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BuGzlToOnl
Profile Blog Joined November 2006
United States5918 Posts
January 25 2009 00:28 GMT
#21
Oh man I was right by San Diego like a month ago I would of liked to have met you.

Now I'm 3000 miles away haha. :p
If you want to make God laugh, tell Him your plans.
Rekrul
Profile Blog Joined November 2002
Korea (South)17174 Posts
January 25 2009 00:29 GMT
#22
On January 25 2009 09:24 fanatacist wrote:
If you are going to make a book out of this, best of luck. You have good stories to write about and I would definitely read it, but you need a lot of editting/revising to make it marketable.

EDIT: I mean in terms of grammar/speech (LOL, WTF are not going to appeal to the larger book-reading audience, I think. Although, you could have a glossary or whatever to make it more open to people who aren't that into internet-speak, which isn't that many people nowadays anyways...). Otherwise, I like your flow and manner of writing, although it seems at times like your mastery of English is diluted. More analogies like the 6 year old girl in the prairie would be cool, it'd make it more of a theme than a once-in-a-while thing.


thats a good point about the analogies, definitely will do that, and i did intent on like making a glossary or just like a preface stating that like if i wrote 'i said this blah blah' in italics it actually means that i said it in korean or whatever and its just translated to english here so that i dont have to constantly state which language is being spoken, same with money conversions
why so 진지해?
ZaplinG
Profile Blog Joined February 2005
United States3818 Posts
January 25 2009 00:39 GMT
#23
I'll edit it for you for cheap
Don't believe the florist when he tells you that the roses are free
Athos
Profile Blog Joined February 2008
United States2484 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-01-25 00:52:49
January 25 2009 00:41 GMT
#24
I'll buy your book, I'm sure most of the people here would too. This could definitely break into the mainstream if you play your cards right. Good luck!


Edit: I'm glad your posting these excerpts on this website before you have finished writing the entire book because I like it when people's writing is unedited and raw. I assume your just writing your true thoughts in the style you talk with in real life. I don't think you should be pressured to change your writing style to accommodate mainstream audiences however I do agree about the glossary thing.
fanatacist
Profile Blog Joined August 2007
10319 Posts
January 25 2009 00:43 GMT
#25
On January 25 2009 09:29 Rekrul wrote:
Show nested quote +
On January 25 2009 09:24 fanatacist wrote:
If you are going to make a book out of this, best of luck. You have good stories to write about and I would definitely read it, but you need a lot of editting/revising to make it marketable.

EDIT: I mean in terms of grammar/speech (LOL, WTF are not going to appeal to the larger book-reading audience, I think. Although, you could have a glossary or whatever to make it more open to people who aren't that into internet-speak, which isn't that many people nowadays anyways...). Otherwise, I like your flow and manner of writing, although it seems at times like your mastery of English is diluted. More analogies like the 6 year old girl in the prairie would be cool, it'd make it more of a theme than a once-in-a-while thing.


thats a good point about the analogies, definitely will do that, and i did intent on like making a glossary or just like a preface stating that like if i wrote 'i said this blah blah' in italics it actually means that i said it in korean or whatever and its just translated to english here so that i dont have to constantly state which language is being spoken, same with money conversions

For a rough draft this is all very interesting and you definitely have the basis/material to make a marketable book.

I'm thinking that the same audience that you would appeal to is the audience that authors like Tucker Max and Maddox direct their writing to. Since that's the case, I think you should get publicity first by starting a website similar to Tucker Max's as a sort of blog where you release stories once in a while with forums for conversation and input and etc., where you could also include a mini-biography or whatnot. This would expand your publicity, your marketable audience, and probably build hype once you publicly announce your book there. That way you will probably be releasing the book at a later date but with more possible revenue and thus will be more likely to get published by a good publisher as opposed to some shitty local publisher which won't give you the royalties, publicity, and hype you need. TL is a good starting point but I think you need to go bigger to really have a good foundation for a publication.
Peace~
Loanshark
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
China3094 Posts
January 25 2009 00:48 GMT
#26
So have you decided on a title for your book?
Or is it just gonna be Tales from the Hood?
No dough, no go. And no mercy.
Rekrul
Profile Blog Joined November 2002
Korea (South)17174 Posts
January 25 2009 00:48 GMT
#27
On January 25 2009 09:43 fanatacist wrote:
Show nested quote +
On January 25 2009 09:29 Rekrul wrote:
On January 25 2009 09:24 fanatacist wrote:
If you are going to make a book out of this, best of luck. You have good stories to write about and I would definitely read it, but you need a lot of editting/revising to make it marketable.

EDIT: I mean in terms of grammar/speech (LOL, WTF are not going to appeal to the larger book-reading audience, I think. Although, you could have a glossary or whatever to make it more open to people who aren't that into internet-speak, which isn't that many people nowadays anyways...). Otherwise, I like your flow and manner of writing, although it seems at times like your mastery of English is diluted. More analogies like the 6 year old girl in the prairie would be cool, it'd make it more of a theme than a once-in-a-while thing.


thats a good point about the analogies, definitely will do that, and i did intent on like making a glossary or just like a preface stating that like if i wrote 'i said this blah blah' in italics it actually means that i said it in korean or whatever and its just translated to english here so that i dont have to constantly state which language is being spoken, same with money conversions

For a rough draft this is all very interesting and you definitely have the basis/material to make a marketable book.

