http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-5842514158391854515
My 1st commentary.
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DragoonPK
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http://video.google.com/videoplay?docid=-5842514158391854515 | ||
Pellucidity
Netherlands377 Posts
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DragoonPK
3259 Posts
On November 09 2008 11:59 Pellucidity wrote: You sound extremely nervous, but it was decent still. Keep practicing! Totally. Thanks. | ||
spec. opps
United States127 Posts
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QuietIdiot
7004 Posts
Shaky voices are never good for commentating. But its a good start, nothing rambunctious like klazart.. | ||
fgsvsd
Switzerland348 Posts
Your voice is pleasant, which is a very important element in commentating. Now you just gotta practice so your words flow naturally like calm spring stream. | ||
knyttym
United States5797 Posts
lets see how it goes | ||
GHOSTCLAW
United States17042 Posts
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DragoonPK
3259 Posts
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Artosis
United States2138 Posts
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o3.power91
Bahrain5288 Posts
-Clear voice. No accent problems. -Easy dialogue to understand. Allows people to follow events of the game. -Not too fast (Klazart). Could improve: -Speed could be a bit faster. Not Klazart fast but fast enough to make the commentary more exciting. -Vocal variety: you were monotonous throughout the game. I suggest you put more energy in your voice at different times depending on whats happening. -You were obviously nervous. This is understandable as this is your first commentary. You can easily improve that over time Overall it was pretty nice. I want to ask though, why did you decide to comment on a year old game rather than a recent one? I sometimes comment on foreigner replays when I watch them (no recording; just to myself ) in hopes that it helps my game knowledge. I find it more enjoyable to comment on games that I haven't seen beforehand. Obviously I wont know as much about the game but I feel its more fun for the commentator that way. Hope to see more of your commentaries in future | ||
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