On January 24 2013 09:55 TheRealArtemis wrote: Jesus. Greenman you are pretty good at the sc2 raps. You two or anybody else interested, should continue and make like a little mini series of sc2 raps ^^^
If you're a noob killa, right click remove sc2 from your computer, then left click move out of the basment to the living room Say "sorry mom and dad, that I am living with you
ROFL. GG line right there.
And then there are people that think like this
On January 22 2013 15:00 Rah wrote: Gl1TCH.. Bacon you killed this thread with that one. That's gonna be hard to follow up, the lyrics at least. Where's Suspense?
and when I was talking about how it makes no sense that people were voting for him...
On January 22 2013 21:27 Bacon-X wrote: I'm sorry but if I lose on the polls for round 2 people are crazy. As far as lyrics go I have -wordplay -metaphors -similes -great rebuttals -new disses
The beat is better and it's mine this time
My flow is way better My delivery is way better
LOL what the hell are people thinking? They must be crazy!!!
don't know what's happening, the world is apparently messed up bro. I've started rapping 1 week ago, but one day, I might jump in this arena. Fear the belgian flow
And what about these lines? Read this...
On January 23 2013 09:46 Bacon-X wrote: Look at my lyrics for Round 2 vs. GreenMan:
Telling me to learn macro? You admitted it// You're a one base all in piece of shit//
One base all ins? That's for beginners// I'll give you macro macaroni for dinner//
You've never been in a fight fool you hug bears// I've won all the fights I've been in, I'm not scared//
This guy is so fake, someone please call the swag police// I'll nuke his base like America did the Japanese//
How are we tied on the polls right now?! This is not only the truth of what GreenMan said... He said "Learn to Macro" and in his next song he said "I do my one base all in builds"... LOL kinda ironic. Also his first song has pictures of him "hugging bears" and in his next song he says he'll "Mash my face in the streets".... ehhh....
And the last 2 lines I showed you... that's like the best 2 lines anybody ever spit about StarCraft hahaha
How are we tied?!?!?! Seriously?!?!?! This should be a landslide victory for me... Something is very wrong with the perception of some of these voters...
Bacon yo.. ez up buddy. lol. this is not a rapping website and yes its a forum based one but based on gaming. Some people have their own likes, dislikes and opinions. I mean its a polling system and sure u can question when it dont make sense to you but u cant question someone for liking something else more lol.
i personally dont care about the poll. i thought it was an awesome idea just to make music and put it out there in the form of a "rap battle". Some people like the music and some dont, ah well ... at least the people that liked them enjoyed them and in the end we had fun doing it ^^ <3
On January 24 2013 11:36 WOPR wrote: Bacon yo.. ez up buddy. lol. this is not a rapping website and yes its a forum based one but based on gaming. Some people have their own likes, dislikes and opinions. I mean its a polling system and sure u can question when it dont make sense to you but u cant question someone for liking something else more lol.
i personally dont care about the poll. i thought it was an awesome idea just to make music and put it out there in the form of a "rap battle". Some people like the music and some dont, ah well ... at least the people that liked them enjoyed them and in the end we had fun doing it ^^ <3
You're right. I believe we are all entitled to our own opinions. In the end the polls don't really matter to me since this is not a rapping website and not everybody here listens to raps hahahaha
But dude you have no idea how awesome I think every single track that came out so far is, including yours and GreenMan's I hope you voted for yourself because you're getting votes too bro.
Can someone challenge me already? Me and GreenMan diss tracks are just over with and continuing with them would be dragging it on... that's how I feel...
Bacon vs. WOPR???
Forget about the quality. You're a damn good rapper and I want to hear more!!!
I need to battle someone else now...
I want at least one more StarCraft rap battle before school starts again in a week... someone please challenge me !!!
Here is my in depth analysis on who I voted for. I will consider my vote like this:
Lyrics 50% Flow 25% Delivery 25%
GreenMan - The Only One (You Will Be Alright) (WOPR Diss) Analysis:
Best lines from GreenMan:
hah, so you begin when warp gate is done? Ur so slow by then my brood lords block out the sun so in a way you were right about some claims you made cuz tonight WOPRs army gon be fighting in the shade
you have a problem son? Your Nexus is on fire so take your crappy 2 base all in back to aiur
Analysis of lyrics
The lyrics I pasted were the ones that really caught my attention. The overall song production is great. You were successful at making a good sounding song and produced it well. The rest of your lyrics were not bad but were not "wow" like the ones that I pasted. The lyrics for the chorus were good but they were not amazing.
Try to use more metaphors and similes, that's the hardest and most creative and fun things to do with lyrics. It will also add a lot more meaning to your lyrics and make them "amazing" lyrics.
