New song :)

sc4k

United Kingdom5454 Posts

May 13 2010 22:46 GMT

I added a new song to my Myspace called 'The Death of Hope is the Birth of Idiocy'. Check it out if you like, it's pretty groovy

http://www.myspace.com/thelonestargazer

Would appreciate any opinions on the music as long as they aren't pointlessly negative! If it's not your style, move on and chill

. Also for anyone who gave me advice and notices that I haven't acted on it yet, I have a bunch of new stuff to write for project briefs before I can go back and master/ perfect my other tracks!

It's supposed to be the sort of thing that you'd see silhouetted people dancing around to in an apple advert btw

Trezeguet

United States2656 Posts

May 13 2010 22:59 GMT

Your song really reminded me of songs by They Might Be Giants. It was okay, but a bit repetitive. Maybe more than 2 chords in the verse?

sc4k

United Kingdom5454 Posts

May 13 2010 23:35 GMT

Ah the repetition was to cancel the absolute lack of repetition in the other songs, but perhaps I should balance it out!

Navane

Netherlands2749 Posts

May 14 2010 00:09 GMT

Like it! Only the crashes (symbel) are badly mixed. I would also revert to a more electronic/poppy crash, this sounds a bit to real/rock.

sc4k

United Kingdom5454 Posts

May 14 2010 00:18 GMT

Thanks for the advice man, which part are you talking about? At the end or just generally? You mean the crashes at the beginning? They are indeed horribly sliced up from a punky drum loop

well spotted.

Archaic

United States4024 Posts

May 14 2010 00:23 GMT

Is it just me or does it sound a little bit like System of a Down? Not so much the style, but the voices.

sc4k

United Kingdom5454 Posts

May 14 2010 00:31 GMT

My ex said that lol. It started from the bass voice which I got the idea from 80s matchbox b line disaster. They are just my generic male vocals but I guess there is some sort of similarity. I would love for Serj Tanken to sing on that song ><!

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