls, has decided to possess his brother, the great Dark Lord $O$. With the combination of $O$ skills and ability, and his wicked mind, he has decided to take over the world. Pylons… Cannons… destruction are everywhere. You have to turn back in time and stop $O$ from winning the GSL. You are the chosen one, only you can stop Has and $O$. “ - His future self, in contrary to him, explained everything calmly. How ironic! He is ByuN; he’s no one, not even the most important person of his life cared about him. No, in fact, he was just brutally rejected. Why should he care about this stuff?
“And what if I don’t want to be the hero that will rescue the world?” - He considered out loud.

There was a glimpse of desperation in the eyes of neo-ByuN, and then he replied
“I knew you would ask this question. NesTea has aligned the ByuLs for you in the alternate world. People will help you, and in a way… you will have him. This is your only chance, for anything good will ever happen to you.”

Should he believe in this? Every single nerve in his body is telling him to not trust this… illusion of him, whatever it is. Yet, he felt like there was indeed a much greater force around him, persuading, telling and waiting for him to accept the quest.

And so he did.

Neo-ByuN smiled with such satisfaction, that he never thought that he could pulled off. He warned him one last time in a serious tone.

“You’re going to be sent back in the past, to right when $O$ ascends to the throne for the second time. Your mission is a long and harsh one, but do not give up midway. You will get what you want at the end. Remember, this is not only for the sake of yours, but also for the world. You are changing history, and that is a treacherous path. You must not tell anyone where you are from, or which time-line you are from, or else all of your… all of our hard works will amount to nothing. Now go.”

The next moment, ByuN felt as if his whole being was being forced into a single cell, and it was drained through a singularity. He saw FlaSh smiling down upon him as he desperately struggling to free himself.

Then it stopped.

Suddenly, he found himself being able to breath and move freely once more. Looking around, ByuN was in his room again, INnoVation is smiling in the picture hung above his head. His puppy was sleeping besides him, oblivious to everything that just happened. He felt fresh like never before; his wrists felt like it has never endured a day of pain. He knew what he has to do, and he was ready.
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NinjaToss
Profile Blog Joined October 2015
Austria1383 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-23 18:16:24
September 23 2016 17:45 GMT
#30
I would like to thank Stuchiu for giving the idea of Has, and I would like to thank Elentos and Penev for the idea of "aligning ByuLs". I worked very hard to write this fanfic, and I hope you guys would find this a a good gam- fanfic.
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Waxangel
Profile Blog Joined September 2002
United States33492 Posts
September 23 2016 21:03 GMT
#31
as long as I get enough entries so I don't have to give Thouhastmail's entry a prize by default, I'm happy
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ZigguratOfUr
Profile Blog Joined April 2012
Iraq16955 Posts
September 24 2016 06:37 GMT
#32
Rebirth

The depots rose eventually, locking the remaining SCVs in with the zerglings and banelings. ByuN stared at the remains of his mineral line for a few more seconds before GGing out. IEM São Paulo wasn’t going to be his.

The last few weeks had been difficult ones. His losses felt hopeless, and his wins felt undeserved. Sascri should have been an easy opponent, yet victory had slipped away all the same.

ByuN cuddled his puppy. He hadn’t felt this poorly about Starcraft since GSL Open Season 2. “I was playing Protoss back then,” he reminisced. “Now that was a nightmare.” In truth, it wasn’t the game itself that was troubling him these days. It was the stuff outside of it that poisoned his enjoyment.

ByuN’s phone rang. He looked at the caller ID. It was Gerrard. He considered not answering. The thought was very tempting, but he knew there would be a price to pay for doing so. Was it worth it? The phone rang again. ByuN answered.

“So you lost again.” said the unpleasant voice of Prime’s coach. “Why am I not surprised?”

“It’s only a foreign tournament,” answered ByuN. “The GSL qualifiers are coming up. I can get back into form before then. I will do better there.”

“You will try no doubt, just like you will also try to show good game for the fans, yes?” said Gerrard. “Luckily there is no one around with enough expectations to be disappointed in either.”

ByuN contained his rage in silence, aware that at the other end of the line Gerrard was waiting, hoping for an outburst, an opportunity to deliver more scathing comments. Five seconds went by. Then ten. Gerrard chuckled softly. “You know you have not done the team proud this year ByuN. It was all Maru, and with Maru gone who will step up to the plate? You? No, you do not have the skills anymore. So how exactly will you help the team?”

ByuN remained silent again, but he knew that this time the silence was not on his side. Gerrard was going to try to convince him again.

“Why won’t you participate in the tournament, ByuN. Do you not owe it to Prime? Owe it to me?” said Gerrard. “Rich gentlemen are willing to sponsor us in this.”

“There is no... honour in this underground cup.” said ByuN haltingly. “It is wrong.”

“Only the skillful have the luxury of choosing their stage.” said Gerrard. “You do not deserve the choice in such matters.”

“These rich men are Jopok.” eventually said ByuN. He had wanted to avoid bringing that up. He knew what was coming next. “Morally, I cannot work for them.”

“Morals?” hissed Gerrard. “You didn’t have any of those when you shamed me by match-fixing with CoCa at the ESV Weekly. And worse yet, getting caught. You better lose your new-found morals or lose your position on the team. And remember how much you owe me.”

Gerrard hung up before ByuN could reply, not that there was anything to reply to that. That’s how it always went. Over the past few weeks Gerrard had seized every opportunity to hound him about this underground tournament. The Jopok wagered incredible sums of money on these illicit tournaments. Many Jopok even had their own secret teams made from tempting successful players with money, or by recruiting the dregs of the Starcraft scene. ByuN had heard rumours of these dark tournaments even back in his NEX days, but had never believed in them.

ByuN turned to the ladder. It was the only thing to do. The other players would not practice with him, not with Gerrard this angry at him. And maybe, just maybe, if he found his skill again and made it to the GSL, Gerrard would be happy and would stop trying to get him to play in that tournament. ByuN lost the first five games to blink stalkers. And then he lost a game as long as the previous five to swarm hosts. ByuN decided to go to sleep.

***


When he woke up, there was a man sitting next to his bed.

“Who are you? How did you get in?” asked ByuN.

“Your coach was nice enough to lend us a key.” answered the man. ByuN knew Gerrard did not have the key to ByuN’s flat. Or shouldn’t have the key.

“Get out immediately. I will call the police.” said ByuN.

“You won’t.” said the man. “You know better.”

“Maybe I won’t, but I still won’t work for you.” said ByuN.

The man seemed to think a bit about, and then pulled out a card. “All right. I will leave now. Call this number if you change your mind. My master is not a patient man, and he badly needs a terran for his team.” The man placed the card on a table, and then calmly left.

