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linestein
Profile Blog Joined June 2018
United States210 Posts
August 12 2019 23:30 GMT
#1
"How's your old man doing?"
"He's dead. Same as everything else around here."
"Hate to hear it. Would things be better if he were alive?"
"If he were alive and well, yeah. But the way it was with him that never was very likely."
"What wasn't?"
"Him being alive and well. He worked coal. He was damn good at it but it wasn't appreciated."
"He had connections, your dad."
"Yeah, people he trusted more than anything else."
"It's always like that, people with money."
"Sort of."

Lon looked up. "I was sort of a poet."
"Ever write anything? I mean on paper?"
"No. Nothing on paper, Carolton. I was more of what you'd call a singing poet."
Carolton frowned. "That's just a singer."
"Yeah, that's just it. I was a singer. But I was a poet, too."
"Sure you were, Lon."

Lon and Carolton walked several more blocks. They stopped side by side at the railroad tracks. There each of them wondered how you did it. Crossed the tracks, I mean. Neither Lon nor Carolton were afraid of trains but sometimes they walked in a way that suggested they were. So they just stuck there are the tracks waiting for something to happen. Nothing did. Nothing came. Nothing for days and days. They stood there for the better part of a month and nothing came. It was a big black downpour when finally a light appeared. That was better than nothing and they went across.

What was on the other side was a pile of junk. It was pretty weighty junk, too. The kind you see in a scrapyard, only it was piled ten miles high like newspapers in a vending machine. I kind of hoped Lon and Carolton would make something of it. They didn't though. Why not? Because when you encounter a pile of scrap you just keep walking. There they were on the other side of the tracks with nothing better to say than, "Sure we did it." Finally they went on walking. They had done a good impersonation of nothing in particular by the time they were done.

What exactly is this supposed to be like. That's what Lon had on his mind the whole time. Nothing in particular would have been Carolton's reply, but he didn't reply because nothing was ever asked. It was a thrilling story. They crossed railroad tracks and encountered towers of metal. Then they went on. It should have been different than it was but nothing really enlightening could happen in such a situation. For my part I wish there had been more to it, but there really wasn't.

****
"You can wish to be rich, you can wish to be tall. You can wish away the haters, you just gimme a call" ---Will Smith & DJ Khaled "Friend Like Me (End Title)"
Xxio
Profile Blog Joined July 2009
Canada5565 Posts
August 13 2019 21:41 GMT
#2
I like it, thanks for posting. The setting and passing of time made me think of them in a purgatory.
KTY
TelecoM
Profile Blog Joined January 2010
United States10847 Posts
August 14 2019 17:59 GMT
#3
Interesting story, to be honest I am kind of lost and not sure the moral of it all, I guess I shouldn't start smoking weed in the early morning. Thanks for sharing. It feels kind of like an empty story, maybe that is the whole point. 5/5 because i'm stoned with confusion.
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sneakyfox
Profile Joined January 2017
8218 Posts
August 16 2019 20:09 GMT
#4
I liked it.
"I saw what sneakyfox wrote on TL.net and it made me furious" - PartinG
HerbMon
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
United States472 Posts
August 19 2019 19:39 GMT
#5
The simplicity and melancholy feeling has me on a high. Thank you for this.
How we will win in the period ahead.
linestein
Profile Blog Joined June 2018
United States210 Posts
August 20 2019 00:38 GMT
#6
Thanks Herb, and everyone else! Be sure to 5-star!
"You can wish to be rich, you can wish to be tall. You can wish away the haters, you just gimme a call" ---Will Smith & DJ Khaled "Friend Like Me (End Title)"
Trainrunnef
Profile Blog Joined July 2010
United States601 Posts
August 20 2019 12:56 GMT
#7
On August 14 2019 06:41 Xxio wrote:
I like it, thanks for posting. The setting and passing of time made me think of them in a purgatory.


waiting for godot.... at the train tracks
I am, therefore I pee
_fool
Profile Joined February 2011
Netherlands685 Posts
August 22 2019 22:47 GMT
#8
On August 20 2019 21:56 Trainrunnef wrote:
Show nested quote +
On August 14 2019 06:41 Xxio wrote:
I like it, thanks for posting. The setting and passing of time made me think of them in a purgatory.


waiting for godot.... at the train tracks

This, exactly. I liked the emptiness in it.
"News is to the mind what sugar is to the body"
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