We got people from Belgium [MC Squared], Sweden [GreenMan & Gene(S)is], Austria [Schelim], United States [California (Me), New Jersey (Haze), & Indiana (Rah)]
And Gene(S)is you can grab any beat off of youtube.com go search for "Rap instrumentals" Or "Hard rap instrumentals" Or "Gangsta Rap Instrumentals" Or even with any artist for example: "Lil Wayne Instrumentals" or "Eminem Instrumentals"
You will find out there are thousands and thousands of rap instrumentals on Youtube. You can download them from Youtube from this site: http://www.listentoyoutube.com/
Download Audacity, it's free, and load the beat in Audacity and record your voice over the beat with the mic. It's as easy as that.
Oh, that's why you were asking? You should put Massachusetts up for me, I grew up around Boston, so I'd have to rep Beantown in something like this. There's things I like about IN, but I haven't been here long. It can't compare to home.
Alright... Rah from Massachusetts!!! I finished the lyrics...Now I just need to record it!!! Coming soon. I hope I can record it today. I'll try to.
I hope the track will be up when I wake up :D
Rah, you can challenge me if you want !!
By the way, I heard that putting egg boxes on the wall makes good sound isolation, is that right and how good it is ? Sound isolation is very bad where i live. I'm searching solution because my neighbours are annoyed and annoying
LYRICS: Battle me You lose... We know you suck If you play me you'll be like what the fuck (What the Fuck?!) Who are you Rah? A white-ra wanna be? It's blasphemy, that didn't even sound like a rap to me, Why is it that whenever we start a game you have to pee What's wrong with you, you scared of me? I'm not scared of you, not barely. Nobody watches your stream, that's really sad Your rap was so bad I should just rap about swag And still win cause I can actually rap, you sounded like crap It's not an opinion, no it's more like a fact I'm evil as hell, I'm what the overmind summoned So whats up fool... why you frontin? Coming up to me like you're all pro and gosu You flow bad I flow cool I do what you don't do You sound bored when you spit your own damn rhymes He talks like he's pro but he's actually lyin
[CHORUS] StarCraft legend bitch I'm FROM the rap academy Why you talking shit? You don't really wanna battle me Your rapping requires more energy You are less than an enemy, Just listen to the rap he sent to me You so Suck, Oh You so suck You so Suck, You SO SUCK. Oh fuck You so Suck, You so suck You so Suck, Oh fuck... You so suck
Rah, I cook your zerglings and eat them raw and when I finish I pick my teeth with the claw You said voters hate me but I'm like naw Look at all the votes I got, yeah rah You can check the polls and see for yourself Hit me up 15 dollars an hour if you need some help Just let me know... I can be your coach Now let me relax as I watch my roach Spit green shit in your face Yeah.... my roach spits green shit in your face You can take GreenMan's place... as my worst opponent You should have expected me to own it, Please take away the moment That I heard your rap, and erase it from my mind
[CHORUS] StarCraft legend bitch I'm FROM the rap academy Why you talking shit? You don't really wanna battle me Your rapping requires more energy You are less than an enemy, Just listen to the rap he sent to me You so Suck, Oh You so suck You so Suck, You SO SUCK. Oh fuck You so Suck, You so suck You so Suck, Oh fuck... You so suck
Nice one, the lyrics were violent. The chorus lines were a bit cheesy but damn you delivered them well. they stuck in my head :D Let the vote begin !
I think you should put the new battles on top on front page (without spoiler, as well as the voting choice), so people will see updates more easily. A lazy TLer that doesn't scroll down could think there's no action here, and it's the exact opposite, hehe btw, can you post the lyrics ?
I'll try to give a detailed resume of my voting, just like you did with greenman and WOPR, it might not be as interesting as yours but i'll make an effort
Gah, this is so hard. I finish the lyrics to take on Greenman and BaconX. Audacity stops recording on its own after a while, so I used the recorder which came with windows, then I try to add it in movie maker to add some pics but the format won't be accepted. And I can hear myself scrolling down the texts when I mouse click, it's so unprofessinal
I know you're going back to school BaconX and probably won't have time to respond to all who battles you, I just want you to know that it's cool, take your time.
On January 29 2013 21:10 Gene(S)is wrote: Gah, this is so hard. I finish the lyrics to take on Greenman and BaconX. Audacity stops recording on its own after a while, so I used the recorder which came with windows, then I try to add it in movie maker to add some pics but the format won't be accepted. And I can hear myself scrolling down the texts when I mouse click, it's so unprofessinal
I know you're going back to school BaconX and probably won't have time to respond to all who battles you, I just want you to know that it's cool, take your time.
PS: Nice songs Diks, french sounds imba to rap in
It's okay if there are small random noises. I personally use the window recorder, then I use sound forge to edit and paste my voice on top of the track. Sound forge also let me tweak the volume and make some little effects. Soundforge is not a free program if you download it legally. I'm really happy you joined the battle
Rah : you have a chance to win, but please, make other tracks either way. You are up against an experienced rapper, a defeat would be logic. Don't surrender so easily. I sense great potential in your track and your voice is a pure pleasure to listen to !