ByuN knew this was too good to be true. The Jopok didn’t make house calls without a reason. He felt like he had just spotted a warp prism leaving his main without doing anything. There had to be a reason.

ByuN looked around. And then searched the apartment. They had taken his puppy.

***


One week later, ByuN was at the studio with Gerrard. He hadn’t been able to sleep. His practice had gotten worse. And yet he had to play.

“Relax ByuN.” said Gerrard slightly sarcastically. “You said you would be able to crush the GSL qualifiers after all. An underground qualifier like this means nothing to you. Nothing except for a lot of prestige for our sponsors and a lot of money for us.”

“My puppy...” started ByuN.

“Will be returned to you in due time once our friends are satisfied.” interrupted Gerrard. “Crush these amateurs and you’ll be fine.”
With deep misgivings, ByuN followed Gerrard to the player area. He didn’t recognize anyone, though many of the players seemed to be wearing odd masks with barcodes printed on them.

“Some players use their skills to gain fame in the public scene, as well as for making money in the underground scene,” explained Gerrard. “So they hide their faces behind barcode masks, so people don’t recognize them. Of course many of these underground circuit failures choose to wear the masks to intimidate their opponents. Don’t worry about it. Your seat is here.”

ByuN took his seat. The person seated next to him seemed to be a foreigner. He wore sharp sunglasses, and carried a wheel of Gouda with him. ByuN had the impression that he had seen him before.

“Taiwanese mercenary.” said Gerrard who was just as surprised as ByuN when the foreigner pulled out a second wheel of Gouda out of his bag along with his keyboard and mouse. “Some groups that don’t have the influence to secure a top player in Korea try to use their overseas connections. Now focus on the games.”

Despite ByuN’s nervousness, the first series went well. His opponent 10 pooled every game (even on Alterzim), and lost every game. “Now why would he go for such a bad build?” wondered ByuN.

The second series was even shorter. The opponent had monitor issues and tried to pause, but typed “pp” instead of “ppp”. Immediately men in suits appeared, seemingly out of thin air, and led him out of the room through a hidden door. ByuN glanced inquiringly at Gerrard, and was shocked to see the sweat beading down Gerrard’s forehead. Everyone in the room was deadly scared of those men (except for the foreigner who was too busy killing a zerg with mass carriers). Gerrard answered curtly: “Dark KeSPA. Don’t ask.”

The third and final opponent ByuN had to face looked vaguely familiar. He had seen him before. Maybe in Proleague? But now wasn’t the time to worry about others. He had to win for his puppy.

This opponent was a very good player playing a very aggressive roach style that threatened to overwhelm ByuN at every turn. Eventually ByuN prevailed more out of luck than anything else. He had won, and his puppy lived to fight another day. He picked up his mouse and keyboard and was about to leave after Gerrard when he saw his last opponent pleading at the feet of some Jopok. He was begging for another chance. The Jopok slowly shook his head and signalled to his henchmen; they surged forward and grabbed ByuN’s unfortunate opponent.

As they dragged him away ByuN’s opponent cried out: “I am Bear. I am the Unofficial World Champion, and nothing you do can change that. Someone, please, remember me!” ByuN sadly shook his head—was that to be his fate one day?

***


It was the day of the new year. It was the day of the Ro32 of the unnamed underground tournament. It was the day ByuN would get his puppy back.

ByuN’s first opponent was the foreigner. This time he had come equipped with a wheel of provolone, and was arguing with the referee, pointing out that ByuN was allowed his Pocari Sweat. Grudgingly the referee acquiesced to the provolone’s presence in the booth.

The first game was on Habitation Station. ByuN decided to open Gangnam terran, but found to his horror that there were three probes there waiting for him, trying to block his CC. Despite ByuN’s superior worker numbers the probes ducked and weaved preventing the CC from landing. Eventually they went away, and ByuN was able to start to mine. “It’s going to be alright.” thought ByuN. “He must have delayed his economy to do this.” Then the cannons started to shoot the SCVs from the low ground.

The next game was on Alterzim. ByuN was ready this time. His opponent was nothing but a cheeser. As long as he was prepared, there was nothing the opponent could do. The Taiwanese Protoss opened with a cannon rush, but this time ByuN held it with ease. He was slightly surprised by the follow-up oracles, but they too were eventually held off. The DTs succeeded in getting quite a few kills, but ByuN pushed them back. Then 20 void rays flew into his natural and destroyed everything.

ByuN was now facing elimination, so he watched his potential opponents’ games with greater intensity than he had ever done before. Both of his possible opponents were zergs wearing the barcode mask. They were both frighteningly quick at micro-ing their zergling, baneling and locusts. It was ZvZ, so he didn’t learn much, but there was something disquieting about one of the players’ zergling micro. It was hauntingly familiar.

Six hours later, ByuN was facing that zergling micro himself. It had a magnetic quality, an ability to enthral both opponents and viewers. And it was micro ByuN had often seen on the public stage. It was micro that had won a GSL more than a year ago. And it was micro that was outclassing ByuN today. ByuN was crying now, and he didn’t know if he was crying for himself and his puppy, or for the future of the Starcraft scene.

ByuN stumbled out of the studio. Gerrard had left the studio right as ByuN had left the game. He had to find him to ask for another chance. He would play in any tournament Gerrard asked him to. He would do everything for him without a question. He just needed another chance.

As he crossed the road, ByuN heard a barking sound. He turned around. It was his puppy. They were giving it back to him after all. Gerrard was giving him another chance. His puppy stumbled towards him from across the street.

Neither ByuN nor the puppy saw the car coming. They didn’t hear it accelerate right as the puppy crossed the road. But ByuN saw the car’s front wheel strike his puppy. He heard the sickening crunch of his puppy striking the road and bouncing down the street. He heard Gerrard’s bitter laughter as the car rolled away. And he heard his own despair resonating across the city.

***


“Are you ByuN?”

ByuN looked up. There was a Chinese man standing there. He didn’t know any Chinese men. It couldn’t be him he was talking to.

“You are ByuN.”

ByuN looked up again. The Chinese man was still there. Maybe he was talking to him. Or maybe not. Did it matter?

“What have you been doing over the past few days? You are filthy.”

ByuN couldn’t remember the past few days. He couldn’t remember the past few minutes even. There had been a Chinese man he thought. Or maybe there hadn’t been.

“I know what happened at the underground tournament ByuN. I am sorry for you and the others.”

The Chinese man that might not be there was sorry for him. Sorry for what? ByuN tried to remember, and then regretted his decision immediately. There was nothing to remember. It was safer not to remember.

“You must shake yourself out of it ByuN. I know it’s hard, but we can’t keep letting things like this happen. We have to clean up Starcraft ByuN. We have to act.”

