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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
 Maybe you know me from the Hydralisk Statue thread: http://www.teamliquid.net/blogs/viewblog.php?topic_id=212364 ![[image loading]](http://www.animationsfilme.ch/wp-content/uploads/2013/01/Rha.png) I recently released my latest project, an animated Sci-Fi short movie. You can see it here: or on vimeo Feel free to comment or to share this with other people   | ||
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TBO
Germany1350 Posts
 don't read this before you watched the movie: + Show Spoiler + I think showing the screen with the procedure steps all revealed at 1:03 makes the plot twist a bit too obvious. Even without that the viewer can guess whats going to happen based on the fact that an AI like the one portraited in the movie wouldn't take so long to kill him after initializing the killing protocol and just be done with it and based on the fact that the protagonist says there is nothing on the ship computer. Obviously he wouldn't reveal it anyways but the viewer gets to know that there is an apparently intact ship computer and its not too far fetched to then assume that the AI didnt find anything about it in there and now has to resort to this more human approach of getting information. So in my humble opinion it could create more suspense if the screen only showed the steps up to the current ones and not all and please take it as a compliment that I took such a minor point to criticize | ||
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
It was a lot of work, but worth it. Let´s see where this is leading. | ||
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Bagration
United States18282 Posts
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
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Anuzi
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Steveling
Greece10806 Posts
On January 11 2013 08:32 TBO wrote: impressive, I was kinda shocked when I read you did it all alone and that it is your 1st year university project don't read this before you watched the movie: + Show Spoiler + I think showing the screen with the procedure steps all revealed at 1:03 makes the plot twist a bit too obvious. Even without that the viewer can guess whats going to happen based on the fact that an AI like the one portraited in the movie wouldn't take so long to kill him after initializing the killing protocol and just be done with it and based on the fact that the protagonist says there is nothing on the ship computer. Obviously he wouldn't reveal it anyways but the viewer gets to know that there is an apparently intact ship computer and its not too far fetched to then assume that the AI didnt find anything about it in there and now has to resort to this more human approach of getting information. So in my humble opinion it could create more suspense if the screen only showed the steps up to the current ones and not all and please take it as a compliment that I took such a minor point to criticize What, you did this on your 1st year? How's that even possible? Anyway, very nice job, keep working, keep getting better mate! xD | ||
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
I guess I worked intensive and focused on the important stuff | ||
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Chairman Ray
United States11903 Posts
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
I made all from scratch, it took intensive seven months. | ||
Rekrul
Korea (South)17174 Posts
impressive how did u create his voice? | ||
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
For the machine I added distortion and a ring modulator to make it so scratchy. | ||
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Bunn
Estonia934 Posts
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Liquid`TLO
Germany767 Posts
I'm always jealous of people with such artistic skills and the patience to create this kind of stuff but also incredibly grateful! | ||
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bertjuuhh
Netherlands36 Posts
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Lip the Pencilboy
Italy420 Posts
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Seven_Sins
Netherlands4 Posts
You sir, may become a god... | ||
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Grubby
Netherlands318 Posts
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19LaMbda
South Africa55 Posts
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Atokad
United States204 Posts
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Kritos222
Sweden21 Posts
Now contact Hollywood, because they are fresh out of ideas | ||
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Bashnek
Australia895 Posts
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Musicus
Germany23576 Posts
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MilLorD
Germany36 Posts
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Grubby
Netherlands318 Posts
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SumTang
Canada21 Posts
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NVRLand
Sweden203 Posts
Keep up the good work, this was damn impressing! | ||
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Daeracon
Sweden199 Posts
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Azuhil
Sweden2 Posts
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Xcobidoo
Sweden1871 Posts
) in the city. What with the plot end open ending this could be a really good game trailer. | ||
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Atom Cannister
Germany380 Posts
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HuTSC2
Australia188 Posts
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heynes
Germany201 Posts
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DKR
United Kingdom622 Posts
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NervO
Netherlands511 Posts
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alzeht
Sweden2 Posts
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Sirrush
Netherlands165 Posts
This is amazing. | ||
Liquid`Jinro
Sweden33719 Posts
This is possible for 1 person to create? Insanity o,o | ||
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NKB
United Kingdom608 Posts
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Meta
United States6225 Posts
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Bentus
Germany86 Posts
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StrinterN
Denmark531 Posts
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mnck
Denmark1518 Posts
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mrRoflpwn
United States2618 Posts
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Blind Io
United Kingdom56 Posts
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FatChunk
Canada93 Posts
But seriously; it was amazing. Can you make this into a whole movie? If so, take my money. please. | ||
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SicPro
United States202 Posts
Looking forward to your next work. Make sure you keep us posted on your ascent to the top ^^ | ||
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Canucklehead
Canada5074 Posts
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Cadet Mouton
Netherlands13 Posts
Liked the elaborateness of the cities as well. Keep up and I will be looking out for more work of you! | ||
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Jeremy Reimer
Canada968 Posts
Amazing work. | ||
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StarGalaxy
Germany744 Posts
amazing! | ||
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GenghisKhan
United Kingdom68 Posts
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blae000
Norway1640 Posts
Also, the story seems really interesting, both 'pre' this and after! ^^ | ||
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Meatex
Australia285 Posts
lighting, rendering and particularly modelling was gob smackingly well done That said, animation is the weakest part of the film Initially there isn't much need for anything beyond head movement and facial animation was good But when he escapes the animation seems very rushed and just off. It has no impact, weight, effort (on the characters part) One example is when he pulls the robots face off It appears as though no effort is expended and the whole sequence is awkward That said still extremely impressive ^^ | ||
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GrandMaster_07
Peru52 Posts
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Digitalis
United States1043 Posts
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Neverplay
Austria532 Posts
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
what a response. Yes, it´s not my mothertounge, I´m German actually. I am currently gathering all my ideas around this universe and story. Stay tuned on kaleblechowski.tumblr.com or facebook.com/rha.movie if you´re interested! all the best and thanks again, Kaleb | ||
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Non0
United States100 Posts
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jrkirby
United States1510 Posts
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Kfish
Chile282 Posts
Amazing work, imagine what this guy could do with a team of professionals working with him. | ||
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Jetaap
France4814 Posts
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NuclearJudas
6546 Posts
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Chexx
Korea (South)11232 Posts
Looked really really nice but why do the good guys always fall for the same trick? :< | ||
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Shazeen
Germany32 Posts
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vaL4r
Germany240 Posts
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garbanzo
United States4046 Posts
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
Thank you Shazeen :D I really worked on that helmet, but I didn´t just want to show off, so due to a better camera position, it´s more or less hidden. | ||
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mnck
Denmark1518 Posts
http://mashable.com/2013/01/14/rha-sci-fi-short/ Pretty cool to see it getting attention. It really is a great job! | ||
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3FFA
United States3931 Posts
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Aulox
United States31 Posts
Pretty neat! Great job. | ||
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ironchef
Canada1350 Posts
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Aerisky
United States12129 Posts
This is amazing stuff. Best of luck with all the calls you've gotten!! :D | ||
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Tufas
Austria2259 Posts
congratulations | ||
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MrBitter
United States2940 Posts
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PhoenixVoid
Canada32740 Posts
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Kaleb aka. Mngzkhuel
Germany49 Posts
You should stay tuned, I´m talking to a producer next week, and I´ll have a lot of meetings by the start of february.Who knows | ||
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llIH
Norway2143 Posts
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Cimba
Germany20 Posts
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NGMarak
Germany4 Posts
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Coagulation
United States9633 Posts
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FanaTiker
Germany27 Posts
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