Here is my in depth analysis on who I voted for. I will consider my vote like this Lyrics 50%, Flow and delivery 50%:
Rah - Breakfast (Bacon-X Diss) Analysis:
Best lines from Rah:
"let's be real you never been high enough to play against me, no matter how dead the game gets it still won't let us, this is serious shit to you man to me it's just breakfast, it's time to have a talk about your Kerrigan fetish, no man's been legitly turned on by a redhead, Raynor spent a long ass time in that desert man, Nova's hotter dog but she's probably a lesbian, I'd be getting brain from that Doctor Miss Hanson, I'm talking cosplay you're thinking pixels on tv, that's why I got a girl you don't need comsat to see,"
Analysis of lyrics
I laughed out loud at the last line. In my opinion it's the best line ever posted in this thread. A lot of humour in your lyrics, coupled with the heavy puns aimed at Bacon-X makes it a very strong text. The track is a little too short sized in my opinion,
Analysis of flow and delivery:
Ok, so you did a chill rap, and I have nothing against that, Your track is really easy to listen multiple times in a row. Your voice were quite low, but somehow, it's still really easy to understand evey single line you're rapping. You really fit to this instrumental, which could have been a really hard thing to do for most rappers here. Your voice is awesome and I feel like you're using that advantage way too much : there is like no variation in your track (i know the instrumental didn't really have some, but your rhymes goes AA-BB-CC the whole song, the length of the line, where always almost equal during the whole song. Some variation, either in the way you rap or in the lyric composition, would have make the track less linear. Beside that, it's a really enjoyable track to listen !
Bacon-X - You so suck (Rah Diss) Analysis:
Best lines from Bacon : Who are you Rah? A white-ra wanna be? It's blasphemy, that didn't even sound like a rap to me,
Nobody watches your stream, that's really sad Your rap was so bad I should just rap about swag
Coming up to me like you're all pro and gosu You flow bad I flow cool I do what you don't do
Rah, I cook your zerglings and eat them raw and when I finish I pick my teeth with the claw
You can take GreenMan's place... as my worst opponent You should have expected me to own it, Please take away the moment That I heard your rap, and erase it from my mind
Analysis of lyrics:
Your lyrics were violent, and I like that, because this is a battle rap after all. You did a good job to counter diss him but I got used to hear some better lyrics from you Bacon Some of the lines were a bit cheesy, You're losing points on Lyrics to score on flow and delivery, I'd say you make a advantageous trade on this track, but I know you can have both on mark. I don't give a good note, because I know, like you do, that you used us to better than this.
Analysis of flow and delivery :
I said your chorus's lyrics were a bit cheesy, but the way you deliver them is really really good.. These two lines : "And still win cause I can actually rap, you sounded like crap It's not an opinion, no it's more like a fact" I totally love the way you rapped those lines.
Your flow and delivery were very solid as usual
Comparing the two tracks:
Two very different approaches to the rap and I love that !! Rah came like a fresh wind on our little scene, I had fun listening and rating this battle ! The chill approach of Rah really works well in battle, it's like saying "Make as much noise as you want, i'm not impressed"
For the lyrics : The agressive stance from Bacon is very well executed as susual, most of the lines were some brutal battle rap lyrics, but overall I'll say that Rah wins the contest Lyrics wise, I got multiple smile and even a laugh while listening to his track, and i value that highly.
For the flow and delivery part (i have great difficuly to understand the difference between both) : I'll say that it's a shame that Rah's track was so short and linear, I want to hear more of his voice ! Bacon-X's rap fluent, and his voice carries a lot of energy. Bacon-X wins on this side
IDC about the polls at all. So Rah, if it makes you feel better that you win in the polls and it makes you continue then go ahead. The only poll I really cared about was the original rap battle because that was the whole reason I made this thread. The rest is just whatever to me. Also I went easy on you on the lyrics... if you noticed I didn't have too many StarCraft references... Just look at how many rap battles I did... How many StarCraft punchlines can someone come up with in a week ya know??? but that's because I wanted to save them for my battle vs. Diks. Muahaha!!!
Nah it's not a pride thing for me, I'm just saying if I win then people must really want to hear more from me, so I'd try to deliver. My original plan was to post one for the fuck of it and then stop with that.
People have already posted here that said they liked you and want more. I want more too. So do it regardless. Even if you lose on the polls. Like I said polls don't matter and I believe you are winning on the polls right now!!!
I should say something about your review Diks. I appreciate the feedback. In those final lines that you liked, I changed up my accent to sound more Kanye or something. I don't usually put as much stress on the A sounds like that, but you don't know me well enough to catch that. Other than that though I didn't really change it up, I just did what I think sounds good.
On January 30 2013 07:47 Diks wrote: It would be awesome if Temp0 or Suspense could come here to give us a lesson :p Maybe we should PM them the thread, just in case they are interested ?
Go PM them. Please do.
I already asked my real life friend, the manager of team It'sGosu, to ask MaximusBlack about joining but he told me today that MaximusBlack is just too busy.
On January 30 2013 07:47 Diks wrote: It would be awesome if Temp0 or Suspense could come here to give us a lesson :p Maybe we should PM them the thread, just in case they are interested ?
Go PM them. Please do.
I already asked my real life friend, the manager of team It'sGosu, to ask MaximusBlack about joining but he told me today that MaximusBlack is just too busy.
I messaged both of them ! Now, let's hope for the best ! A Temp0 vs Suspense battle would probably break the internet (One can only dream...)
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