The Chinese man was reminding him of uncomfortable things. Of people he knew. Of things he had done. Of how he had once loved Starcraft.

“I will sponsor your myself ByuN. We will join their underground league and destroy it utterly from within. I have introduced others into their league, but I still need a champion to succeed. You can be that champion ByuN. I know you have the potential.”

Potential. He had thought he had had that once. Before Gerrard. Before everything had happened.

“We will bring them to justice ByuN. All of them. No matter how long it takes. And then you will be able to get away from the dark side of Starcraft. You will be able to return to the Starcraft scene we love.”

ByuN looked up, and kept looking up. The man was extending a hand. ByuN considered it for a while, and then took it. Starcraft still needed him, and he still needed Starcraft.
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Waxangel
Profile Blog Joined September 2002
United States33492 Posts
September 26 2016 01:47 GMT
#33
The deadline is approaching; get your entries in guys :O
AdministratorHey HP can you redo everything youve ever done because i have a small complaint?
Cricketer12
Profile Blog Joined May 2012
United States13990 Posts
September 26 2016 01:55 GMT
#34
ByuN is cool

*insert smut that isn't really smut*

ByuN comes back and wins GSL

The End
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SetGuitarsToKill
Profile Blog Joined December 2013
Canada28396 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-26 02:08:34
September 26 2016 02:07 GMT
#35
ByuN comes


way too lewd wtf cricketer don't think i don't get what you mean by that
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Cricketer12
Profile Blog Joined May 2012
United States13990 Posts
September 26 2016 02:34 GMT
#36
On September 26 2016 11:07 SetGuitarsToKill wrote:
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ByuN comes


way too lewd wtf cricketer don't think i don't get what you mean by that

Gotta keep things interesting
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MrFerkles
Profile Joined September 2013
3 Posts
September 26 2016 09:56 GMT
#37
On September 24 2016 02:45 NinjaToss wrote:
I hope you guys would find this a a good gam- fanfic.

Nice meme, I cheer for you.
Thouhastmail
Profile Joined March 2015
Korea (North)876 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-26 15:04:38
September 26 2016 10:01 GMT
#38
On September 26 2016 10:55 Cricketer12 wrote:
ByuN is cool

*insert smut that isn't really smut*

ByuN comes back and wins GSL

The End


Best one so far.
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207aicila
Profile Joined January 2015
1237 Posts
September 26 2016 12:24 GMT
#39
On September 20 2016 01:58 DinoMight wrote:
Show nested quote +
On September 20 2016 00:23 Waxangel wrote:


Updates
  • 9-20-16: Addition to length/format section: Explicit sexual content is not allowed. Tasteful erotica is permitted, but no straight-up smut.



BAHAHAHA


You must not be familiar with Jo Pereira (the man behind Nerf Now) if you find this funny.
mfw people who never followed BW speak about sAviOr as if they know anything... -___-''''
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beentheredonethat
Profile Joined May 2016
2934 Posts
September 26 2016 13:06 GMT
#40
"I have to go. I must."
Byun shook his head in despair. Tears filled his eyes as he glimpsed one last time towards the beautiful face of the woman that would keep his heart safe and sound while he'd be on the great mission. The mission that Innovation had laid on his shoulders. The responsibility was a heavy burden.

He breathed one last kiss on the warm cheek of his wife, then he left. The door closed with the sound of inevitability.

There was noone he could talk to. Noone he could trust. All he knew was that the mission required absolutey discretion. What he was about to do would absolutely ruin his homeland. It would make countless pros retire, it would would shatter dreams of young and old alike.

"Are you sure?"
"Yes."
"There will be no glory. No reward. You will be left in the darkness, your name will be forgotten, even if you succeed. You will never ever return from your quest."
"I know."
"How can you not be nervous? I've seen countless warriors prepare for the final step you're about to take, and all of them showed fear, disappointment, even disgust when they were told what they had to do. But you're just standing there, as if you wouldn't care for the world at all."
"That is my fate. It has always been my fate. I am ready."


The short dialogue went through his mind when he roamed through the streets of Seoul. His direction was straight north. The further he came, the less shining the buildings were. The neon signs were smaller, and dirt was on them. The houses weren't as tall as the skycrapers in the inner city. This district was known as a shady one. Drugs, gambling, prostitution, you name it, the district had it.

It was called The Gamer's Fall. A bar - but it didn't really deserve that name. The outside wall was stained, and he couldn't tell if he saw old, dried blood or just dirt. The door was disgusting and he pulled his sleeve over his hand before he touched the door knob. When he finally entered, he had to cough. Big clouds of grey and blue smoke had seemingly replaced all the oxygen. He glanced around the room. The "guests" were dilapidated folks. Beards that had not been shaved since weeks, teeth that hadn't been brushed for months. The whole room smelled musty and the taste of alcohol was in the air. Let alone the fume from the many pipes and zigarettes (and worse) made him dizzy.

But then he straightened himself. He knew what he had to do. From the depths of his trousers, he pulled a gun.
"Show me where he is!"
Pointing the barrel towards the bartender, he completely disregarded the panic that broke out in the room.
"What the fuck is wrong with you, boy?!" The bartender wasn't impressed. Not at all. Slowly he led his hand under the counter. Byun knew he had to shoot - but he didn't. When the bartender pulled up his own gun and pointed it towards the boy, it was Byun who suddenly felt weak and fearful. He dropped his own gun, and then he felt the back of his head exploding in pain. Unconcious, he sank to the floor.

When he woke up, he was tied down to a chair. The light was dim, and he couldn't recognize how many people were with him in this room. But then he saw a face he knew.

"You." Frostiness were in his voice as he finally realized that he had made it. And yet there was sadness.
The training of the past years paid off. It took him only a second to get rid of his shackles, and he exploded in a series of precise blows that knocked out every single person in this room.

He looked around in awe. This is what I've been trained for. It was all there. The documents that proved the guilt. The money. The suspect.

"What have you done, Lee Seung Hyun", he sighed.

One week later, TL.net editor Lichter sat on his table, browsing the internet. He was bored. No interesting bans, no live report threads to enjoy. It was when he finally wanted to go to bed when he the news one last time.

"Unknown hero blows underground matchfixing ring - you won't believe which pros were caught!"
"Micro tricks like marine splitting, blink stalker micro, and ling/baneling wars were the apex of the game’s achievements; nothing in the world takes your breath away like watching a pro player split marines like a god."
Seeker *
Profile Blog Joined April 2005
Where dat snitch at?37044 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-26 22:12:31
September 26 2016 14:58 GMT
#41
A Drink to Remember

“Thanks for everything,” Choya stated as he shook MarineKing’s hand. “It was a pleasure,” replied MarineKing as he hoisted his bag over his shoulders and put on his shoes. Both men bitterly looked in opposite directions as MarineKing prepared to leave the MVP team house for the last time. As he opened the doors and stepped outside, MarineKing pondered just where everything went wrong. He had such great plans that were supposed to establish an unbeatable legacy… But after everything that went down, the only thing he wanted to cross off his list was to hit nearest bar scene and get magnificently wasted off his ass.

