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kamkerx
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States264 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-12-11 07:48:45
December 11 2011 06:06 GMT
#1


I used audacity and some crappy mic that i borrowed to record this.
If your want more please subscribe and show some support thanks. If you don't like it please rip me apart in comments. By the way there were tons of spelling errors till the most badass English major fixed them.

lyrics:
If I could show you my dreams and everything that I've seen maybe you'd believe I'm not quite what I seem. I've got appreciation for things that you cant even conceive have aspiration to be something that I cant perceive. I cant see where I'm going, guess it's destined to be but falling's not eZ take that lesson from me. Everything's in my head I just press to receive I fast forward time I don't have patience to see .
I don't see eye to eye with anybody. I'd die before I choose to sit on somebody's side and pacify.
Live so fast I'm passing you by, I strive to try always, if I'm still alive, I promise i'll make it I know I'll survive

Look in the mirror in your eyes what do you see?
I see opportunity. I see the possibilities.
Gambling's the enemy you have to jump and just believe no one's standing under me. I'm fucking probability .


Good is enough for the good not the great.
I won't wait for my life because I'm faster than fate.
So you can try to erase the past,
but the future is coming fast.
I won't take no for an answer. I would have rather have failed but at least took the chance. There's no looking back. Success and failure follow but I just walk down the path. It's eZ to make it, but hard to believe that.

It's time to die, bitch! Honestly why do I still try to see eye to eye when the higher I climb the brighter the fire inside of my whole soul ignites my desire to find a way out of my mind? I'm not rapping, I'm just passing the time between being alive and winding up inside of the ground with a smile on my face and the crown on the place where it belongs on top of my head. Yeah, when I said forever., I even meant when I'm dead.


I've got your heart trapped inside of my prison, cardiac arrest, and you don't even know why you listen. In fact, I must confess that I'm faithless but I feel blessed to have known you. You have my respect.
never let nobody tell you better mistakes will fade but dead's forever.

The second your eyes open the clock starts ticking and with it your life's limit is slimming and your visit on earth and each moment spent sitting is worse than not knowing it's over. Is it a gift or a curse?

Good is enough for the good not the great.
I won't wait for my life because I'm faster than fate.
So you can try to erase the past,
but the future is coming fast.
I won't take no for an answer. I would have rather have failed but at least took the chance. There's no looking back. Success and failure follow but I just walk down the path. It's eZ to make it, but hard to believe that. (C)

*
kamkerx
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States264 Posts
December 11 2011 06:10 GMT
#2
please give feed back if you like it or not and feel free to ask questions or post your own songs
snorlax
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
United States755 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-12-11 06:32:18
December 11 2011 06:30 GMT
#3
this isn't even rap its like KPOP
Mothra
Profile Blog Joined November 2009
United States1448 Posts
December 11 2011 06:32 GMT
#4
You know, I think the lyrics are actually pretty good. You've got some talent in writing. The music and rapping I felt was kind of weak, but I'm sure you'd get better with practice. Thanks for sharing.
kamkerx
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States264 Posts
December 11 2011 06:34 GMT
#5
thanks means a lot to have positive comments
Samp
Profile Joined September 2010
Canada783 Posts
December 11 2011 06:50 GMT
#6
nice lyrics.
I wont wait for my life because Im faster than fate, thats actually really good ;O
Banelings, "They're cute, they live in a nest". -Artosis
skYfiVe
Profile Joined April 2010
United States382 Posts
December 11 2011 07:12 GMT
#7
It kind of sounds like you didn't practice actually singing the song itself too much, but like the other said, the lyrics are pretty sick. Maybe just take some more time to really learn to enunciate everything properly while singing and practice more ^^. Nj though
"1baseiwa"
kamkerx
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States264 Posts
December 11 2011 07:17 GMT
#8
tomorrow im going to record again to see if i can make it sound better. Does any one have any recording tips?
Latrommi
Profile Blog Joined March 2011
United States222 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-12-11 07:18:56
December 11 2011 07:17 GMT
#9
At some points the lyrics seem slurred, but I love the song. Its a great song overall, I'm looking forward to more coming from you

EDIT: Also, I think you should add some sort of a fading at the end. I didn't like the abrupt-ness as much.
Possibly the best thread ever http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=232912&currentpage=All
kamkerx
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States264 Posts
December 11 2011 07:26 GMT
#10
lol. ok it actually ended so abruptly because the beat goes on for 1 more verse but i didnt write another verse and didnt want to write one for the sake of writing one cause it wouldn't have meaning then. but for the fading im defiantly going to add that i should have done it before but im lazy. and sorry for the slurred i kept trying to record the same thing like 2 or 3 times so it would have a chorus effect but since it sounds slurred im just going to record once then add a delay effect to make chorus.
ty for advice (:
heroofcanton
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States167 Posts
Last Edited: 2011-12-11 07:42:02
December 11 2011 07:38 GMT
#11
On December 11 2011 15:06 kamkerx wrote:
http://youtu.be/KIcbhA0VzYI

