Let me tell you why your map sucks - Page 5

Avexyli

United States702 Posts

May 09 2016 22:25 GMT

#81

On May 09 2016 03:20 Pasketi wrote:
Hello! I would like your unbiased opinion on our map.
Frostwing
110 x 140
spawns 10 & 8 o'clock
Xel'Nagas at 3 & 9 o'clock

Map image:
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Old version:
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Thanks

With best regards,
Pasketi

EDIT: Something to take into account: I could change the in-nat third to be a gold base and remove the rocks from those far away expansions. Adding rocks to the 3 o'clock Xel'Naga may be a possibility to slow down hidden aggression from the east, but it may not be a problem?

EDIT2: Did some "improvements" on my own. Better?

You're not allowed to mess with mineral lines. Bases must always be 8m 2g for blue or 6min 2g for gold.

The map is really really chokey. Lots of deadspace for no real reason. :\

Fatam

1986 Posts

May 10 2016 02:14 GMT

#82

On May 10 2016 05:05 Enekh wrote:
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dunno if this is balanced at all but WOW!

Pasketi

Finland16 Posts

May 10 2016 06:15 GMT

#83

On May 10 2016 07:25 Avexyli wrote:
You're not allowed to mess with mineral lines. Bases must always be 8m 2g for blue or 6min 2g for gold.

The map is really really chokey. Lots of deadspace for no real reason. :\

More specific directions would be appreciated, like where is this deadspace and where I should widen the map. Also, I'm fairly certain there has been a ladder map with expansions that have only one gas. Can't pinpoint the map though. It's an easy fix.

Thanks for input.

-Pasketi

Plexa

Aotearoa39261 Posts

May 10 2016 13:45 GMT

#84

On May 10 2016 05:05 Enekh wrote:
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Yes yes and more yes.

Kinshini

United States26 Posts

May 10 2016 15:09 GMT

#85

Hey Plexa I think you may have missed mine, I reposted the map on the 4th page xD thanks

Plexa

Aotearoa39261 Posts

May 10 2016 15:17 GMT

#86

I'm done reviewing maps for now. I only commented on that one because it was exceptional.

Pasketi

Finland16 Posts

May 10 2016 15:45 GMT

#87

On May 11 2016 00:17 Plexa wrote:
I'm done reviewing maps for now. I only commented on that one because it was exceptional.

You could've said so. I have no other place for feedback, since the SC2 community I'm in plays so little SC2 anymore and so do my friends. Welp...

The deadline is in 1.5 days, I'd like some feedback on my map for last minute fixes. Any suggestions?

My map IS playable in EU right now, if someone wants to help me test it...

Xenotolerance

United States464 Posts

May 11 2016 05:31 GMT

#88

On May 06 2016 22:28 Plexa wrote:
Cassiopeia sucks

i don't know what i expected