EPTI better stop.
So I found this erotic fan fiction - Page 4
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Sawajiri
Austria417 Posts
I better stop. | ||
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MamiyaOtaru
United States1687 Posts
On December 23 2009 02:30 BearJamon wrote: yeah, because teamliquid is the perfect place to post gay porn. You thought you were being sarcastic | ||
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Jyropy
Canada7 Posts
On December 23 2009 05:10 StorkHwaiting wrote: "scurrying away at his keyboard" "prolific embrace" "supple forehead" "motioned his arms" "forever be imbued" "held in high accounts" "may have well been heard" "spank the arse of the victim to his charm" "In one full motion" I won't even get into how badly the writer mangled the commas, verb tenses, possessives, and general syntax. -Holmes. Thanks holmes. You're critiquing a piece of satire consisting of erotic sex between a Korean progamer and an esports commentator. Perhaps now you get it. | ||
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Disregard
China10252 Posts
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United States1401 Posts
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StorkHwaiting
United States3465 Posts
On December 23 2009 07:26 Jyropy wrote: Thanks holmes. You're critiquing a piece of satire consisting of erotic sex between a Korean progamer and an esports commentator. Perhaps now you get it. Perhaps you still don't get my original point. I was never critiquing the writing. I was asking if a Korean wrote it. Way to jump the gun and freak out though. Makes me really want to have a beer with you. | ||
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ghostWriter
United States3302 Posts
On December 23 2009 07:38 StorkHwaiting wrote: Perhaps you still don't get my original point. I was never critiquing the writing. I was asking if a Korean wrote it. Way to jump the gun and freak out though. Makes me really want to have a beer with you. I don't see much wrong with most of those phrases, although there are some grammatical errors. It's a fanfic though, not a master thesis. And it's kinda offensive to assume that grammatical mistakes mean that the piece was written by a Korean. | ||
NeverGG
United Kingdom5399 Posts
On December 23 2009 06:34 Shizuru~ wrote: i'd put my money on NeverGG, she wrote one of these homo-erotic stuff b4 i think... maybe this was the one can't really remember since i'm too weak to read past the first paragraphs... Wrong - I had one written for me for my birthday. I've never written one myself. Also I know Nick in person so that would make it auto-gross. I also wouldn't have used -kun because I understand Korean suffixes. Oh and finally, I'm an English teacher so I wouldn't have made so many mistakes. Plus I'm currently on hiatus due to extensive ill-health. If you didn't notice I've barely been posting and haven't been to an event for almost 2 months. P.S. Bisu? No thank you. If I *was* going to write about someone like this I'd pick a better pairing. Remember I know these boys in person by now so it'd be pretty weird for me to write about their penises/boinking habits. | ||
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cosiant
Canada616 Posts
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Sawajiri
Austria417 Posts
On December 23 2009 07:38 StorkHwaiting wrote: Perhaps you still don't get my original point. I was never critiquing the writing. I was asking if a Korean wrote it. Way to jump the gun and freak out though. Makes me really want to have a beer with you. I think the awkward wording was done for entertainment purposes, and the puns are so well-done, it seems to me like an English speaker wrote it. Obviously a troll fic, but what an entertaining one! ...either that, or I have too much faith in humanity. orz | ||
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MamiyaOtaru
United States1687 Posts
On December 23 2009 07:40 ghostWriter wrote: And it's kinda offensive to assume that grammatical mistakes mean that the piece was written by a Korean. No it's not? English is main language of a few countries and Korea is not one of them | ||
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spydernoob
Canada1066 Posts
On December 23 2009 07:43 NeverGG wrote: P.S. Bisu? No thank you. If I *was* going to write about someone like this I'd pick a better pairing. Remember I know these boys in person by now so it'd be pretty weird for me to write about their penises/boinking habits. what about forgg? | ||
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Disregard
China10252 Posts
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NeverGG
United Kingdom5399 Posts
NOM NOM NOM. Why doesn't someone write a story about him for me? Kwanro >.< ......... | ||
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andiCR
Costa Rica2273 Posts
On December 23 2009 08:22 NeverGG wrote: NOM NOM NOM. Why doesn't someone write a story about him for me? Kwanro >.< ......... i'll write one about go.go and thezerg, two of the most handsome progamers around | ||
GTR
51457 Posts
On December 23 2009 07:43 NeverGG wrote: Wrong - I had one written for me for my birthday. I've never written one myself. Also I know Nick in person so that would make it auto-gross. I also wouldn't have used -kun because I understand Korean suffixes. Oh and finally, I'm an English teacher so I wouldn't have made so many mistakes. Plus I'm currently on hiatus due to extensive ill-health. If you didn't notice I've barely been posting and haven't been to an event for almost 2 months. P.S. Bisu? No thank you. If I *was* going to write about someone like this I'd pick a better pairing. Remember I know these boys in person by now so it'd be pretty weird for me to write about their penises/boinking habits. Nickhun? Ooooooh. It was probably DoctorHelvetica. | ||
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Ikonn
Netherlands1958 Posts
On December 23 2009 08:22 NeverGG wrote: NOM NOM NOM. Why doesn't someone write a story about him for me? Kwanro >.< ......... How about ForGG x Kwanro? Two fantasies in one | ||
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Comeh
United States18918 Posts
On December 23 2009 08:32 never_toss wrote: i'll write one about go.go and Hiya, two of the most handsome progamers around Oh come on, the glasses clanking against each other would be so hot. | ||
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p4ge
Canada160 Posts
On December 23 2009 07:43 NeverGG wrote: I know these boys in person by now so it'd be pretty weird for me to write about their penises/boinking habits. boinking is a term used in the furry community; are you a furry? | ||
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Alethios
New Zealand2765 Posts
Fun read. Followed up by an equally fun read of all the comments. Especially NeverGG's subtle request for forGG, kwanro slash. You are so very very cute. | ||
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