MarineKing found the nearest bar in the area through his phone and headed over there immediately. When he got there, he opened the doors and went inside. The bar was nearly empty aside from a couple of people already taking up several tables. Realizing he needed to be alone to gather his thoughts, MarineKing walked over to the counter, and grabbed one of the stools near where the bartender was working.

The bartender looked up from the register and addressed MarineKing. “Sir, what will you be having?” MarineKing responded by putting his arms on the table and burying his face in his hands. “Whatever you recommend that will allow a man to forget about the past five years of his life…” At this, the bartender chuckled and reached down toward the bottom shelf. “So you’ll have the ‘Secret Combo’ order #5 then.”

As the bartender took out a giant glass and began pouring MarineKing his drink, MarineKing suddenly felt movement to his left as the stool next to him moved and a man sat down. The man took his seat, placed his jacket on the counter, quickly ordered his own drink, and then took a deep sigh. MarineKing turned for a split second to his left, nodded his head to address the man’s presence, then turned back to his own drink. Suddenly MarineKing felt movement again and noticed out of the corner of his eye that the man next to him had turned towards his direction. At this, MarineKing smelled a familiar scent that he had once smelled a long time ago.

“Whoa! A #5 SC combo? Haven’t had one of those for myself in a while. What’s the occasion? A bad breakup or something?” MarineKing laughed out loud. “Ha, I wish... I wish it was about a bad breakup… Or a death of a loved one… Or a terminal disease revelation from my doctor… Anything would be better than what I’m feeling right now…”

“Holy shit, something terrible must have happened,” the man said as he received his drink. “Want to talk about it?” MarineKing didn’t respond and just continued to down his drink. Realizing that MarineKing had no intention of responding, the man initiated again. “I know how you feel. When you feel like utter shit, the only thing you want to do his drink away your sorrows… But you know,” the man said as he reached out to grab his own glasss, “Nothing beats having a drink with a stranger you just met at a bar and spilling your guts out to him.”

With that, the man raised his glass and pointed towards MarineKing. “To you, good sir. To you…” Realizing that the man had no intention of leaving him alone, MarineKing raised his glass and clinked with the man’s glass. “Down the hatch!” The man popped his head back and downed his drink in one gulp; MarineKing followed suit.

After finishing his drink, MarineKing placed his glass down and let out a deep sigh. Since he had already consumed such a large amount of alcohol, MarineKing’s felt his body’s tension just fly away. Smiling for the first time in ages, he turned towards the man and said, “You know what? I’ll take you up on what you just said. Why the fuck not you know? Why not spill my guts out to a complete stranger?”

“That’s the spirit!” The man firmly slapped MarineKing on his back and looked him straight in his eyes. “So, spill. What’s going through that head of yours?” MarineKing arched his back, combed through his hair with his right hand, and briefly closed his eyes. “Shit man… Where do I begin…? I guess I’ll start at around four years ago, right as 2012 was ending.” MarineKing gestured over the bartender to pour him another drink before resuming his story. As the bartender headed over with the giant pitcher, MarineKing realized that he could smell that familiar scent again. Shrugging it off as insignificant however, MarineKing proceeded with his tale.

“In order to understand this story, you should probably know that I was a professional StarCraft II player. In 2012, I was, as everyone would say, ‘the shit’. I had it all. Money, fame, fortune, you name it, I had it. I didn’t think anything in the world could bring me down… But I was wrong. After my second MLG championship win… Everything just fell apart….” The bartender poured MarineKing his second glass. He grabbed it and drank half of it in one gulp. He wiped away the remains on his mouth with his left hand and continued talking. “I had a teammate, his ID was ‘ByuN’… Or ‘GhostKing’… I think it’s back to ByuN now…. Or whatever the fuck he calls himself these days…. Anyways, my teammate was… starting to completely overshadow me… He was slowly becoming… ‘The real shit’.”

The man patted MarineKing on his back. “So your teammate was on the verge of stealing the spotlight.” “Exactly,” MarineKing replied. “My former teammate, Polt, had already done it to me once. I just couldn’t afford to let it happen again… I just had no other choice… I had to stop him… I had to make him disappear… At all costs…” The man stopped patting MarineKing and look him in the eyes. “What did you do?”

“What else could I do? I pulled the most despicable and humanly degrading move anyone could do. I collaborated with my head coach and worked together to try to bring him down. The coach sold his computer without his knowledge. I tried to release his puppy outside to see if it would get lost. We fed him false information and taught him useless strategies to try to sabotage his games… Nothing worked. The guy was completely unfazed… Hyun-woo was a beast. Nothing could break that concentration of his…” Suddenly, MarineKing stopped talking, and just stared at his drink.

“And then?” The man asked. MarineKing waited a long time before finally answering. “And then… I sank to rock bottom. I pulled him aside one day and gave him an offer I knew he couldn’t refuse…” The man leaned back and started stroking his chin. “What did you offer him?” MarineKing once again paused for a duration before giving a response. “I… I told him… That I would offer him half of my championship winnings if he agreed to stop practicing… He would get the money as long as he… Intentionally stopped working hard and gradually allowed his own skills to deteriorate…”

“Holy shit! Half your winnings?! That sounds like a fuckton of money…” MarineKing shook his head as he chuckled sadly. “It really was. I foolishly thought that I would make four times as much in due time just as long as he went away from the scene… God… If I had only stopped there…” “There’s more?” The man asked curiously. “Yeah, there’s more…” MarineKing replied. “I had to make sure there was no chance that he would go back on his promise. So I spent the other half of my winnings bribing two celebrities to sleep with him. Women and money… What more could a gamer nerd want in life, you know?

“Damn… Who were they?” MarineKing drained the rest of his glass before talking. “They were nation sensation women that every man dreamed about. Superstar Lee Hyo-ri and kpopstar idol, Hyuna.” The man spat out the drink he had just sipped. “Holy shit! What?! Are you for real?” MarineKing nodded his head. “Yeah, I’m for real. And it worked flawlessly too. They both secretly met him at a luxurious hotel and spent the night with him… Lucky bastard…”

MarineKing got the attention of the bartender and signaled for a third drink. The man signaled for his second. “It worked like a fucking charm. After a 3rd/4th place finish at the 2012 GSL Season 3, ByuN literally just ‘disappeared’ from the scene. He packed up his shit and moved out of the team house. He stopped showing up for tournaments. People started forgetting about his existence… It was all supposed to be the perfect plan…” MarineKing once again stopped talking. He closed his eyes and brought his palm to his face. The man looked at MarineKing and asked his question again. “What happened? Did something go wrong with your former teammate?”