Analysis of flow:
You have improved greatly since your first song. It got better and better and this song your skill level is way higher than a scrubbie at rapping. You really improved to the point where I now consider your raps "real rapper raps" because you sounded like a real rapper this time. Your first one was a nice attempt at rapping. Your second one was like half way there. But this time you sounded like a real rapper, you actually had a flow, and I am very happy about this. Keep going with rapping because I see a lot of potential in you.
Analysis of delivery:
In order to have good delivery you need more DOPE lyrics. Lyrics that come out with STRENGTH. because you're saying something very meaningful. I think you should improve on your lyrics and mean what you say more. However you made it very entertaining and the laughing in the background and other background sounds like the "Hihi" part improved on your song and your delivery.
Overall your track was very enjoyable.
WOPR - I'm Here in The Shadows (GreenMan Diss) Analysis:
Best lines from WOPR:
check out the zing, psyonic blades with the blood of him, stephano u and everyface is bling i dont play when my only aims to win, and when i warp then the shit begins
this war time homie, dont given i mean, u might as well cause it is all in i 4 gate easily all of them, im platium, but my rapshit GM
how many times u shake, is it more then 3? he must be thinkin of bisu plz
Analysis of lyrics:
Now that was some BOMB lyrics. That's some dope lyrics for a StarCraft Rap and I think that that is your strength with these StarCraft rap battles. Making some BOMB starcraft rap battle lyrics. The lyrics for the chorus were outstanding! Like GreenMan said, your chorus gets stuck. It's very catchy and perfect for a chorus for a StarCraft song.
Analysis of flow:
This line:
i dont play when my only aims to win, and when i warp then the shit begins
sick flow. The rest of your song your flow was sick. Of course we would all love it if you had a better mic to produce great quality tracks like GreenMan or at least decent quality tracks like mine but your flow outweighs the quality of the production. Your flow makes it enjoyable regardless. Please continue.
Analysis of delivery:
Same thing as analysis of flow. They go hand in hand. I can see you are a very skilled rapper. You already know what you're doing with rapping.
Comparing the two tracks:
GreenMan came out strongly with the great production. His song just came out very enjoyable because he has a great voice I think... That's what I think his main strength was. WOPR had the better lyrics and better chorus. GreenMan really improved on the flow, but WOPR remains the more skilled rapper with his flow and delivery.
I'm not trying to be too harsh on GreenMan but I'm voting based on Lyrics, Flow, and Delivery and it seems that WOPR is the more skilled rapper. Obviously, you can hear he has more experience. But I like you too GreenMan!!
It makes me proud that these are your first raps. I got you started with rapping? Hell yes!!! So as a conclusion, my vote goes for WOPR
holy shit bacon... ur intense when it comes to analysis like wtf. u ever consider starting ur own rap battles tourneys and becoming a judge? i mean ive seen kingofthedot and u got better analysis depth then most of those guys. im looking for a better mic atm, i have a friend thats been producing rap music for like 15 years, im sure when i contact him he'' have an extra one kicking around for me to use in the meantime.
i dont have the patience to go through what u just did so all cred to u bro. and we can start off a round 1 if u like but give me some time to get that mic before i respond. ill be here in the thread and keep u updated. <3
I think I have an edge that can't be seen through technical rap skills as easy, and it is that what I do is so mainstream at it is easy for people to like at first glance. You are right, this is not about who is the best rapper because if it was I wouldnt get a single vote. But as someone said this is a sc2forum and not anything else and I adapted my music to that!
I'm also not very repetetive in my lyrics (except for "call me...), I dont use all in or cheese that much. I also realized from WOPRs track that a chorus helps listening to a song immensly!
So no offense but for an audience that don't have much experience with rap certain styles of rapping gets a bit boring, for example Hazes track.
On January 24 2013 17:05 Mefano wrote: I think I have an edge that can't be seen through technical rap skills as easy, and it is that what I do is so mainstream at it is easy for people to like at first glance. You are right, this is not about who is the best rapper because if it was I wouldnt get a single vote. But as someone said this is a sc2forum and not anything else and I adapted my music to that!
I'm also not very repetetive in my lyrics (except for "call me...), I dont use all in or cheese that much. I also realized from WOPRs track that a chorus helps listening to a song immensly!
So no offense but for an audience that don't have much experience with rap certain styles of rapping gets a bit boring, for example Hazes track.
Well... you have a good sense of what people that don't listen to rap would like in a rap song haha. Very interesting.
