EPTOn November 29 2010 14:25 Truenappa wrote:
Wow this is incredible! I really hope this gets continued for a long time to come. Pure TL gold right here
One semi-short comment: I saw a lot of typos and grammatical errors in the beginning which leads me to think the issue wasn't given a lot of time for gathering the usually required critical distance between the initial writing and publication. Normally I wouldn't say anything as this is a internet thing, and a gaming thing, and these two don't usually point towards syntactic accuracy, but like a fucking DT the following thought crept up on me: "man they better fix that kind of stuff if TL's name is on the cover." I've become an self-righteous elitist when it comes to TL, and duly so. The standards are quite high. I recommend a quick break to clear the head before starting revisions, or passing it along to another non-involved reader (I volunteer!) to check for this kind of stuff. Best of luck and I look forward to no. 2!
Wow this is incredible! I really hope this gets continued for a long time to come. Pure TL gold right here
One semi-short comment: I saw a lot of typos and grammatical errors in the beginning which leads me to think the issue wasn't given a lot of time for gathering the usually required critical distance between the initial writing and publication. Normally I wouldn't say anything as this is a internet thing, and a gaming thing, and these two don't usually point towards syntactic accuracy, but like a fucking DT the following thought crept up on me: "man they better fix that kind of stuff if TL's name is on the cover." I've become an self-righteous elitist when it comes to TL, and duly so. The standards are quite high. I recommend a quick break to clear the head before starting revisions, or passing it along to another non-involved reader (I volunteer!) to check for this kind of stuff. Best of luck and I look forward to no. 2!
Don't forget that the writers decided to not change any quotes, even if they contain grammatical errors, it's 100% the original quote.
As a memo to everyone, if you want to get into the next edition be sure to watch your spelling, it may increase your chances!
