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FirstBorn
Romania3955 Posts
This is like my first poem ever, and I wrote it because someone told me writing these clears your mind. + Show Spoiler + He was right Misery Accepting sufferance as your friend Devote you dreams to misery You wish your boundaries would extend Out of the frayed ends of sanity You got a grasp of sheer pain or is it so my friend ? Feeling weary , yet you drain You memories until the end You're wrong little man There's no pain, no sufferance No reason to be sad Or hide into the silence.    | ||
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LegendaryDreams
Canada1350 Posts
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minus_human
4784 Posts
Exceptional, I must say I love it. Keep writing. As a meek curiosity, who told you writing would help clear your mind?  | ||
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FirstBorn
Romania3955 Posts
On October 26 2007 04:50 minus_human wrote: Having the pleasure of knowing you personally, I must say this is a very accurate reflection of your way of thinking. Stone cold realism. Exceptional, I must say I love it. Keep writing. As a meek curiosity, who told you writing would help clear your mind? Ok, it was you. + Show Spoiler + And you could start writing again, lazy bitch. And post your other poetries here. | ||
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0myna0
5 Posts
My dearest minus_human...HE IS ABSOLUTELY RIGHT!!! START WRITING AGAIN!   | ||
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Snet
United States3573 Posts
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FirstBorn
Romania3955 Posts
On October 28 2007 08:09 Snet wrote: nice poem, i felt there should of been a fourth stanza expressing why theirs "no reason to be sad", but wtf i don't write poetry, and it was a good poem Thanks alot. I wanted it to have some sort of a sudden end, expressing that you can get out of depression really fast if you're determined and you understand certain things. | ||
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SilenTLurker
United States250 Posts
What does reason have to do with it? | ||
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FirstBorn
Romania3955 Posts
On October 29 2007 08:35 SilenTLurker wrote: "No reason to be sad" What does reason have to do with it? Usually misery starts off from a certain reason, but we keep finding other reasons to feel miserable. Out human nature makes us thirsty for attention. | ||
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