On April 03 2013 07:18 Jackowacko wrote: Awesome stories..., too bad I read all the ones you posted lol. If anybody could find any other creepypastas that would be great, though one of my favorites also is the Lavender Town weird frequency story. That one is pretty good .
I'll aim to keep updating with more original suggestions. Meanwhile, here is a creepypasta I just found on Reddit.
i know its been mentioned before but "candle cove" was really well done, probably one of my favorite. "smile.dog" is also one that got too me just cause that picture is just not right haha
Soviet peasant filled with burning desire to read for glory of Soviet Russia. One day peasant go to Soviet bookstore, and sees book with skull on cover.
He asks owner how much is book, and owner responds 80 rubles. However, owner tell peasant never read last page, or else doom shall fall upon him!
Peasant reads all book in one night, is dark book of capitalism about by evil man, John Deere, talking of automated machinery and air conditioned tractors, many horrors in book indeed!
Yet peasant does not read last page, for he has fear in his heart! One night it storms however, and the man is bored. He finally gathers up enough Soviet courage to read last page, dispelling superstition, for he has faith in the Party.
As soon as he reads last page, man gasps! Book originally 20 rubles! The owner was Jew!
Do you have the original version of this? I don't believe i've seen it
On April 03 2013 07:18 Jackowacko wrote: Awesome stories..., too bad I read all the ones you posted lol. If anybody could find any other creepypastas that would be great, though one of my favorites also is the Lavender Town weird frequency story. That one is pretty good .
I'll aim to keep updating with more original suggestions. Meanwhile, here is a creepypasta I just found on Reddit.
A man went to a hotel and walked up to the front desk to check in. The woman at the desk gave him his key and told him that on the way to his room, there was a door with no number that was locked and no one was allowed in there. Especially no one should look inside the room, under any circumstances. So he followed the instructions of the woman at the front desk, going straight to his room, and going to bed.
The next night his curiosity would not leave him alone about the room with no number on the door. He walked down the hall to the door and tried the handle. Sure enough it was locked. He bent down and looked through the wide keyhole. Cold air passed through it, chilling his eye. What he saw was a hotel bedroom, like his, and in the corner was a woman whose skin was completely white. She was leaning her head against the wall, facing away from the door. He stared in confusion for a while. He almost knocked on the door, out of curiosity, but decided not to.
This disinclination saved his life. He crept away from the door and walked back to his room. The next day, he returned to the door and looked through the wide keyhole. This time, all he saw was redness. He couldn’t make anything out besides a distinct red color, unmoving. Perhaps the inhabitants of the room knew he was spying the night before, and had blocked the keyhole with something red.
At this point he decided to consult the woman at the front desk for more information. She sighed and said, “Did you look through the keyhole?” The man told her that he had and she said, “Well, I might as well tell you the story. A long time ago, a man murdered his wife in that room, and her ghost haunts it. But these people were not ordinary. They were white all over, except for their eyes, which were red.”
check into small hotel a few kilometers from Kiev. It is late. I am tired. I tell woman at desk I want a room. She tells me room number and give key. "But one more thing comrade; there is one room without number and always lock. Don't even peek in there." I take key and go to room to sleep. Night comes and I hear trickling of water. It comes from the room across. I cannot sleep so I open door. It is coming from room with no number. I pound on door. No response. I look in keyhole. I see nothing except red. Water still trickling. I go down to front desk to complain. "By the way who is in that room?" She look at me and begin to tell story. There was woman in there. Murdered by her husband. Skin all white, except her eyes, which were red. I tell her I don't give a shit. Stop the water trickling or give me refund. She gave me 100 ruble credit and free breakfast. Such is life in Moscow
A few years ago, a mother and father decided they needed a break, so they wanted to head out for a night on the town. They called their most trusted babysitter. When the babysitter arrived, the two children were already fast asleep in bed. So the babysitter just got to sit around and make sure everything was okay with the children. Later that night, the babysitter got bored and went to watch TV, but she couldn’t watch it downstairs because they did not have cable downstairs (the parents didn’t want children watching too much garbage). So, she called them and asked them if she could watch cable in the parent’s room. Of course, the parents said it was ok, but the babysitter had one final request… she asked if she could cover up the angel statue outside the bedroom window with a blanket or cloth, at the very least close the blinds, because it made her nervous. The phone line was silent for a moment, and the father who was talking to the babysitter at the time said, “Take the children and get out of the house… we will call the police. We do not have an angel statue.”
