Starcraft short story

-fj.

Samoa462 Posts

March 30 2011 00:27 GMT

Hey guys. I wrote a short story for my creative writing class that features SC2 and gamers. I don't think any of the kids in my class really know about Starcraft or esports at all, so it's written for a general audience. I tried to write it in a young adult fiction style.

I stole names and stuff from the real starcraft world, but its 100% fiction.

http://yogware.bluegillstudios.com/shpib/files/924_ForestJohnson.TheRoofie.pdf

bragblog slash I wanna show it off

crits are welcome since I am still gonna revise it for the class.

Nosmo

Canada210 Posts

March 30 2011 00:57 GMT

I found it kinda funny that you used a Polish player's name for an American player.

FlaShFTW

United States9883 Posts

March 30 2011 02:39 GMT

nice! what race DID james play. i may have passed it, but i dont think you say.

-fj.

Samoa462 Posts

March 30 2011 02:46 GMT

He and Amal both play Terran

and no I don't mention it ever

Semtext

Germany287 Posts

March 30 2011 04:01 GMT

I kinda dont get the connection between the fratboyish roofie dudes and starcraft. but maybe i just have normal (as in: no douchebags) friends playing starcraft, and i should not compare my situation to the story at all.

i really liked the introductory part, approximately until they meet again online the next day, where i think it falls apart a bit. until then, you had me on a pageturner trip.

rock on!

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