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I got a suggestion from Jay at the label to remake my old song Twilight Reality. He thought it could be nice if the production was just a little better. So, since i have a free day tomorrow i decided to pull a music allnighter getting a draft togheter.
Im planning on getting malva to sing the vocals again since her job with come home was just totally kick ass. I originally made this song for a male voice, but it will just be amazingly much better with her voice. so ill go with that.
Oh and btw, i just heared today that this label managed to get a tune in Armins ASOT series. I dont know which episode, but look out for "Dema" by Alexis Mixail. Thats a pretty kickass achievement for a 2 month old label, so mabye some doors will open in 2011
http://soundcloud.com/kristofferelmqvist/kristoffer-elmqvist-twilight
As usual, listen if you want to, and any feedback is cool. This is however a work in progress, unmastered bla bla version. I havent even gotten to listen to it in my monitors yet, so there might be some slight distortion i accidentally missed!
/kRIS
EDit: THis is a remix of the original song using the original lyrics and vocals.
http://soundcloud.com/kristofferelmqvist/starstruck-twilight-reality-starstrucks-burning-down-the-house-remix
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I liked it.
Don't know much about making songs so I can't be of much help but I liked it. lol
Although I think 2:00 to 2:45 lasts just a few seconds too long. And maybe something else at 3:49/3:50 to catch a bit more attention instead of just fading out again. Doesn't need to be for more than a second or two. Just my two cents. Ending also needs work it doesn't really feel like the end of the song... just kinda like... it's all you could think of so it's going to end lol. How it feels to me anyway =/
Good job over all it was a relaxing 5 minutes.
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you're just getting a 4min (edit: 5min) clip from a 8 min song. It is a preview after all The intro and outro has been cut off. Also take into consideration that there is supposed to be vocals on top of this, which is why i dont want to cloud it with layers, when i dont know how much place the vocals will take. Valid point with the fades though, i am absolutelly not done there, and ill try to come up with something interesting Thanks for listening!
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well at least that explains why it doesn't sound like it finishes lol. good luck with the rest.
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done a pretty big update on the track, and i also managed to book Malva to sing the vocals on this track aswell. Its gonna be banging
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