The police found all three of the house occupants dead within three minutes of the call. No angel staue was ever found.
Mother and father get little tired from building Communism, so they want to go to Moscow to buy vodka. They call most trusted babysitter. When babysitter arrives, children already sleep in beds. Babysitter just sits around and make sure everything good with children. Later that night, babysitter gets bored and goes to read Marx, but she can’t read downstairs because there’s no electricity (parents dodn’t want children reading Marx all night long). So, she calls parents and asks if she can get candles to read Marx in their room. Of course, the parents say it okay, but babysitter has one final request. She ask if she could cover up Lenin statue outside the bedroom window with blanket or cloth, because it makes her nervous. Phone line is silent for moment, and father who say, "Take children and get out of house. We will call milita. We do not have Lenin statue." Militia find all three of house occupants dead because KGB kill them for trying to cover Lenin statue. Then militia arrest parents for not having Lenin statue. Such is life in Moscow.
hahaha do you happen to have a link to a website having both othe original and the russian version?
On April 03 2013 07:18 Jackowacko wrote: Awesome stories..., too bad I read all the ones you posted lol. If anybody could find any other creepypastas that would be great, though one of my favorites also is the Lavender Town weird frequency story. That one is pretty good .
I'll aim to keep updating with more original suggestions. Meanwhile, here is a creepypasta I just found on Reddit.
This one was nice enough but some time during the middle to the end of the story you start feeling it's fake and hence don't get scared anymore.
To be fair, the first part of that post probably seems accurate about the deep web.
A lot of creepypastas have this problem. The Godzilla one seemed totally believeable until the Melissa stuff came in.
The godzilla one would had been better if the Melissa thing just ended when Red said Melissa kill yourself and if the player won out of sheer skill instead of help.
On April 03 2013 07:18 Jackowacko wrote: Awesome stories..., too bad I read all the ones you posted lol. If anybody could find any other creepypastas that would be great, though one of my favorites also is the Lavender Town weird frequency story. That one is pretty good .
I'll aim to keep updating with more original suggestions. Meanwhile, here is a creepypasta I just found on Reddit.
This one was nice enough but some time during the middle to the end of the story you start feeling it's fake and hence don't get scared anymore.
To be fair, the first part of that post probably seems accurate about the deep web.
A lot of creepypastas have this problem. The Godzilla one seemed totally believeable until the Melissa stuff came in.
The godzilla one would had been better if the Melissa thing just ended when Red said Melissa kill yourself and if the player won out of sheer skill instead of help.
A lot of clichés ruined the Godzilla NES Creepypasta such as:
The whole connection between the game's Melissa character and Zachary's dead ex-girlfriend wasn't kept ambiguous and turned the story from 'creepy but plausible' to 'completely implausible horseshit'. If it were kept ambiguous, sure it may not tie loose ends, but it would have kept the reader wondering.
Red should not have been able to physically harm Zachary during the final fight. This also turned the story to complete horse-shit.
Acacius being the 'ultimate character' that is locked to you until Melissa releases him from Red's influence.
The transparency effects and photo-realistic flames in Zenith really subtracted from the whole authentic NES feel and made the entire thing feel like BS.
The end of Extus seemed rather implausible.
Times when Red 'communicated' with the player should have been kept ambiguous and just general breaches of the fourth wall, like the end of Phobos and the end of Zenith.
Acacius should have been unlocked from the beginning of the Red fight, not by Melissa but spontaneously for no reason.
It should have been a ROM he downloaded from an unnamed ROM site or a bootleg he borrowed from a friend or bought from a garage sale.
If this creepypasta shed those tropes/clichés, it would have been 11/10 with ease.
Soviet peasant filled with burning desire to read for glory of Soviet Russia. One day peasant go to Soviet bookstore, and sees book with skull on cover.
He asks owner how much is book, and owner responds 80 rubles. However, owner tell peasant never read last page, or else doom shall fall upon him!