“No… Nothing went wrong with him… Everything went wrong with me… I couldn’t live up to my own expectations… I fucked up hard… I pretty much fell into a slump that I never got out of. I had one ‘miracle run’ in 2014 and that was it… I was a failure in everyone’s eyes… Joining a new team didn’t help… I had no choice… I retired and left for good…”

At this, the man put his glass down and put his arm around MarineKing. “I’m terribly sorry to hear that. It’s rough when shit goes down… Do you by any chance, think karma had something to do with it?” MarineKing once again laughed out loud. “Of course karma had every-fucking-thing to do with it. I threw away my own integrity as a human being and a professional gamer for my own selfish pride and desires. I screwed over a precious friend and teammate all for the sake of my own reputation… If only I could see him again… Let him know how sorry I am… Let him know how foolish I feel for what I said and did… God damn it… I deserve every last bit of this…” With that MarienKing grabbed his glass and in one gulp, downed his third serving.

“Do you know what I got in my mailbox recently? A letter from him… Date was June 18, 2016. In the letter… He said he had gotten into Code S for the 2016 GSL Season 2 tournament… He also wrote about how he has been killing it in Legacy of the Void… His final comment was that he would stop one day to see me… As a champion…”

“Ahh… I see… But… Doesn’t that break his promise? Doesn’t coming back to the scene go against the terms set forth in your deal with him?” MarineKing took a long and deep sigh before giving his response. “No, it doesn’t. Because the deal was that he would stay away as long as I remained relevant… I became a nobody as time went on… So he was more than in his rights to come back… And I heard on the news that… He won the most recent GSL and is now considered one of the greatest in SC2 right now…” MarineKing laughed out loud in despair and bitterness. “How ironic… Fate really is a cruel thing…”

The man nodded his head and once again patted MarineKing on his back. “I hear you buddy… Fate really is a cruel and harsh thing… Reality is something that we can never avoid…” MarineKing didn’t respond. He was far too depressed at this point to even say anything. Realizing this, the man decided it was his turn to do the talking. “Listen, friend… I can’t tell you that what you did wasn’t wrong… But from what I hear, it sounds like everything worked out for that ByuN guy. So… Maybe you should just be happy for him. And happy for yourself too! You had the privilege of getting to know this man. Sure, you threw it away because of your own greed but… I’m sure wherever he is, he has already forgiven you and just wants the best for you…”

MarineKing sat up and looked over to the man. “Yeah… I guess… Well, let’s stop talking about this. I just realized I never even asked about you. What do you do? How’s your life?” The man smiled and placed his hands on the counter. “Well, I can tell you without any doubt that my life is absolutely terrific right now. I went through a long period at one point in my life where I felt small and insignificant. But I just recently won a tournament and am feeling like I’m on top of the world. I’m pulling so much tail these days that it’s not even funny. I guess you could say, my life is perfect…”

MarineKing smiled and nodded his head in agreement. “Well, at least one of us is enjoying life.” At this, the man chuckled and and grabbed his drink. “You bet. Here I am at a bar with a complete stranger, and I don’t feel anything but happiness and satisfaction. I know you’ve gone through some rough times friend, but… Don’t worry. I’m sure everything will work itself out.” The man drained his glass and got up from his seat. “I came here because I wanted to meet up with an old friend and patch things up but... I think I’m good now. It was great to meet you. I wish you the best of luck in your future endeavors. In fact, you know what? The drinks are on me. Take care of yourself.”

With that, the person slapped down a 50,000₩ bill, put his jacket back on, and walked out of the bar without looking back. MarineKIng stared down at the bill, flabbergasted at such a generous tip. He quickly got up from his seat and ran out of the bar to see if he could track down that man and find out his identity. But as he stepped outside, tried to look left and right vigorously, he could see that it was of no use; the man had disappeared with no having left no traces behind.

Confused and bewildered, MarineKing walked back into the bar and took his seat at the counter again. As he swilled his drink and got ready to take his final gulp, he abruptly stopped. He put his glass down, turned toward the seat that the man had previously sat on, and stared at it for a good ten seconds without saying anything else. He had suddenly remembered where that familiar scent had come from: The Prime team house.

Suddenly, MarineKing dove over the counter and grabbed the bartender’s left arm. “Excuse me, but do you know who that person was that was sitting next to me just now?!” Although the bartender took a step back from this surprise action from MarineKing, he quickly gathered himself again and resumed wiping down the dirty glasses with his cloth. “Of course I know who that was,” stated the bartender in disbelief at MarineKing’s ignorance. “That was the most recent GSL champion and greatest LotV player to date, Byun Hyun-woo.”

At these words, MarineKing released the bartender’s arm and slowly sank back into his seat. He sat there quietly without saying another word for a good five minutes. During those five minutes, it was almost as if MarineKing’s entire life was flashing before his eyes. Then, he got up, finished his drink, and prepared to leave. As he put his hand into his pocket to take out his phone, he suddenly noticed something in there that he hadn’t felt before. He pulled out something from his pocket and looked at it; it was a picture.

At the sight of this picture, MarineKing lost all the feeling in his body and slumped down to the ground in agony and disbelief. The little parting gift from ByuN was too much for him to handle. The picture showed the one thing MarineKing never thought he would see in a million years: a picture of Lee Hyo-ri, Hyuna, and ByuN’s puppy, all simultaneously licking the GSL championship trophy. On the picture, in big black, bold letters were the words: You are forgiven. Suck on this. Love, ByuN
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NinjaToss
Profile Blog Joined October 2015
Austria1383 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-26 15:27:07
September 26 2016 15:16 GMT
#42
Fuck this contest, I give up
ggwp guys =(((((

On September 26 2016 18:56 MrFerkles wrote:
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On September 24 2016 02:45 NinjaToss wrote:
I hope you guys would find this a a good gam- fanfic.

Nice meme, I cheer for you.


Thank you for cheering for me, you will be my third fan =))
I feel so much like aLive now
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Mekare
Profile Joined April 2011
Germany393 Posts
September 26 2016 17:20 GMT
#43
Seeker I love you xD Poor MarineKing <33333
Waxangel
Profile Blog Joined September 2002
United States33492 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-09-27 05:29:30
September 27 2016 00:09 GMT
#44
Here's my non-competing entry, because I feel obliged to put something out there.

"No, I haven't watched John Wick, really" by Wax


Rearing his leg for a fourth kick, ByuN reminded himself to aim away from the head. Too many broken teeth, he found, could render anyone’s speech unintelligible.