I'm thinking that the same audience that you would appeal to is the audience that authors like Tucker Max and Maddox direct their writing to. Since that's the case, I think you should get publicity first by starting a website similar to Tucker Max's as a sort of blog where you release stories once in a while with forums for conversation and input and etc., where you could also include a mini-biography or whatnot. This would expand your publicity, your marketable audience, and probably build hype once you publicly announce your book there. That way you will probably be releasing the book at a later date but with more possible revenue and thus will be more likely to get published by a good publisher as opposed to some shitty local publisher which won't give you the royalties, publicity, and hype you need. TL is a good starting point but I think you need to go bigger to really have a good foundation for a publication.


i have to become a blogger? NOOOOOO!!!

true though
why so 진지해?
Rekrul
Profile Blog Joined November 2002
Korea (South)17174 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-01-25 00:50:44
January 25 2009 00:50 GMT
#28
On January 25 2009 09:48 Loanshark wrote:
So have you decided on a title for your book?
Or is it just gonna be Tales from the Hood?


didnt decide on anything im just getting started

i'm blanking on ideas cause frankly cannot pick a good title until the book is complete and u have a feel for the overall themes, and while i do know what themes i intend on hmm dunno

Sick Life (horrible title i know)
why so 진지해?
koreasilver
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
9109 Posts
January 25 2009 01:11 GMT
#29
Hahaha, the moment you mentioned Crazy I started reading through like twice as fast.

Your blog post with the Crazy story was pretty great.
inReacH
Profile Blog Joined August 2008
Sweden1612 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-01-25 01:22:23
January 25 2009 01:12 GMT
#30
Man whenever I'm about to watch something I know I'll really enjoy and I'm hungry I'll go make food so I can enjoy it more... I'm stopping reading this halfway and showering/making food so I can fully enjoy it, these stories are fucking awesome!

If this does ever turn into published work I notice that you explain the word Hyung every time you use it so you should edit that appropriately and also you said Shin was around 35 and then later specified he was 36, neither are inaccurate but that should obviously be changed as well.

Keep it up, I think I would buy this book for at least half of the people I know.

Also I would be hesitant to completely take out the swearing, it can't be argued that it doesn't help with emphasis.. Maybe have two versions and you could submit both to a publisher and see what they think would be better as they would be the ones who would know how much swearing could hurt sales etc.
Victor
Profile Joined November 2005
New Zealand1016 Posts
January 25 2009 01:19 GMT
#31
Rekrul delivers again!

If the book ever gets published, i'll be one of the first to buy it :D
HamerD
Profile Blog Joined January 2008
United Kingdom1922 Posts
January 25 2009 01:21 GMT
#32
The reason your blogs are interesting imo is that you describe everything in the sort of way that most of our minds would absorb the information as we were getting it, if we were in your shoes. If you had a more intellectual and reserved style of writing, it would be boring.
"Oh no, we've drawn Judge Schneider" "Is that bad?" "Well, he's had it in for me ever since I kinda ran over his dog" "You did?" "Yeah...if you replace the word *kinda* with *repeatedly*...and the word *dog* with son"
Rekrul
Profile Blog Joined November 2002
Korea (South)17174 Posts
January 25 2009 01:24 GMT
#33
On January 25 2009 10:21 HamerD wrote:
The reason your blogs are interesting imo is that you describe everything in the sort of way that most of our minds would absorb the information as we were getting it, if we were in your shoes. If you had a more intellectual and reserved style of writing, it would be boring.


bingo

did i just say bingo

wow thats gay
why so 진지해?
CharlieMurphy
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
United States22895 Posts
Last Edited: 2009-01-25 01:38:05
January 25 2009 01:35 GMT
#34
Constructive Criticism; your first story is you talking about you and your friend throwing around cash and pullin chicks with it. loaning huge sums of cash to show flash.

In the next story you contradict yourself (even though the guy was proabably a douche and you were right), It just makes you look almost as bad as him. Just needs a revision imo.

PS- You said that you met shin il when he was 35 through giyom, then in the next paragraph u said the same thing but he is 36 and its from a mutual friend. should get rid of one of these.
..and then I would, ya know, check em'. (Aka SpoR)
fanatacist
Profile Blog Joined August 2007
10319 Posts
January 25 2009 01:37 GMT
#35
On January 25 2009 10:35 CharlieMurphy wrote:
No offense, but your first story is you talking about you and your friend throwing around cash and pullin chicks with it. loaning huge sums of cash to show flash.

In the next story you contradict yourself (even though the guy was proabably a douche and you were right), It just makes you look almost as bad as him. Just needs a revision imo.

The difference is I think that he is not portraying himself to be some big bad money man through his words but through his actions; he doesn't speak like money defines him to others, which is what the other guy did.
Peace~
CharlieMurphy
Profile Blog Joined March 2006
United States22895 Posts
January 25 2009 01:39 GMT
#36
Yes, I know but from a general reading standpoint this is not clear. I mean just adding in the sentence like "I normally don't do stuff like this but I felt like it tonight, so I slammed the 5k down..." would help.
..and then I would, ya know, check em'. (Aka SpoR)
Rekrul
Profile Blog Joined November 2002
Korea (South)17174 Posts
January 25 2009 01:43 GMT
#37
yeah i need to write so that people realize i'm actually humble and knew how pathetic what i was doing was to make the reader not hate me adn think im a toolbag
why so 진지해?
SolaR-
Profile Blog Joined February 2004
United States2686 Posts
January 25 2009 01:55 GMT
#38
you need to get rid of the acronyms like WTF but i suppose those are just temporary.
Draconizard
Profile Joined October 2008
628 Posts
January 25 2009 03:30 GMT
#39
You come across as anything but humble.
Rekrul
Profile Blog Joined November 2002
Korea (South)17174 Posts
January 25 2009 03:40 GMT
#40
i'm the humblest of them all
why so 진지해?
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