But yeah great job on all the tracks I gotta give it to you, they were hilarious. All of our tracks were hilarious... it's a StarCraft rap battle hahahahaha
Yo, I've finished to record my track, I'm making the movie and the upload, it should be up in an hour or so I'm dissing you GreenMan, I hope you'll respond before doing your tutorial raps, i'd love to hear some swedish rap :>
Ok, I've done it. This is my first track, feel free to express what you think about it And yeah, it's very bad
EDIT : I already regret to have posted this :p I've never done anything music related and I'm always off-beat, and the quality is very bad as well... I did like all the possible mistakes, lol, this is embarrassing. Lyrics : + Show Spoiler +
So, Now, I just need to get myself some confidence, BaconX said it would sound cool and it makes sense You don't see it coming but soon, it's gonna be intense Muhahahahaha ! Run away GreenMan, you don't have any chance My rap is like a collossus with thermal lance Lazers on your head, while my zealots dance Now we'll only speak about you, using the past tense I just walked by, but I haven't seen your defence
I should have taken some Bacon, some Haze or a Whooper, Why did I took the greenbean ?
I usually leave the green stuff on my plate but today, i'm gonna eat you, see how you taste GreenMan, today you're going down, this is your fate I feel like eating shit, this isn't right I'm chewing you, and if I should give you a rate It would give you a 1/10 on my good day scale I'm gonna make you regret the day you joined TL The forum is talking about how much you fail Your flow is that bad that you should be in jail
Now I know how an Ultralisk feels next to a marine Did i just walk-by and crushed your spleen ? I'm very sorry, believe me, even though i have a grin (hahahahaha) Some blood on my creep ! it's hard to clean You were just standing there ? durp... i haven't seen But you will clean it for me, oh ! yes you will, mr green That's the kind of task, not even worth the the time for a zergling In my army, you would be ranked weaker than a changeling When my drone come to scout, you lift all your buildings
Yo, GreenMan, You hug a plastic bear, I hug a real one I'm the real overmind, For me they fired Kerrigan I'm playing solid, why are you still doing shenanigans ? Right after, I pwn you, you immediatly requeset a ban Am I so good that you thought i used cheats, mr GreenMan ? I'm walled from your hellion rush with an ultralisk den !
So, this is supposed to be the break where I just talk random stuff... fuck it
Sans transition, c'est maintenant que ça va faire mal Mes zerglings, jamais au repos, toujours en cavale Tout le potentiel de la rime laché dans un animal GreenMan, je vais te bouffer, Bientôt on m'appelra canibal levres retroussées, laissant apparaitre les crocs, comme un chacal T'essaye de fuire, mais je te rattrape, je cours comme un cheval Mes cordes vocales : mon artillerie, je fais pleuvoir les balles Je transforme ta vie en vulgaire fais divers de journal Mets toi un coup de stim, parce que là t'as le teint pàle
Ya tellement de creep que t'as cru que la map était violette Clique le bouton lecture, pour écouter ta défaite Neural parasite dans ta tête je te pête
Rap de barbare J'apparais Comme un batard, Dans ta base, j'ai enterré des cafards Sous tes marines, ya des banelings c'est un cauchemar
Reste Zen Mec, avale ta haine Avec aisance, les rimes j'enchaine Je suis triste de triompher sans peine C'est du creep qui coule dans mes veines T'es sur une base, j'en ai 5, t'es à la traine C'es pitoyable, mec faut que tu t'entraine
GreenMan, you didn't understand a single line Pourtant ma musique fait écho dans ton crane GreenMan, you're going down GreenMan, je donne pas chère de ton ame GreenMan, I'm teaching you new tricks GreenMan, mon rap te file la trique Your skill already reached it's peak GreenMan, Mon rap torture, le tien, pique GreenMan, your rap is a cuddle, mine is a kick Moi je suis toujours calme lorsque tu panique GreenMan, Where is your special tactic ? GreenMan, tu n'as rien de fantastique GreenMan, what the fuck is that nick ? GreenMan, à starcraft, comme en rap, je te nique GreenMan, I'm too good, you can call me freak Désolé mais cet ours là, il n'est pas en plastic GreenMan, Press stop, your brain is gonna melt GreenMan, pour rapper, il ne suffit pas de s'acheter des basket GreenMan, comparing yourself to MVP is not honest GreenMan, T'as vraiment perdu la tête GreenMan, do you know what comes next ?
Ya tellement de creep que t'as cru que la map était violette Clique le bouton lecture, pour écouter ta défaite Neural parasite dans ta tête je te pête
Rap de barbare J'apparais Comme un batard, Dans ta base, j'ai enterré des cafards Sous tes marines, ya des banelings c'est un cauchemar
Reste Zen Mec, avale ta haine Avec aisance, les rimes j'enchaine Je suis triste de triompher sans peine C'est du creep qui coule dans mes veines T'es sur une base, j'en ai 5, t'es à la traine C'es pitoyable, mec faut que tu t'entraine
Diks, that was awesome... i rly enjoyed it lol. love the english-french transitions. Cool shit yo, welcome aboard! add your lyrics under the video in ur post so people can follow along. you hugged the wrong bear lol haha thats awesome
Thank you guys, it means a lot coming from you. I'm opened to criticism though, if you have any advice that you can give, I'd be very pleased to hear. You inspired me to do that BaconX and i had a ton of fun doing it. thank you
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