I think showing the screen with the procedure steps all revealed at 1:03 makes the plot twist a bit too obvious. Even without that the viewer can guess whats going to happen based on the fact that an AI like the one portraited in the movie wouldn't take so long to kill him after initializing the killing protocol and just be done with it and based on the fact that the protagonist says there is nothing on the ship computer.
Obviously he wouldn't reveal it anyways but the viewer gets to know that there is an apparently intact ship computer and its not too far fetched to then assume that the AI didnt find anything about it in there and now has to resort to this more human approach of getting information.
So in my humble opinion it could create more suspense if the screen only showed the steps up to the current ones and not all and please take it as a compliment that I took such a minor point to criticize

Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel

Germany49 Posts

January 10 2013 23:37 GMT

Haha, thanks

It was a lot of work, but worth it. Let´s see where this is leading.

Bagration

United States18282 Posts

January 11 2013 00:49 GMT

Incredible, very well made.

Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel

Germany49 Posts

January 11 2013 00:58 GMT

Thank you

Anuzi

192 Posts

January 11 2013 01:13 GMT

Holy shit. Everything about this is amazing - the animation, the dialogue, the audio..everything.

Steveling

Greece10806 Posts

January 11 2013 01:26 GMT

On January 11 2013 08:32 TBO wrote:
impressive, I was kinda shocked when I read you did it all alone and that it is your 1st year university project

don't read this before you watched the movie:
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What, you did this on your 1st year? How's that even possible?
Anyway, very nice job, keep working, keep getting better mate! xD

Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel

Germany49 Posts

January 11 2013 02:07 GMT

Thanks!

I guess I worked intensive and focused on the important stuff

Chairman Ray

United States11903 Posts

January 11 2013 02:14 GMT

wow, that's incredible for a project, good job! How long did it take you? Did you use open source models or did you produce everything from scratch? You definitely should apply to do cinematic for Blizzard.

Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel

Germany49 Posts

January 11 2013 02:21 GMT

#10

thanks

I made all from scratch, it took intensive seven months.

Rekrul

Korea (South)17174 Posts

January 11 2013 02:42 GMT

#11

holy crap that was awesome

impressive

how did u create his voice?

Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel

Germany49 Posts

January 11 2013 12:25 GMT

#12

Dave Masterson (imdb) spoke with a deep distorted voice. Above that it´s some KoreFX chorus effects and 3 half tones lowered.

For the machine I added distortion and a ring modulator to make it so scratchy.

Bunn

Estonia934 Posts

January 11 2013 13:57 GMT

#13

Wow this was amazing! (hope you plan on expanding on that idea!)

Liquid`TLO

Germany767 Posts

January 11 2013 15:03 GMT

#14

Love the setting and design. You're really talented

I'm always jealous of people with such artistic skills and the patience to create this kind of stuff but also incredibly grateful!

bertjuuhh

Netherlands36 Posts

January 11 2013 15:09 GMT

#15

Wow, this looks amazing dude!!

Lip the Pencilboy

Italy420 Posts

January 11 2013 15:13 GMT

#16

let me express you my sincere appreciation. impressive for a one man band, good camera, good rendering. Im not too much a fan of the plot but this might be subjective, still clear and unfolds well.