EPTi dont rap i rape your ears - Page 2
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Atinho
United States36 Posts
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DerNebel
Denmark648 Posts
I think you need to either find some dedicated producer or work on the instrumental part of the song. Also, with those lyrics, I think your style needs to be big in-your-face style, so if you could make your vocals more "dirty"-sounding it would be great. If your voice was a guitar i'd tell you to play electric for this song. Overall, you have the foundation and that is so much better than the flashy kids who only have the execution. | ||
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PUPATREE
340 Posts
Voice is the trickiest one. To me, your voice doesn't radiate with that charisma that all emcees must possess. In my eyes, you could never rock a crowd sounding like that. And maybe that's not a goal of yours or anything, but I don't even feel comfortable grooving out to this song as is. What I did was record myself speaking with different voices until they became more natural. This was necessary for my daily life because I used to use a whiny bitch voice often. Delivery's related. Practice practice practice. Never sound like you're stumbling over your words. Try rapping as fast as you can, try shouting your rhymes, try crying them out, try sprinkling in various amounts of emotion. You're a bit monotonous as is. Cadence is more with your writing. Right now everything seems so linear and even (boring). You shouldn't be chasing the beat, you should be riding it and chopping it up. Have any rappers you like? They probably mix it up too. I listen to cats from project blowed anytime I notice myself sounding stale. I end up biting but whatever ;/ Try writing for a lower tempo? Lyrically you're alright. I generally prefer rap that's less full-sentence-y and more poetry-y, but if this is your style then keep at it. Some lines like 'It's time to die bitch!' seem out of place. Wordplay please though! And no joke, I hear the closet's a great place to record if you have a shitty setup. Fav bit below On December 11 2011 15:06 kamkerx wrote: Honestly why do I still try to see eye to eye when the higher I climb the brighter the fire inside of my whole soul ignites my desire to find a way out of my mind? I'm not rapping, I'm just passing the time between being alive and winding up inside of the ground with a smile on my face and the crown on the place where it belongs on top of my head. Yeah, when I said forever., I even meant when I'm dead. Hwaiting! | ||
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jubil
United States2602 Posts
On December 11 2011 18:11 PUPATREE wrote:I listen to cats from project blowed anytime I notice myself sounding stale oh man, some quality rap right there | ||
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Charlatan
Australia27 Posts
As for as the lines themselves, they're pretty good. I kind of wish you'd include more polysyllabic and internal rhymes. What are some of your influences? | ||
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kamkerx
United States264 Posts
dernebel hey i agree i sound super weak and need to try to find a way to be edgeir hopefully by turning my mic up like i said that will help a little. also and this is off topic do you like the band rammstein because your name is 1 of there songs anyways thank you guys for advice and everyone who commented you gave a lot of good criticism. | ||
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Latrommi
United States222 Posts
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kamkerx
United States264 Posts
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vlaric
United States412 Posts
beat was sick weird too, imo. just not my thing. | ||
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