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Nice songwriting. I really dig the vibe. It took me a second to get used to your singing, but only a second. Good luck with your album! (:
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Lyrics dont fit at all to the mood of this song... its so exaggerated that it feels like its intentional for irony purposes or something. Is this song meant to be taken seriously or is it meant to be a 'fun' song? I really can't tell..
Also you have this almost monotone storytelling/rhyming voice going on.... with no storytelling.... or rhyming... it's really out of place.
other than that I feel like you have a good voice to work with and the instrumentals were fine.
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This sounds like an awful hipster version of a Marilyn Manson song.
What the hell does "egos at the door all luv." mean?
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i didnt really think of the listener when i wrote it, just some stuff that happened to me that i didnt think could happen to me. take it how you want.
happy to vibe w any brothers or sisters
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On May 16 2012 22:22 ella_guru wrote:
happy to vibe w any brothers or sisters
What do these words even mean?
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This is fucking aweful. Beat and music is cool, lyrics and voice is unbelievably poor.
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I am very open to all forms of music and art. But no thank you this time.
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Not quite my cup of tea, but as long as you're having fun..
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The fine line between complete shit and utter genius.
I wonder where a guy in his underwear at a playground lands. David Lynch.
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I'm actually starting to like it. It's like hypnosis.
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Dancing in your underwear at a park in the middle of the night... Probly a good thing no cops saw you lol.
keep on jammin yo
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Sort of sounds like radiohead but with a much deeper voice etc. I didn't mind it at all. Good job, and good luck with the album!
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Is it all incest naked park music? Either way, it is oddly intriguing, like a car accident. I hope no one is hurt, but I can't stop watching.
Where can I hear more of the album or download ... or buy it ? I posted this on my facebook and I might post the comments. definitely confused some people.
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i didnt realize my music affected people like this. sunday will call for drastic measures
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