Hey guys so I was trying to think of a good map concept and this layout came up. So I was wondering if you guys could give me some feedback on what would help balance this map and make it better

Decoration is still a bit rough, but that's not as important since it's not a final version
Map Name: The D
Author: traceurling
Size: 96 x 96
Terrain: Jungle World
Players: 2
Playtype: Ground
Version: 1.1

Features:
-long, vertical, central ridge
-close air distances
-neutral command center
-neutral creep at 12 o' clock
-gas only base at at the top of the ridge
-10th mineral patch in main is reduced to 500 minerals

Map Image:

"My naked weapon is out." -Shakespeare

Communications Established…
General Loffier: HQ, requesting comsat scan on terrain.
HQ: Copy that General, comsat incoming
*scan*
Private Molpus: My God Sir, is that a giant…
General Loffier: Yes son, it is. It appears we will be fighting for our lives on top of and around a giant penis.
Private Molpus: Good God…I don’t want to die on a dick.
General Loffier: Sergeant Olesen! Sergeant Boudle!
Sergeant Olesen and Boudle: Yes, Sir!
General Loffier: Olesen, I want you to oversee base operations, begin erecting our structures on top of the scrotum immediately! Boudle, head an expeditionary force, you will have one team take the head, and another to advance through the surrounding brush and take up a position on the base of the shaft. Your force must penetrate any resistance, and do not rest until you have a firm grip upon the shaft!
Sergeants: Aye, Sir!
General Loffier: Corporal Portim, I want a detailed map of the area. Make a rough draft of the terrain by drawing your genitals.
Corporal Portim: Aye, sir.
General Loffier: I can’t wait to meat the enemy.

Changes
-Added more creep to top
-Decoration
-Made more area unbuildable
-Made the tip of the ridge buildable
-Tested and fixed Protoss FFE Wall

Protoss Wallins
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Download Link

Old Versions
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Version 1.0
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Inspired by This Map

This is my first time with working with 96^2, so use of space isn't optimal...don't know how to Terran wall D:

Suggestions/comments on how to improve gameplay/balance/anything pertaining to the map etc. would be appreciated

Hope you guys like it and get some good laugh/games out of it

Kergy

Peru2011 Posts

April 02 2013 04:43 GMT

exactly what i expected

Black[CAT]

Malaysia2589 Posts

April 02 2013 04:51 GMT

D? Yea, I can see that we need good defenses on this map.

Grobyc

Canada18410 Posts

April 02 2013 04:51 GMT

I was expecting the map to look like more of a penis.

traceurling

United States1240 Posts

April 02 2013 04:56 GMT

I'm not good with 96^2 maps...maybe if I did like diagonal symmetry it would've been betterly executed

Crunchums

United States11143 Posts

April 02 2013 04:57 GMT

Terran is unbeatable on this map.

elmerpogs

Philippines441 Posts

April 02 2013 04:59 GMT

LOL

traceurling

United States1240 Posts

April 02 2013 05:00 GMT

I was a bit worried about Terran being OP here cuz of the center ridge as well as defensive tanks being situated in the main...I think Zerg and Protoss might be able to deal with it with air superiority and/or drops...also rest of map is fairly open...any suggestions for balance?

hydrogg

United States377 Posts

April 02 2013 05:05 GMT

arent the 2 bases too close together by air distance? although i guess its not that much closer than python

razorsuKe

Canada1995 Posts

April 02 2013 05:06 GMT

#10

Serious post:
Put mineral line on the outer side of the ball sack so mutas gotta fly around.

traceurling

United States1240 Posts

April 02 2013 05:07 GMT

#11

On April 02 2013 14:05 hydrogg wrote:
arent the 2 bases too close together by air distance? although i guess its not that much closer than python

Yah reason I even attempted it was cuz of Python so it should be possible..just watch out for mutas/drops/carriers...and tanks shouldn't be able to hit the other main, there should be 12 tiles between

~~Otherside as in close to ramp?~~ oops misread outer as other...well right now ZvT has muta harass as an integral part to the MU, and since the Natural's resources aren't harrassable I feel like the main should be...and also I don't want Terrans feeling too secure...

elmerpogs

Philippines441 Posts

April 02 2013 05:07 GMT

#12

There's actually 2 new uploaded dick shaped maps at bwmn I discovered lately. Why do they have to do nasty maps?

traceurling

United States1240 Posts

April 02 2013 05:08 GMT

#13

On April 02 2013 14:07 elmerpogs wrote:
There's actually 2 new uploaded dick shaped maps at bwmn I discovered lately. Why do they have to do nasty maps?

That's just me and my friend getting way too bored and wanting to take a break from working on our serious maps

rainei

Canada1316 Posts

April 02 2013 05:09 GMT

#14

Can you please provide a download link? I would like to do some intial playtesting for balance issues.

-NegativeZero-

United States2141 Posts

April 02 2013 05:11 GMT

#15

On April 02 2013 14:07 elmerpogs wrote:
There's actually 2 new uploaded dick shaped maps at bwmn I discovered lately. Why do they have to do nasty maps?

i hope you realize it's april 1

Edit: at least where i live it is

traceurling

United States1240 Posts

April 02 2013 05:17 GMT

#16

On April 02 2013 14:09 rainei wrote:
Can you please provide a download link? I would like to do some intial playtesting for balance issues.

Updated OP with download link...was trying to make a map that would entertain you guys. But even with fun in mind, I still want to have balance if possible, so if you play any games on this feel free to post them somewhere so I can see some gameplay

GoTuNk!

Chile4591 Posts

April 02 2013 05:34 GMT

#17

LOL good idea
TSL exhibition match should have been played on this map

Deleted User 268575

146 Posts

April 02 2013 05:58 GMT

#18

LOOOL. nice neutral command center by the way. it reminds me of that one game where zero used it on this one map to do infested terran bombs against a protoss... can't recall the game though, maybe baku will though lol

traceurling

United States1240 Posts

April 02 2013 06:15 GMT

#19

On April 02 2013 14:58 Jemah wrote:
LOOOL. nice neutral command center by the way. it reminds me of that one game where zero used it on this one map to do infested terran bombs against a protoss... can't recall the game though, maybe baku will though lol

Kal vs

ZerO on Holy World VOD, I remember watching that game...genius with the Overlord-Infested Terrans...
Shit I just realized you can only distance mine from te 12 o'clock geyser cuz you don't have room to build a Hatch/CC/Nexus up there...I'll fix that tomorrow when I get on computer...also you can hide your Zerg tech in the neutral creep