“Stop! STOP! I’ll talk.” yelped the mercenary captain, crumpled over on the ground.

“My puppy, Ren. Where is he?” [This is the puppy's actual name, I looked it up.]

“I don’t know–”

ByuN frowned and moved his right foot a step back.

“PLEASE! I really don’t know. The client, he barely told us anything. Just where to find the dog, and where to deliver him once we got him. As long as we get paid, we don’t ask questions.”

ByuN lost his patience, and lodged his foot in the captain’s sternum.

“Where did you take Ren to? Who picked him up? This client—I want everything you have on him. Communications, client files, every fucking detail you remember.”

After a violent fit of gasping and wheezing, the captain attempted a response.

“One... of the construction sites… by Incheon harbor. Sedated the dog and left him there. Didn’t wait to confirm... pickup.”

The captain dragged himself up into a sitting position against the wall.

“No records... company policy. All communication is encrypted, deleted after we confirm payment.”

“So you don’t have shit, that’s what you’re saying.” spat ByuN in disgust.

“Nothing. That’s what’s attractive to our clients. We run a tight ship. To avoid the authorities. And people like you. You know just as much as I do.”

“Well,” said ByuN, pulling a pair of pliers from his pocket, “I’m going to have to make absolutely sure about that last part.”

“NO! PLEASE! I swear, I don’t know anything else. I DON’T KNOW ANYTHING.”

ByuN tuned out the captain’s blubbering as he kneeled down, until it was just a faint, frantic murmur in the back of his head. As it had many times before in such moments, his thoughts raced back to the autumn of 2013 when it all began.


*****


He had come home late, past midnight.

It had been a few months since he had privately retired and left the chicken-coop known as a Korean teamhouse. That he had to keep up the public facade of being an active member of a PRIME—a favor granted to aid their never-ending search for sponsorship—was slightly stressful, but otherwise he had been enjoying life as an ex-progamer.

Still, ByuN missed the people he had spent so much time with, and he welcomed the occasional night out with his former teammates. MarineKing’s stupid glasses, BBoongBBoong’s goofy laugh, and even Creator’s awful singing—everything that had annoyed him before was all too endearing now.

The only thing that kept ByuN from reconsidering his decision was Ren. He adored the little furball more than anything in the world, and he showered the pup with affection in a way that would have embarrassed him if there was anyone to see. Any time ByuN began to feel lonely, Ren would come in for a much-needed snuggle, as if he knew what his big, funny-looking buddy was feeling.

No, retiring was the right move, after all. ByuN didn’t know where his life would go from there, but he had a feeling things would work out, as long as Ren was beside him.

ByuN locked the front door behind him and flipped on the lights.

“What on earth…?”

The contents of his home lay broken and upended across the the floor, while a draft whistled through a broken window.

Stepping forward into the room, ByuN felt something crunch under his shoe. He looked down on a cracked picture frame, and his heart fell into his stomach.

“Ren?”

“Ren?”

“REN!?”


*****


For how vividly that night had been etched in ByuN’s memory, the two years that followed were a blur. The trail, the places he had been—those he could remember clearly. Seoul, Incheon, Busan, Fukuoka, Vladivostok, Taipei, Macau, Nanjing, Hangzhou, and finally a warehouse in Shanghai.

The things he had done along the way, however…

He thought of a saying he had once heard. “He who fights monsters should take care he himself does not become a monster.”

Most of the journey, ByuN preferred not to recall in detail.


*****


*Bombarami nallimyu, hwitnallinun beotggoti~*

ByuN paused, as his ears registered the tune emanating from his pocket. Hadn’t he turned his phone off?

He wiped his hand on the captain’s jacket and flipped the phone open.

“You can leave that poor bastard alone now. He has nothing useful left to tell you, I can assure you about that.”

ByuN was certain he had disabled all of the warehouse’s surveillance systems beforehand. How could anyone know…

“So you’re the one.” he growled. Growling. He never used to do that.

“Indeed. I must say, you’ve vastly surpassed my expectations, ByuN. Never in my wildest dreams did I think you would make it this far.”

The voice was familiar, yet something about it was off. ByuN had never heard it so mocking, so preening.

“When I first had your dog abducted, you were so soft, so weak, so pathetic. Only suitable for the most basic of tasks. But ohhhhh… ...how this pursuit has changed you! Each obstacle I put in your way has only served to make you stronger. Now, you’re more intriguing than any of my other projects. Far more potential than that Polish punk; maybe even more than that delinquent brat. To put it simply, you’re ready.”

‘Ready to separate your heart from your chest.’ Byun thought. “You have Ren. Tell me what you want.”

“Ah, straight to business, is it? Sorry for prattling—I’m just so excited to finally talk to you after watching you this long. Well then: I need you to bring me the BlizzCon trophy.”

ByuN couldn’t stop himself from letting out a laugh. “I’m not sure you noticed, but I haven’t been able to play much StarCraft lately. I’ve been busy chasing around some fuckhead who kidnapped my dog.”

“Oh, don’t sell yourself so short. I wouldn’t ask if I didn’t believe you were the perfect man for the job. I’ve seen the things you’ve done, and I know what you’ve become. You can be ten times the player you ever were.”

“For some strange reason, I don’t quite trust you. So how about MY proposition: I find you, rescue Ren, and rip your fucking head off.”

The man on the phone made a few chiding noises before responding.

“So suspicious! The fact that you’re even alive and talking to me should prove the sincerity of my intentions. Nevertheless, I’ve prepared a token of good faith.”

The call ended with a beep.

ByuN glanced around the room, trying to process the influx of new information. Where was the hidden surveillance he had missed? Had he been followed? Was it possible the caller was close by? At the same time, he went over his mental list of potential enemies—anyone he might have slighted or aggrieved in his entire life—for the thousandth time, trying to identify the voice.

His thoughts were interrupted by the faint echo of a yelp. ByuN froze, wondering if his mind was playing tricks on him. The sound came forth again, closer and louder.

“Ren?”

He could hear the pitter-patter of tiny paws as well.

“REN!” the dog scampered through the doorway and leapt into ByuN’s waiting arms.

“Oh Ren, I’m so sorry. I’m so sorry I let them take you. It’s all my fault. My fault that I was away. I’ll make it all up to you, I promise.” Ren didn’t mind that ByuN’s face was damp with tears, giving him several healthy licks.

Abruptly, Ren bared his teeth and began to growl.

“What’s the matter, boy? Is something wrong?”

Ren’s growling grew fiercer, before shifting into a soft whimper. ByuN could feel Ren begin tremble in pain as he tried to bury himself deeper into his arms.

The phone rang again.

