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I have visited several sites and started learning, I also ordered some books that help starters! Feel free to criticize the work and my performance
Drawing Manga 2nd attempt..
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DragoonPK
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I have visited several sites and started learning, I also ordered some books that help starters! Feel free to criticize the work and my performance | ||
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Murlox
France1699 Posts
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Ranix
United States666 Posts
On June 23 2009 08:44 Murlox wrote: How old are you ? According to his profile, 18.. that remains to be seen though. | ||
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DragoonPK
3259 Posts
On June 23 2009 08:45 David Mudkips wrote: According to his profile, 18.. that remains to be seen though. oh god.. What did I do now T.T.. | ||
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ZeroCartin
Costa Rica2390 Posts
for me, the best way to improve was copying a TON of artists, and then start drawing from what i rememberd i copied Keep on working/posting man | ||
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SayaSP
Laos5494 Posts
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Ranix
United States666 Posts
Nothing wrong. He/we were referring to the context of the drawing, not the quality of the work | ||
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minus_human
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Sonu
Canada577 Posts
the body doesnt look very natural. like make it more manly instead of scrawny.. and something about it is disspraportionate. | ||
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Leath
Canada1724 Posts
Of all the art books I read, that was the only one that actually helped me improve in the right direction. Most books are very mechanic and teaches you tricks that can make you look good, but wont make you a real good artist, imo. also check http://www.youtube.com/user/EclecticAsylumArt You have a lot of potential. Keep it up. =) | ||
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Frits
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DragoonPK
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On June 23 2009 12:22 Frits wrote: Hmm I wish you'd spend more attention to the details, it kinda looks like it was made in paint now. Will do man ! Thanks guys for the support! | ||
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Shauni
4077 Posts
On June 23 2009 12:22 Frits wrote: Hmm I wish you'd spend more attention to the details, it kinda looks like it was made in paint now. The coloring was pretty bad. You need to include shadows and highlights into your picture to make it not to look so flat and 2d. And his skin color is way off... Also, most manga pictures are inked digitally (or with digital pen), the edges that is. Otherwise the picture looks sketchy. | ||
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Gnojfatelob
Belgium216 Posts
1 - learn a single bo = copying a known artist 2 - expand on that single bo = pay attention to detail/shapes/symmetrics/... to see what makes it great 3 - learn another bo and expand on that bo again. 4 - When you have practiced your bo = drawing the same style object over and over again, you should be ready to add something to that bo on your own = add some new details to enrich your drawings. 5 - When you have got a lot of experience you can start to build your own bo = form your own style and favourite objects, draw from your experience with previous bo and make this one your own. 6 - Who knows, you might even become a progamer = professional artist and revolutionize the way people play starcraft today = draw your style. (Or you can just become a macro beast ofc). Spend as much time as you would on starcraft and expect it to take as long to become good. (How long does it take to go from D-- to B-level?) Also a D player should not attempt a bisu-build or other high apm tricks. Focus on the fundamentals and macro (= practice your basics a lot), micro (= make super detailed drawings) comes later. Btw, is that in photoshop or did you draw that by hand? (if you are practicing on paper, plz stop immeadiatly and start on you computer) | ||
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DragoonPK
3259 Posts
On June 23 2009 21:09 Gnojfatelob wrote: EVERYTHING IS STARCRAFT: 1 - learn a single bo = copying a known artist 2 - expand on that single bo = pay attention to detail/shapes/symmetrics/... to see what makes it great 3 - learn another bo and expand on that bo again. 4 - When you have practiced your bo = drawing the same style object over and over again, you should be ready to add something to that bo on your own = add some new details to enrich your drawings. 5 - When you have got a lot of experience you can start to build your own bo = form your own style and favourite objects, draw from your experience with previous bo and make this one your own. 6 - Who knows, you might even become a progamer = professional artist and revolutionize the way people play starcraft today = draw your style. (Or you can just become a macro beast ofc). Spend as much time as you would on starcraft and expect it to take as long to become good. (How long does it take to go from D-- to B-level?) Also a D player should not attempt a bisu-build or other high apm tricks. Focus on the fundamentals and macro (= practice your basics a lot), micro (= make super detailed drawings) comes later. Btw, is that in photoshop or did you draw that by hand? (if you are practicing on paper, plz stop immeadiatly and start on you computer) Ok wait, how the hell do you draw on photoshop, dont you need a stylus or something? Drawing by hand is more natural to me, and I scan what I draw and then color it and enhance it using photoshop. | ||
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Shauni
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Sigrun
United States1655 Posts
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maga33
United States247 Posts
shoulders look a odd though. He is a guy right? so give him those mantoss broad shoulders! Try to copy from artists soon you can redraw some of the stuff from memory and from there you can start to make your own work! | ||
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foeffa
Belgium2115 Posts
 Keep it up. | ||
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