Peasant reads all book in one night, is dark book of capitalism about by evil man, John Deere, talking of automated machinery and air conditioned tractors, many horrors in book indeed!
Yet peasant does not read last page, for he has fear in his heart! One night it storms however, and the man is bored. He finally gathers up enough Soviet courage to read last page, dispelling superstition, for he has faith in the Party.
As soon as he reads last page, man gasps! Book originally 20 rubles! The owner was Jew!
I cried a bit because i was laughing so much. Great story
You take sip of vodka and roll over. You stare at clocktower on Sobornaya Square. It's 3:23. "Go back to sleep, there is work tomorrow." "No, Father." The familiar warm buzz of vodka starts to sink in. You can barely make out your daughter's pale form in the darkness. "Why is that, devochka moya?" "Because in my dream, when I was about to go back to sleep, the thing wearing Mother's skin sat up." You pause, and face your daughter and look at her intensely. The figure behind you begins to stir.
"Don't talk that way about your brother, it is not his fault we have no money for coats. Such is life in Moscow."
I check into small hotel a few kilometers from Kiev. It is late. I am tired. I tell woman at desk I want a room. She tells me room number and give key. "But one more thing comrade; there is one room without number and always lock. Don't even peek in there." I take key and go to room to sleep. Night comes and I hear trickling of water. It comes from the room across. I cannot sleep so I open door. It is coming from room with no number. I pound on door. No response. I look in keyhole. I see nothing except red. Water still trickling. I go down to front desk to complain. "By the way who is in that room?" She look at me and begin to tell story. There was woman in there. Murdered by her husband. Skin all white, except her eyes, which were red. I tell her I don't give a shit. Stop the water trickling or give me refund. She gave me 100 ruble credit and free breakfast. Such is life in Moscow.
Its October guys!, here's some more Soviet creepypasta and yes some have already been posted on here
Cat is Hero of Motherland
You come home from hard day of work at glorious Soviet tractor factory. Enter lounge and drink vodka. Cat sit on top of kitchen table, stare at you. “Stupid cat.” you say, “You look just like comrade Stalin fat ugly wife!”. Early next morning, KGB kick down front door and take you to Siberian gulag for outrageous slur against Comrade Stalin beautiful wife. In glorious Soviet motherland, even cat can be trained to report owner for spread discontent and tell lie about senior party members. Cat receive Order Of Lenin medal and senior position in KGB; you receive 30 year hard labour sentence at Soviet re-education camp. Life is just and fair under our beloved leader Stalin.
Pocket Watch is Break
Walking home one night, you notice all candle in personal shack are lit. You finish vodka bottle as you approach door. House is empty, and you made sure not to feed guard dog, but candle still go out. You check Soviet pocket watch, small hand on 4, big hand on 1. You realize you soon be late for glorious unpaid labor at mighty Soviet factory. At factory, you find letter on floor. Is signed to you, from you. You open letter, wonder where you learn writing. Inside reads "the out for watch watch" You look at pocket watch. big hand on 4, little hand on one. You look at note again, 4th and 1st words have swapped places. "Watch out for the watch." You look at pocket watch again. You realize watch is broken, and get it fixed. You also decide to cut back on vodka, so do not send letter to yourself anymore. Such is life in Moscow.
Degenerate Murderer on Televisir
You are home to watch Pravda on televisir about degenerate murderer who is on the loose. You look out the window door to beet field, and you notice Man standing in the snow. He look like foto on televisir and he smile at you. You gulp vodka, picking up fone to your right and dialing Local Militia Precinct Commissar. Back out the glass you look, pressing fone to ear. Notice he now closer to you. You drop vodka in shock. No footprints in snow. It was reflection. You dullard! Your apartment is bulldozed down to make way for glorious tractor factory.
Siberian Pigsty
Once I hear story about girl in Chaplygin. She was asleep in her bed, when she feel lick on her hand. She thinks it is dog and goes to sleep. Next morning, she finds note on dresser with dead head of dog. It says "Capitalists can lick too." She screams. Father comes upstairs, takes belt off and beats her. Moral of story is daughters should not yell in house like peasant. House is not Siberian pigsty. I worry daughter will never find good Russian husband.
