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On October 10 2009 11:27 BalliSLife wrote:
aite fantascist here goes
you're freestyle is absurd
the worse i've ever heard
i'm the illest emcee
coming out of vancity
battling while high on weed and ecstasy
i'm on another level
this shits for intellectuals
my flows so sick just like the swine flu
bling shine so bright it's about to blind you
watch you're back i got that knife behind you
was that too violent?
maybe i should of kept silent
but you ain't no sissy
so go ahead and try to diss me
i'll be waiting, cause this shits a breeze to me
You accusin me of having weak raps
Well it's time to tighten your straps
Because I'll take you on a ride, an expedition
To show you why your pathetic rendition
Of this lyrical battle of concoction is asinine
Like a kindergartner who's twenty-nine
You're mentally incapacitated it's almost a crime
For me to hate on you this hard but I'll do my time
Busting little fags like you is worth the sentence
As you fade away I make my dramatic entrance
I'm on stage now leading the crowd wrecking speakers
With my lines fresher than new Nike sneakers
Blasting you away with the metaphorical downpour
I am like a king you are like a whore from Singapore
You follow me kid? I don't think so
I will wreck you like a ship in the seas of Calypso
I stomp you lyrically physically and mentally
Smash you so hard I will have to go repenting b
So back down with your attempts to contest
The fruits of my lyrical conquest
I am the final boss the end-all the alpha and omega
You're still sitting at home playing your genesis Sega.
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On October 10 2009 11:33 SayaSP wrote:
oh its fana
hey fana, the only boy i miss
funny that i see you rap like this
not that you're funny
I just love you honey
but it's like why do we gotta keep to one true standard
you would think we could adapt and not end up with some rhyme every two bars crap
hmm. actually its really hard cuz like
I don't even know
It's kinda like the time i underestimated my friend's rice burner with the turbo
just thought I'd stop by fana i love u bro
LOL the turbo on the burner of rice
So how you been man, life's nice?
How about them girls,
Givin them a whirl?
Either way man hit me back again
I remember when we used to rhyme way back when
Get on Polyflower and we can stomp some noobs
Then you can show me some pics of your girlfriend's boobs
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aight round 2 feeling a bit more warmed up now...
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Bitchnigga..your 50 cent and im steve urkel?
my rhymes are from heaven sent
Cuz like me tell ya now I got more dough than Rekrul
fitting your cornellass would pick 50 cent
Cuz i can sum your life by his life
his pain his strife
get rich or die trying?
obviously what you have in mind
Aint no one told you im the bonjwa of rhymes
you think your all hot but no use i know your lieing
Saying I never held a piece
another piece of future untold
the massacre
keep this up and i promise you disaster
cuz im just sitting here cleaning my gun
spitting fire with no signs or weary or tire
only gleaming smiles tells of my fun
this time i got a 16 gauge with me here
ready to tear your face away
if you aint gonna bow down and behave
Gods sent me a final prophecy
that by the end of round 3
you'll have on your head the letters
En Oh Oh Bee
After all this better keep your ass clenched tight
cuz more niggers will want it than Jaleel Whites
aight..
GO GO GO
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On October 10 2009 12:04 integral wrote:
only reason you want to rap is because you're bitter
no one ever loved you back so you act a big hitter
but you're just a little kid with your mind in the shitter
I'd rap battle you but I'm not a babysitter
yeah I wrote these lines and I give up easily
but I don't have any "venom" or animosity
toward punk ass kids who rap with verbosity
battling strangers online because their lives are empty
I don't care if your e-penis is bigger
you're a sad motherfucker
the end.
Look at you passing judgment like you're a deity
I will show you why you're no saint, and I'm divinity
I run this rap battle to the end, this is MY city
Destroying your rap is what I do, it won't be pretty
Making baseless assumptions like the idiot you are
You think your rhymes are scathing but they don't scar
My rep is impenetrable, yours is like a graffiti wall, free to mar
We both know which one of us goes drinking alone at the bar
So I will end this rap, bring it to closure
Before I lose it and give your faults more exposure.
THE END.
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On October 11 2009 03:28 vRoOk wrote:
aight round 2 feeling a bit more warmed up now...
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
Bitchnigga..your 50 cent and im steve urkel?
my rhymes are from heaven sent
Cuz like me tell ya now I got more dough than Rekrul
fitting your cornellass would pick 50 cent
Cuz i can sum your life by his life
his pain his strife
get rich or die trying?
obviously what you have in mind
Aint no one told you im the bonjwa of rhymes
you think your all hot but no use i know your lieing
Saying I never held a piece
another piece of future untold
the massacre
keep this up and i promise you disaster
cuz im just sitting here cleaning my gun
spitting fire with no signs or weary or tire
only gleaming smiles tells of my fun
this time i got a 16 gauge with me here
ready to tear your face away
if you aint gonna bow down and behave
Gods sent me a final prophecy
that by the end of round 3
you'll have on your head the letters
En Oh Oh Bee
After all this better keep your ass clenched tight
cuz more niggers will want it than Jaleel Whites
aight..
