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Pony Tales #1 - Page 15
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dmans
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Danglars
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BIG PROPS to the Epic Fail page of posters with a clue! | ||
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Caltrop
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Liked the quotes; all of them! | ||
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quaren
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Dox
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Ethelis
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On November 29 2010 10:32 dmans wrote: baller magazine its only baller til baller is in it. "Dear baller" column gogo | ||
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Ariwa
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uglymoose89
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Cyber_Cheese
Australia3615 Posts
now to ponder what i could add to future issues... | ||
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Niten
United States598 Posts
One semi-short comment: I saw a lot of typos and grammatical errors in the beginning which leads me to think the issue wasn't given a lot of time for gathering the usually required critical distance between the initial writing and publication. Normally I wouldn't say anything as this is a internet thing, and a gaming thing, and these two don't usually point towards syntactic accuracy, but like a fucking DT the following thought crept up on me: "man they better fix that kind of stuff if TL's name is on the cover." I've become an self-righteous elitist when it comes to TL, and duly so. The standards are quite high. I recommend a quick break to clear the head before starting revisions, or passing it along to another non-involved reader (I volunteer!) to check for this kind of stuff. Best of luck and I look forward to no. 2! | ||
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