Mirror is Capitalist
Legend is being going like this. You are entering bathroom and standing in front of mirror. Turning candles off and, while being in front of mirror, spinning rapidly, you chanting "Leon Trotsky" "Leon Trotsky" "Leon Trotsky" "Leon Trotsky", several times, while catching glimpses of self on mirror. It is said that eventually you be seeing image of Leon Trotsky on mirror. Upon exiting bathroom you are being arrested by KGB for believing in existence of Leon Trotsky, whom party has proven never existed.
Gulag Escaperman
One night man tries escape from gulag. Makes his way to cabin in middle of tundra. Inside is plain, but many family pictures on walls. He falls asleep. In middle of night he is put in sack and dragged out. The next morning he is shot like dog. Pictures are windows. KGB always watching.
Lady Gorbochev
In Russia, coffin has pipe for air, and bell with string. If man is true Soviet, he does not die. When buried, yells for undertaker and rings bell. Bell rings. Is no wind. Undertaker asks - "Are you lady Gorbochev?" Voice says "Da!" "Born winter of 1927?" "Da!" "Gravestone says 'Died 20 February, 1957" "Niet, am still living!" "Am sorry, but is August. In June, ground will thaw. You must wait for June." And woman is true Soviet, waits for June.
Lenin Statue
Mother and father get little tired from building Communism, so they want to go to Moscow to buy vodka. They call most trusted babysitter. When babysitter arrives, children already sleep in beds. Babysitter just sits around and make sure everything good with children. Later that night, babysitter gets bored and goes to read Marx, but she can’t read downstairs because there’s no electricity (parents dodn’t want children reading Marx all night long). So, she calls parents and asks if she can get candles to read Marx in their room. Of course, the parents say it okay, but babysitter has one final request. She ask if she could cover up Lenin statue outside the bedroom window with blanket or cloth, because it makes her nervous. Phone line is silent for moment, and father who say, "Take children and get out of house. We will call milita. We do not have Lenin statue." Militia find all three of house occupants dead because KGB kill them for trying to cover Lenin statue. Then militia arrest parents for not having Lenin statue. Such is life in Moscow.
Toy Factory
Toys are made by loyal factory for amusement of the children of the motherland. Toys are of baby, and have realistic crying function. Soon, it becomes difficult to distinguish baby and toy. Both are burned for warmth. Such is life in mother Russia.
Potato Girl
Once there was a small boy who went to school to become proud Russian Communist. He found of a picture of a pretty American girl with smile and two fingers into peace sign. He takes the photo around and no on is knowing her. One night he hears tapping on window. He looks outside and it is the girl. "**** you American!" he screams, and throws potatoes at her. She keeps this up for several nights until boy is out of potatoes. He leaves his house to kill girl but is hit by a car instead. Driver gets out and takes the boy's photo. Girl is now holding a potato and has 3 fingers raised with a smile.
Holder of End
In any city, in Motherland, go to any asylum you can get into. Go to the front desk and ask for man who calls himself "The Holder of the End". Should a look of puny fascist-like fear come over the strong communist worker, then you will be taken to a cell in the building. It will be in a deep hidden section of the building. The corridors will be silent like Spetsnaz killing a weak anti-communist soldier. You will begin to hear someone whispering to themselves, like brother Yuri after 3 bottles too much of glorious Russian vodka. It will be in a language you do not understand but even your courageous workers heart will know fear. Should the talking stop at any moment, stop walking and yell "GREEDY CAPITALIST PIG! I WILL RAPE YOU LIKE SMALL CHILD." If you hear nothing then remove your trousers and enter the cell. If the whispering resumes like Russian workers after loss of only son then you may choose whether or not to remove pants. When you enter the room you will see small weak man who has not had beets in some time. He will be speaking in a language not russian, beat him until he speaks the tongue of the motherland. When he learns the great language you will say the bloodied pile that was once a man "What happens when they go together?" The fragile man will look into your eyes and answer in great detail. Some have gone mad and lost hope in this great land, do not worry they are in gulag now. After he finishes forget what he has told you for it is capitalist propaganda, kill him and feed him to your children in a beet stew.