GO GO GO
"Cuz like me tell ya "
"Cuz i can sum your life by his life" <- Really?
I don't even know where to start
Doesn't matter, I'll tear you apart
Your English is broken, twisted
My rap is raping you, double-fisted
You need to try harder to make some sense
I don't know if you're handicapped or just dense
But your play on words is inexcusable
Using the same word twice like its reusable
That's a disgrace to this game son, check yourself
Before I check you with my shotgun myself
You're still speaking of massacres and murder
Do I really have to explain further?
You're not a gangster, you're not a thug
Better get rid of that grin looking smug
If I see your face again I will cleave it open
Drop your body off an airplane into the ocean
Tell your parents so we can celebrate
The death of another ingrate
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On October 11 2009 03:32 fanatacist wrote:
My rep is impenetrable, yours is like a graffiti wall, free to mar
We both know which one of us goes drinking alone at the bar
i dont know why but this made me wanna go out and drink all by myself tonight
im actually gonna get a 12 pack right now, done deal. 2:43, perfect time to start getting wasted
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On October 11 2009 03:42 food wrote:Show nested quote +On October 11 2009 03:32 fanatacist wrote:
My rep is impenetrable, yours is like a graffiti wall, free to mar
We both know which one of us goes drinking alone at the bar
i dont know why but this made me wanna go out and drink all by myself tonight im actually gonna get a 12 pack right now, done deal. 2:43, perfect time to start getting wasted
Drinking alone at a bar is so much worse than chilling at home with a few brews.
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that is true, esp if you live in a ghost town and there will be 5 people tops drinking at the bar all 40+
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On October 11 2009 03:48 food wrote:
that is true, esp if you live in a ghost town and there will be 5 people tops drinking at the bar all 40+
LOL that sounds like the saddest shit I've ever heard.
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wow fanta i must admit
im bit surpised
your bitch ass didnt submit
so here i go one last time
before TL declares the championship
aint yours but mine
making fun of my words my rhymes
acting like you havent done the same crime
in this very thread from time to time
one final say on cornell
before you go.. learn to spell
dont you know fanatacist
it suppose to be fantasist?
cuz thats what you are
weaving dreams and fantasies
thinking your the best rapper ever
is like FanTaSy thinking
he's gonna win the 2010 Ever
And we all know that aint fucking true
even if he is boxer and oov too
know that i'm your jaedong
imma make you dance in a pretty pink thong
then all of TL will see you.. in the spotlight
and we'll laugh our nerds ass of all night
Cuz im still coming at you like a tornado
and you can fucking run but you cant ever escape
Im back by the power of the manifesto.. seven
good thing im here to give you a final lesson
just like how i had to teach you to masturbate
heres the lesson...
now you'll see.. im the best rapper
from sea to shining fucking sea
so why dont you go back to that garbage dumpster
try to start your life over.. start with your diapers
cuz i bet you just shit yourself
looking at these word i've spit
i aint a gangster i aint a thug
but i got me two slugs
two for your head
just to make sure you dead
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On October 11 2009 03:51 vRoOk wrote:
wow fanta i must admit
im bit surpised
your bitch ass didnt submit
so here i go one last time
before TL declares the championship
aint yours but mine
making fun of my words my rhymes
acting like you havent done the same crime
in this very thread from time to time
one final say on cornell
before you go.. learn to spell
dont you know fanatacist
it suppose to be fantasist?
cuz thats what you are
weaving dreams and fantasies
thinking your the best rapper ever
is like FanTaSy thinking
he's gonna win the 2010 Ever
And we all know that aint fucking true
even if he is boxer and oov too
know that i'm your jaedong
imma make you dance in a pretty pink thong
then all of TL will see you.. in the spotlight
and we'll laugh our nerds ass of all night
Cuz im still coming at you like a tornado
and you can fucking run but you cant ever escape
Im back by the power of the manifesto.. seven
good thing im here to give you a final lesson
just like how i had to teach you to masturbate
heres the lesson...
now you'll see.. im the best rapper
from sea to shining fucking sea
so why dont you go back to that garbage dumpster
try to start your life over.. start with your diapers
cuz i bet you just shit yourself
looking at these word i've spit
i aint a gangster i aint a thug
but i got me two slugs
two for your head
just to make sure you dead
[WOOPS I WAS WRONG HERE] and fanatacist has nothing to do with fantasies -_-; Also you still refuse to make certain lines rhyme lol
It's funny to hear you say you didn't expect me here
When you're the one trembling, cowering in fear
Let me show you the ropes boy, because your game is lackin
Think you're a badass but rainbows and sprinkles is all you be packin
I'm coming at you strong like a Himalayan avalanche
I'm Zeus, lightning in my hands, on my head an olive branch
Smiting your feeble attempts to take my throne and Olympus
You're trying so hard to keep up but you just can't get wit dis
Shooting you dead with my lyrical pistol
Spitting the best rhymes from here to Bristol
Raining fire and brimstone from my podium
Security, escort vrook out of the auditorium
This punk thinks he's got a shot at my title
He's more ignorant than the Romans in the Bible
My divine ascension will be the end of your rope
Beyond your reach like the girls you want to grope
Let me break it down for you, once again
While I'm pimping it strong you be looking at men
While I'm spitting you're sitting there with paper and pen
It's time for you to crumple up that rapsheet, friend
And now we come to the conclusion
Where I subdue you into contusions
Force you back into lonely seclusion
Forever shattering your infantile illusions.