“You piece of shit, what have you—”

“Shut your mouth. I’ve had a device surgically implanted in your dog. It gives me control over its worthless life. If you try to remove the device, your dog will die. If you try to run away and disappear, your dog will die. If you continue to pursue me, your dog will die. If you do not deliver me the BlizzCon trophy, your dog will FUCKING DIE. Are we clear?”

“Clear.” said ByuN, his voice almost a whisper.

“Good. Now get to work.”

ByuN let the phone clatter to the ground, and cradled Ren’s limp body in his arms. He had stopped shaking, but it was clear whatever had happened had taken its toll. The only movement was his little chest, which rose and fell with every weak breath.

ByuN gave Ren’s head a soft stroke.

“Yeah. It’s time to get to work.”


TO BE CONTINUED....?
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Destructicon
Profile Blog Joined September 2011
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Last Edited: 2016-09-27 02:55:30
September 27 2016 02:49 GMT
#45
Chapter 1: A Return on Dark Wings

It was a gloomy night over the city of Gangnam, the sky was obscured by a thick blanket of clouds and from their depths rain poured as if commanded by the wrath of some god. The air was cold and the streets dark, occasionally illuminated by brilliant bolts of lightning piercing the sky.

Despite its cultural and economic significance even on the best of days the street were considered a nasty place to be at night. In a particularly nasty side of town a ferocious firefight was raging between the boys in blue and one of the big gangs.

The police were outnumbered and severely outgunned. The SKTers were not only well organized they were lead by the fearsome lycanthrope soO. In a desperate attempt to save his men, chief commissioner Stork attempted to draw the assailants away, taunting them initially then stunning them with a noise grenade.

It worked; the stunned SKTers stopped shooting for a moment, allowing the police to execute a tactical retreat while Stork ran through an alley in an attempt to further confuse them. Stork however didn’t make it far as the swift soO had spotted and ran him into a dead end.

The beast approached and spoke in a growl: End of the line, you old dinosaur.
Stork: Hey show some respect sonny, I managed to get my first gold before you were even in diapers.
soO spoke with a maddening rage in his eyes as he approached: I will tear…

Before he could finish his sentence a mysterious object cut across his vision and sliced a scar across his face.
soO scanned the area, trying to get a lock on his new assailant, the first thing he picked up was as the heel of a boot, it connected with his face, knocking him back and smashing him into a brick wall.
The lycan lumbered forward leaving behind the indentation it left in the wall.
As his gaze cleared he saw his enemy, but couldn’t make out his features as they were concealed in some kind of full body tactical armor surrounded in a cape.

Still it was just one human against the deadliest beast in Gangnam. soO closed the distance quickly, trying to get in a few jabs, his foe evaded the hits with grace.

Mysterious stranger: Fast, strong, deadly, however your rage makes you predictable.
And with that the stranger sidestepped one of soO’s hits and got another kick into the back, smashing it face first into the wall. He then pirouetted around while drawing a concealed shuriken like object from his belt and throwing it towards the best.

soO turned back and staggered forward only to catch the glimmer of his worst nightmare approaching.
His eyes widened this time out of fear as he screamed: Silver!

The object caught soO straight in the back despite him now running for his life with a superhuman speed.

The mysterious stranger turned towards Stork, who had to catch his jaw from dropping before he spoke: Who, who are you?

MS spoke in a brooding voice: I am disappointed you don’t recognize me old friend.
Stork’s next words came with a mix of surprise, awe and fear: How is it possible? We all thought you were dead.
MS: I nearly was, that run in with Poison Ivy and her special leach Seed’s nearly did me in. Afterwards my former mentor, Gerard Al’Ghul, had his entire league hunt me down.

Stork: So that’s why you were gone for so long, but what became of the league?
MS next words were in a even deeper tone: The League of Injustice is no more and Gerard is exactly where he deserves to be.
Stork: What will you do now?
MS: Clean up Gangnam.

Chapter 2: Dishonor among thieves
The NumNumNum was one of the most reputable chicken restaurant in the entire city, providing exquisite dishes to the upper echelon of Gangnam.

It was also the favorite meeting place of the most infamous families and gangs the city had the honors to grace.
On this particular night it would serve many guests, some of them arrived and were promptly escorted back to the “VIP” lounge.

There gathered the big 4, KT, SKT1, Jin Air and CJ.

After all the attendees were seated the head of the SKT1’s, the infamous INnoVation spoke:
As chief representative of the strongest family, it is our duty to…

He didn’t get to finish as he was rudely interrupted.

herO: Now just hold on a moment there, how is your family the strongest when you lost to Samsung?
INnoVation: Hey you lost to them as well!
herO: At least I didn’t lose to that fossil Stork!

Stats screamed from the fridge: Hey who ate my sandwich?!

aLive walks past eating a sandwich without anyone noticing him.

TY: It’s clear that you are neither the strongest any more nor is your clan the most powerful, why don’t you let the professional’s devise a plan of attack.
herO: That’s rich coming from a guy that lost to Curious!
Zest: True but you lost to Reality!

herO’s sunny disposition suddenly darkened as he turned away to silently weep.

Dark: Speaks the guy that lost in his best MU on the same day to TaeJa AND Ryung!

A full on argument had ensued with all sides flinging mud and nasty words at each other.
Suddenly the lights cut out and the participants were enveloped in shadows.

Zest: Wtf just happened?
INnoVation: What kind of trickery is this, I don’t eve…
The sound of trampling and a heavy metallic clank of metal on wood suddenly echoed through the darkness and INnoVation went silent.

The KeSPA’s were now frantically producing light from all available sources, phones, lighters, flashlights and trying franticly to get a fix on their assailant as he stealthily took down victim after victim.

ByuL: What was tha…

Another thud could be heard and ByuL was suddenly silent.

Despair was now floating in the air as the KeSPA’s started opening fire at the slightest sound or sight of trouble, but it was futile as one after another they were taken down by the shadowy figure, the last sight to grace their eyes was that of a bat-like figure.

INnoVation was the first to wake-up again, this time not in his usual elegant attire but in a prison uniform.
He could see through the bars of his cell that his former partners in crime were waking up to a similar experience and all throughout the corridors of the prison only disgruntled moans could be heard.
The next day in the prison courtyard they all gathered to talk.

Zest: This is all your fault, you and your “strongest family”.
INnoVation: I didn’t see you out-thinking yourself out of that situation any better then us.
herO: How could you? You were out cold!

More arguing ensued when suddenly a new figure broke in, easily distinguished by his pale complexion and scars, he strode to the center of them all and went: Why so serious?!