I used audacity and some crappy mic that i borrowed to record this.
If your want more please subscribe and show some support thanks. If you don't like it please rip me apart in comments. By the way there were tons of spelling errors but some badass English major fixed them.

lyrics:
If I could show you my dreams and everything that I've seen maybe you'd believe I'm not quite what I seem. I've got appreciation for things that you cant even conceive have aspiration to be something that I cant perceive. I cant see where I'm going, guess it's destined to be but falling's not eZ take that lesson from me. Everything's in my head I just press to receive I fast forward time I don't have patience to see .
I don't see eye to eye with anybody. I'd die before I choose to sit on somebody's side and pacify.
Live so fast I'm passing you by, I strive to try always, if I'm still alive, I promise i'll make it I know I'll survive

Look in the mirror in your eyes what do you see?
I see opportunity. I see the possibilities.
Gambling's the enemy you have to jump and just believe no one's standing under me. I'm fucking probability .


Good is enough for the good not the great.
I won't wait for my life because I'm faster than fate.
So you can try to erase the past,
but the future is coming fast.
I won't take no for an answer. I would have rather have failed but at least took the chance. There's no looking back. Success and failure follow but I just walk down the path. It's eZ to make it, but hard to believe that.

It's time to die, bitch! Honestly why do I still try to see eye to eye when the higher I climb the brighter the fire inside of my whole soul ignites my desire to find a way out of my mind? I'm not rapping, I'm just passing the time between being alive and winding up inside of the ground with a smile on my face and the crown on the place where it belongs on top of my head. Yeah, when I said forever., I even meant when I'm dead.


I've got your heart trapped inside of my prison, cardiac arrest, and you don't even know why you listen. In fact, I must confess that I'm faithless but I feel blessed to have known you. You have my respect.
never let nobody tell you better mistakes will fade but dead's forever.

The second your eyes open the clock starts ticking and with it your life's limit is slimming and your visit on earth and each moment spent sitting is worse than not knowing it's over. Is it a gift or a curse?

Good is enough for the good not the great.
I won't wait for my life because I'm faster than fate.
So you can try to erase the past,
but the future is coming fast.
I won't take no for an answer. I would have rather have failed but at least took the chance. There's no looking back. Success and failure follow but I just walk down the path. It's eZ to make it, but hard to believe that. (C)


Fixed that for you. I wouldn't have done this if I didn't actually really like the lyrics.
The hero of Canton, the man they call me.
kamkerx
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States264 Posts
December 11 2011 07:44 GMT
#12
<3
Br3ezy
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
United States720 Posts
December 11 2011 07:53 GMT
#13
eh what other stuff do you have
Check out my guide to mechanics http://www.teamliquid.net/forum/viewmessage.php?topic_id=319876
jubil
Profile Blog Joined March 2011
United States2602 Posts
December 11 2011 08:01 GMT
#14
I was pleasantly surprised, especially liked the beats - simple, elegant, catchy (maybe not top #1 billboard earworm status but very good)

overall rhymes and playing with sounds and stuff was pretty good, the biggest constructive comment I have (besides the abrupt ending) is on a conceptual level - I don't see an overall point/direction, or a structure to the song, other than a sort of basic nebulous message of "i'm tough and i'm gonna make it". I wanna hear what you physically did or can do, like specifically tell me how great your rap is or how certain people were hating or doubting or something.

Also, just my personal taste but I especially love clever metaphors, can consider using some : P

Sometimes when I'm bored in class I'll try and write raps, it's hard to get em to actually sound good - this stuff is actually pretty impressive
Marineking-Polt-Maru-Fantasy-Solar-Xenocider-Suppy fighting!
kamkerx
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States264 Posts
December 11 2011 08:04 GMT
#15
i dont have other stuff yet br3ezy ive only been writing for about a year now and this was the first time i ever tried to record aside from rap battles with friends
cmen15
Profile Blog Joined December 2010
United States1519 Posts
December 11 2011 08:06 GMT
#16
Yea man this is pretty good!!! I like the lyrics a lot and the beats not bad at all. Like others said just need to fix the end. GJ
Greed leads to just about all losses.
kamkerx
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States264 Posts
December 11 2011 08:18 GMT
#17
jubil. to be honest i really had no direction with the song i sort of just kept writing and then there it was i my self am not completely sure what it means but in the future i will defiantly prioritize progressing and building a song up to the end. as for the clever metaphors i've got a couple in other songs hopefully you'll like them. ty for criticism and you should consider recording some of your rhymes im not gonna lie its pretty fun
kamkerx
Profile Blog Joined August 2011
United States264 Posts
December 11 2011 08:18 GMT
#18
lololol at your name cmen and thanks
Dead9
Profile Blog Joined February 2008
United States4725 Posts
December 11 2011 08:34 GMT
#19
i like it, but the volume on your voice jumps around a bit
mierin
Profile Joined August 2010
United States4943 Posts
December 11 2011 08:48 GMT
#20
The lyrics are pretty sweet...my favorite rapper is Tupac, and that's because of his lyrics. You can always improve your vocal sound, but the inspiration to write is a whole different matter.
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