This is quite a good story, keeps you wanting to read more

i dont see what was so predictable about it

and for the most part it is fairly plausible... camden is every bit as big of a shithole as it is made up to be, and NYU students are every bit as depraved as they are made out to be

MangoTango

United States3670 Posts

February 04 2011 15:54 GMT

#123

This story is so intense. Thanks for posting it.

NIIINO

Slovakia1320 Posts

February 04 2011 16:02 GMT

#124

if its true or fake i dont care i had great time by reading it.
thanks for sharing.

RiotSpectre

United States163 Posts

February 04 2011 16:27 GMT

#125

Almost certainly a work of pure fiction, but an entertaining read nonetheless.

TALegion

United States1187 Posts

February 04 2011 16:43 GMT

#126

I want a movie/short film made of this.

uiCk

Canada1925 Posts

February 04 2011 16:54 GMT

#127

PanzerKing

United States483 Posts

February 04 2011 17:31 GMT

#128

I don't want to bag on an aspiring writer, but as a prosecutor from the city, this was a little too far-fetched and ridiculous for first-person narration. That said, it must have been a lot of fun for the writer, and I encourage him to keep writing as long as he enjoys it.

deadcowboy

Germany74 Posts

February 04 2011 17:32 GMT

#129

The best part was where the NYPD detective gives out crucial police information about a possible murder suspect to an anonymous caller.

HighC

United States12 Posts

February 04 2011 17:48 GMT

#130

Anyone who writes like this doesn't/didn't sell heroine for a living. That's not a compliment about the writing either.

RoosterSamurai

Japan2108 Posts

February 04 2011 18:05 GMT

#131

This was actually a pretty interesting story. Is there a movie about this? If not, there should be.

IntoTheBush

United States552 Posts

February 04 2011 18:42 GMT

#132

awesome story. Selling Boy can be crazy. Crazy people do crazy drugs, so the dealers gotta have a bit of crazy in them too

arterian

Canada1157 Posts

February 04 2011 19:01 GMT

#133

I love stories like this. Just read the whole thing in one sitting.

In)Spire

United States1323 Posts

February 04 2011 20:00 GMT

#134

That was an awesome story. Totally worth the time to read.

Quanticfograw

United States2053 Posts

February 04 2011 20:06 GMT

#135

pretty nutty, be careful you don't get popped posting things like this

Xapti

Canada2473 Posts

February 04 2011 22:00 GMT

#136

This is a nice story, but for a story that is pretending to be real, I feel that it is a pretty mediocre-at-best story if it isn't actually real (which I'd have to say is quite likely).

If a guy was actually in this scenario, giving details that how he got questioned, went to NYU, had a girlfriend alibi, knew paul and flushed the H down the toilet, gave the anonymous tip, etc. would result in further investigation by the police I'd say.

I like hearing incredible true stories, but if it's not a true story then it needs to be FAR better than incredible.
I feel quite disappointed overall, but at least it was something to entertain a bit.

Edt:
It's probably not even necessary to elaborate more, but the police could probably have quite easily compared the protagonist's voice with the anonymous tip calls (since I believe all such calls are recorded) also, which obviously would have stirred things up.