Zest: Who are you?
sOs: Someone who wants the same thing as you, to defeat the bat!
Dark: And what kind of a plan could a joker like you come up with?
sOs: One so crazy he could never see coming!
Dark: Ok we don’t need none of your crazy talk any more.
And as Dark approached sOs to get rid of him, sOs turns and says: Now for my next trick I shall make this hatchery disappear!
Dark: What the…? And sudden horror filled his heart as the sound of warp blades cut through his precious hatchery and his innocent little drones. The sight was enough to send Dark collapsing in a fear induced stupor.

sOs: Now do I have your full attention? Good! Now listen up, the best way to defeat the bat is to sow a little chaos, introduce a bit of anarchy into this situation.
Zest: And how do we do that?
sOs: By bringing the bat into OUR world!

Chapter 3: Siege on KeSPA Asylum

At Wayne manor, ByuN was enjoying his morning tea, studying the stock market when a priority message came through.

ByuN: Alfred, patch it through.
Alfred Puppyworth: Yes master ByuN.

On all the plasma TV’s in the main living room the same news feed, but from different outlets was now being broadcast, showing the same issue, KeSPA Asylum was under siege, from within. Images of prisoners escaping, guards being assaulted, overpowered and captured were on full display, with a small message from the Weekly Planetoid: “Can the caped crusader crack this one?”.

Alfred: This situation is quite nasty master ByuN.
ByuN: All the better to give the prisoners a false sense of security.

ByuN rose and made his way towards a inconspicuous grandfather clock and rotated the dials back and forth in precise sequence until the clock slid aside, revealing a secret passage.

Alfred: I take it you won’t be finishing your tea sir.
ByuN: Quite right Alfred, I also need you to pull up plans of the Asylum, complete with the best angles of entry and most likely locations to keep prisoners. Afterwards send the flyer ahead and survey the building, cross evaluate their movements to the schematics to pinpoint where they are keeping the prisoners.
Alfred: Very well master ByuN, what about you?
ByuN: I’ll drive in through the front door.
Alfred: With all due respect sir but that sounds like suicide, you’d be walking into a trap.
ByuN: It doesn’t matter, once I’m in can also pinpoint their contacts and crack into their network, find out how they communicate, how they smuggled weapons into the Asylum and break their organizations once and for all!
ByuN: Besides, think of it this way, it won’t be me trapped in there with them, it’ll be them trapped in there with me!
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Waxangel
Profile Blog Joined September 2002
United States33492 Posts
September 27 2016 04:14 GMT
#46
The deadline for entrees has passed! I'll be judging and awarding prizes soon™
AdministratorHey HP can you redo everything youve ever done because i have a small complaint?
Blargh
Profile Joined September 2010
United States2103 Posts
September 27 2016 04:17 GMT
#47
NO WAIT. LEMME ADD MINE.

It's a cold morning with a bit of a drizzle. Umbrella in one hand, leash in the other, Byun is walking his puppy, and decides to get a hot latte on his way back to his apartment. Byun ties up his pooch's leash, leaving his umbrella perched up for his dog before he heads into the coffee shop.
As he's opening the door, the knot on the leash comes loose, and with the passing of a nearby truck, Byun's dog speeds down in the road. Byun swears and runs after in pursuit. Only concerned with one thing, the puppy keeps running, until suddenly, he jumps right into someone's arms. Byun calls, with his dog paying little attention to his owner. As Byun begins to apologize, he realizes that he's standing right before a legend. The puppy must be drawn to perfection, as it was none other than Innovation standing there. Innovation just smiles while continuing to scratch the puppy's head.
The two of them laugh while Innovation hands the puppy back over to Byun. Byun, still embarrassed by the whole incident, shyly asks if Innovation would like to come get some coffee with him. Innovation delightedly agrees, as they walk back towards the local coffee shop.
And so began a romance like no other. Byun ❤️ Innovation.
MrFerkles
Profile Joined September 2013
3 Posts
October 05 2016 08:21 GMT
#48
On September 27 2016 13:14 Waxangel wrote:
The deadline for entrees has passed! I'll be judging and awarding prizes soon™

I thought the soon™ was a joke. Guess the joke is on me!
Waxangel
Profile Blog Joined September 2002
United States33492 Posts
Last Edited: 2016-10-07 21:36:08
October 07 2016 21:32 GMT
#49
Winners have been announced (check the OP)! Please read the stories, if you dare.
AdministratorHey HP can you redo everything youve ever done because i have a small complaint?
Cricketer12
Profile Blog Joined May 2012
United States13990 Posts
October 07 2016 21:37 GMT
#50
damn seeker got a pencil, i'm jelly
Chain 1 Arthalion Chain 2 Urgula Chain 3 Mululu Chain 4 Lukias
NinjaToss
Profile Blog Joined October 2015
Austria1383 Posts
October 07 2016 21:48 GMT
#51
damn all I wanted was for the senpais to follow me on Twitter man
I'm sorry for all those that got their hearts broken by Zest | Zest, Bisu, soO, herO, MC, Maru, TY, Rogue, Trap, TaeJa", Favourite foreigners: ShoWTimE, Snute, Serral and Nerchio| KT BEST KT |
Blargh
Profile Joined September 2010
United States2103 Posts
October 07 2016 22:55 GMT
#52
omg. Those mystery prizes. Wax pls, you must make Byun read the winner's fanfic. You've got to!
ZigguratOfUr
Profile Blog Joined April 2012
Iraq16955 Posts
October 08 2016 18:25 GMT
#53
I would like to say thank you to all my fans for supporting me. I will try to show better games in the future.
plogamer
Profile Blog Joined January 2012
Canada3132 Posts
October 08 2016 19:16 GMT
#54
On October 09 2016 03:25 ZigguratOfUr wrote:
I would like to say thank you to all my fans for supporting me. I will try to show better [memes] in the future.


Fixed that for you.
Nakajin
Profile Blog Joined September 2014
Canada8989 Posts
October 08 2016 19:24 GMT
#55
On October 09 2016 03:25 ZigguratOfUr wrote:
I would like to say thank you to all my fans for supporting me. I will try to show better games in the future.


I want a part two!

"Path of war" telling how Buyn acheive his revenge for his puppy, help by a misterious chinese organisation with hidden motivation.

And then a part three telling how Buyn was just a tool of the chineses to weaken Korean sc2 and distract them of the real treat, a long plan attack using a firefighter truck.

I also would like a movie adaptation, but it can wait a couple of month.
Writerhttp://i.imgur.com/9p6ufcB.jpg
beentheredonethat
Profile Joined May 2016
2934 Posts
October 10 2016 10:54 GMT
#56
Congratulations to the winners!
"Micro tricks like marine splitting, blink stalker micro, and ling/baneling wars were the apex of the game’s achievements; nothing in the world takes your breath away like watching a pro player split marines like a god."
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