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Poll: vrook vs. fanatacist
(Vote): vrook
(Vote): fanatacist
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haha nice fanta 
But uhh.. fantasist is a word 
edit: tied :o
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On October 11 2009 04:15 vRoOk wrote:haha nice fanta But uhh.. fantasist is a word
Damn. A very unsightly and unused word.
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gotta admit i got better as we went on at least haha
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On October 11 2009 04:17 vRoOk wrote:
gotta admit i got better as we went on at least haha
Yea, but you still have stray lines that just stick out and don't tie into anything in terms of rhyme/beat. Maybe we just have different perspectives on rap (and once again I am no expert), but I don't like having freeverse like that, it just makes the flow worse imo.
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On October 11 2009 04:19 fanatacist wrote:Show nested quote +On October 11 2009 04:17 vRoOk wrote:
gotta admit i got better as we went on at least haha Yea, but you still have stray lines that just stick out and don't tie into anything in terms of rhyme/beat. Maybe we just have different perspectives on rap (and once again I am no expert), but I don't like having freeverse like that, it just makes the flow worse imo.
haha nah your right.. your rhymes are really good.. only an idiot would think I'm better.
edit: yet the polls tied
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On October 11 2009 04:21 vRoOk wrote:Show nested quote +On October 11 2009 04:19 fanatacist wrote:On October 11 2009 04:17 vRoOk wrote:
gotta admit i got better as we went on at least haha Yea, but you still have stray lines that just stick out and don't tie into anything in terms of rhyme/beat. Maybe we just have different perspectives on rap (and once again I am no expert), but I don't like having freeverse like that, it just makes the flow worse imo. haha nah your right.. your rhymes are really good.. only an idiot would think I'm better. edit: yet the polls tied
Lol I thought you were for serious battling me and shit, you convinced me you meant business haha xD Thanks btw.
Low exposure right now xP Maybe when all the people I responded to show up we'll see some changes.
~PanN: Thank you my follower. I have returned until my final banning comes on a lonely drunken night.
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On October 11 2009 04:29 fanatacist wrote:Show nested quote +On October 11 2009 04:21 vRoOk wrote:On October 11 2009 04:19 fanatacist wrote:On October 11 2009 04:17 vRoOk wrote:
gotta admit i got better as we went on at least haha Yea, but you still have stray lines that just stick out and don't tie into anything in terms of rhyme/beat. Maybe we just have different perspectives on rap (and once again I am no expert), but I don't like having freeverse like that, it just makes the flow worse imo. haha nah your right.. your rhymes are really good.. only an idiot would think I'm better. edit: yet the polls tied Lol I thought you were for serious battling me and shit, you convinced me you meant business haha xD Thanks btw. Low exposure right now xP Maybe when all the people I responded to show up we'll see some changes. ~ PanN: Thank you my follower. I have returned until my final banning comes on a lonely drunken night.
yea when they come back to see you kicked their noobie rapper ass
the score will be soemthing like 50 to 1 for sure
even sadder i voted for myself
Nah not serious it just looked like fun.. i've never really rapped and dont listen to hardly hip hop
but if you ever wanna go again ill win fo sho
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On October 11 2009 04:33 vRoOk wrote:Show nested quote +On October 11 2009 04:29 fanatacist wrote:On October 11 2009 04:21 vRoOk wrote:On October 11 2009 04:19 fanatacist wrote:On October 11 2009 04:17 vRoOk wrote:
gotta admit i got better as we went on at least haha Yea, but you still have stray lines that just stick out and don't tie into anything in terms of rhyme/beat. Maybe we just have different perspectives on rap (and once again I am no expert), but I don't like having freeverse like that, it just makes the flow worse imo. haha nah your right.. your rhymes are really good.. only an idiot would think I'm better. edit: yet the polls tied Lol I thought you were for serious battling me and shit, you convinced me you meant business haha xD Thanks btw. Low exposure right now xP Maybe when all the people I responded to show up we'll see some changes. ~ PanN: Thank you my follower. I have returned until my final banning comes on a lonely drunken night. yea when they come back to see you kicked their noobie rapper ass the score will be soemthing like 50 to 1 for sure even sadder i voted for myself Nah not serious it just looked like fun.. i've never really rapped and dont listen to hardly hip hop but if you ever wanna go again ill win fo sho
I rap once in a while with my friends but not that much and only when I'm high lol. First time I did it I was 15 and was getting high with my friend on a swingset. Oh the good old days.
Lol it's on nigga. Not right now though, leaving soon for CSL and I had to do like 8 just now. You have my contact info.
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