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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
 Maybe you know me from the Hydralisk Statue thread: http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=212364 ![[image loading]](http://www.animationsfilme.ch/wp-content/uploads/2013/01/Rha.png) I recently released my latest project, an animated Sci-Fi short movie. You can see it here: or on vimeo Feel free to comment or to share this with other people   | ||
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TBO
Germany1350 Posts
 don't read this before you watched the movie: + Show Spoiler + I think showing the screen with the procedure steps all revealed at 1:03 makes the plot twist a bit too obvious. Even without that the viewer can guess whats going to happen based on the fact that an AI like the one portraited in the movie wouldn't take so long to kill him after initializing the killing protocol and just be done with it and based on the fact that the protagonist says there is nothing on the ship computer. Obviously he wouldn't reveal it anyways but the viewer gets to know that there is an apparently intact ship computer and its not too far fetched to then assume that the AI didnt find anything about it in there and now has to resort to this more human approach of getting information. So in my humble opinion it could create more suspense if the screen only showed the steps up to the current ones and not all and please take it as a compliment that I took such a minor point to criticize | ||
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
It was a lot of work, but worth it. Let´s see where this is leading. | ||
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Bagration
United States18282 Posts
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
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Anuzi
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Steveling
Greece10806 Posts
On January 11 2013 08:32 TBO wrote: impressive, I was kinda shocked when I read you did it all alone and that it is your 1st year university project don't read this before you watched the movie: + Show Spoiler + I think showing the screen with the procedure steps all revealed at 1:03 makes the plot twist a bit too obvious. Even without that the viewer can guess whats going to happen based on the fact that an AI like the one portraited in the movie wouldn't take so long to kill him after initializing the killing protocol and just be done with it and based on the fact that the protagonist says there is nothing on the ship computer. Obviously he wouldn't reveal it anyways but the viewer gets to know that there is an apparently intact ship computer and its not too far fetched to then assume that the AI didnt find anything about it in there and now has to resort to this more human approach of getting information. So in my humble opinion it could create more suspense if the screen only showed the steps up to the current ones and not all and please take it as a compliment that I took such a minor point to criticize What, you did this on your 1st year? How's that even possible? Anyway, very nice job, keep working, keep getting better mate! xD | ||
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
I guess I worked intensive and focused on the important stuff | ||
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Chairman Ray
United States11903 Posts
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
I made all from scratch, it took intensive seven months. | ||
Rekrul
Korea (South)17174 Posts
impressive how did u create his voice? | ||
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
For the machine I added distortion and a ring modulator to make it so scratchy. | ||
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Bunn
Estonia934 Posts
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Liquid`TLO
Germany767 Posts
I'm always jealous of people with such artistic skills and the patience to create this kind of stuff but also incredibly grateful! | ||
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bertjuuhh
Netherlands36 Posts
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Lip the Pencilboy
Italy420 Posts
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Seven_Sins
Netherlands4 Posts
You sir, may become a god... | ||
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Grubby
Netherlands318 Posts
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19LaMbda
South Africa55 Posts
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Atokad
United States204 Posts
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