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Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-01-29 04:39:40
January 29 2010 04:15 GMT
#1
I currently have a few pieces of writing on the go, and this weekend i'm off to Big White for a snowboarding trip.

I foresee some free time to write, and i'll hopefully get to a few of the pieces.

However, for those of you who enjoy reading my blogs, i would like you to vote:
Should i finish my piece entitled "Oh my, that's a fucking guillotine", or "Going to Confession".

Guillotine is an interesting experience of mine that i've wanted to write about for a while; but the writing style is out of my comfort zone and i'm a little shy about posting it. It may be a giant fail. A small excerpt below:

Oh my god. That's a fucking guillotine.

"Here". she said from behind her face mask, a low, monotonous, sex-less, voice. A drone, working the conveyer belt in a surgical factory. I, the next doll in line, features set to be altered and modified. Her latex covered hands reached towards my hesitant ones, two grey spheres of malleable foam rubber dropping from her fingertips, like what you imagine to be the inside of a memoryfoam™ mattress.

A frown slowly crawls across my face as i realize she's given me stress balls.

The room was dark and encroaching. The other inhabitants busy preparing their work stations, the doctor attending his stainless steel instrument tray. My blindfold had just been removed, the dimmed lights and staunch sterility now leaving me both suffocated and parched. An ominous steel table rests to my left, ominous if for no other reason than that it was not the bed that i had expected, that the one bastion of comfort that i could expect in this faceless intimidating encounter was in fact just as stark and cowing. shitfuck... i should have taken that Adavan.


Confession is a standard mora-story with a mora-approach written in classic mora-style. If you typically like my blog posts, this should fit you kindly. A small excerpt below:

Confession

“So, what brings you here today, Taylor… Falls is it?” Her hand is clasping some sort of encrusted gem, dangling from the necklace resting on the exposed skin below her neck. Her hair is wispy and brown, loosely tied and haphazard, what I’d imagine her after having had great sex.

“Fales actually”, I smile and offer, a bit sheepishly. This isn’t the first time I’ve come to confession. I come about every three months, though in the past six months I’ve been four times. “Well, it’s been almost three months since I’ve come in, and thought I was probably due”.

“Oh yes, I see”, she lifts her glasses by scrunching her nose, leaning forward, closer to the ancient fifteen inch CRT, “It says here: contact with H, is that correct?”


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Poll: Which piece should i finish?
(Vote): Oh my god, that's a fucking Guillotine
(Vote): Going to Confession

Links to previous Blogs (in order of highest to lowest rated):
A Story
It's been a year
Life, Death, And Beauty
Filled With Happy
Turbulence
It's true
On the other side of 707
Nocturnal at Sunrise
Exit Music

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KurtistheTurtle
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
United States1966 Posts
January 29 2010 04:19 GMT
#2
because i can't click on your blogs and find your posts on my own, could you please link to them?
“Reject your sense of injury and the injury itself disappears."
Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
January 29 2010 04:26 GMT
#3
Linked in OP!
Happiness only real when shared.
Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
January 29 2010 04:26 GMT
#4
oh, and i guess i could give first few lines of each Story!
Happiness only real when shared.
Chef
Profile Blog Joined August 2005
10810 Posts
January 29 2010 04:28 GMT
#5
Guillotine! Challenge yourself man, that's the best way to improve :D I will definitely read when you post it.
LEGEND!! LEGEND!!
KurtistheTurtle
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
United States1966 Posts
January 29 2010 04:28 GMT
#6
haha thanks mora. i was being sarcastic because i CAN view your blogs, but suggesting you link to the stories for people who don't think of it. and i assumed the stories were in your blogs
“Reject your sense of injury and the injury itself disappears."
Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
January 29 2010 04:29 GMT
#7
On January 29 2010 13:28 KurtistheTurtle wrote:
haha thanks mora. i was being sarcastic because i CAN view your blogs, but suggesting you link to the stories for people who don't think of it. and i assumed the stories were in your blogs


i figured as much. it was a good idea.
Happiness only real when shared.
Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
January 29 2010 04:33 GMT
#8
bah, the stories are have completely different intentions.

guillotine is going to sound way better off the bat, but it's just a story. Confession is commentary about me, and i dunno, maybe even implied commentary on the psychology of being human?

oh well! i will finish the one with the highest votes!
Happiness only real when shared.
SanguineToss
Profile Blog Joined August 2009
Canada815 Posts
January 29 2010 05:18 GMT
#9
Big White? shit..my friends are all going and i was on the verge of going too LOL
shit i shouldve gone
Grobyc
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
Canada18410 Posts
January 29 2010 06:01 GMT
#10
Big White??? Shiet man, that's like less than an hour away from me!
If you watch Godzilla backwards it's about a benevolent lizard who helps rebuild a city and then moonwalks into the ocean.
Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
January 29 2010 06:54 GMT
#11
On January 29 2010 15:01 Grobyc wrote:
Big White??? Shiet man, that's like less than an hour away from me!


where do you live? :O
Happiness only real when shared.
starfries
Profile Blog Joined July 2009
Canada3508 Posts
January 29 2010 07:10 GMT
#12
oh fuck Guillotine sounds awesome.. well Confession would be interesting too but I really want to read Guillotine.
DJ – do you like ramen, Savior? Savior – not really. Bisu – I eat it often. Flash – I’m a maniac! | Foxer Fighting!
Grobyc
Profile Blog Joined June 2008
Canada18410 Posts
January 29 2010 07:11 GMT
#13
West Kelowna. I'm on the other side of the bridge, but it's not that far away. Going up to Big White on Feb 6th actually with a friend.
If you watch Godzilla backwards it's about a benevolent lizard who helps rebuild a city and then moonwalks into the ocean.
HeavOnEarth
Profile Blog Joined March 2008
United States7087 Posts
January 29 2010 07:59 GMT
#14
I notice a lack of the "Both" option.
"come korea next time... FXO house... 10 korean, 10 korean"
HeavOnEarth
Profile Blog Joined March 2008
United States7087 Posts
January 29 2010 07:59 GMT
#15
?
"come korea next time... FXO house... 10 korean, 10 korean"
Rekrul
Profile Blog Joined November 2002
Korea (South)17174 Posts
January 29 2010 08:06 GMT
#16
as all writers with something to write

you already know which one you are more ready to / want to write asap

oh you silly tl-blog advertiser
why so 진지해?
Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-01-29 08:43:15
January 29 2010 08:40 GMT
#17
On January 29 2010 17:06 Rekrul wrote:
as all writers with something to write

you already know which one you are more ready to / want to write asap

oh you silly tl-blog advertiser


i want to finish guillotine but i'm struggling with it.

confession will require less [total time] put in.

i guess my blog post had 2 intentions:
1) advertise of course
2) provide motivation to just do one

thanks for pointing it out to everyone that i like to advertise though. that's stellar.
Happiness only real when shared.
Elroi
Profile Joined August 2009
Sweden5599 Posts
January 29 2010 08:43 GMT
#18
Sound like you want to finish the confession-story to me Do what you like I will read anyway.
"To all eSports fans, I want to be remembered as a progamer who can make something out of nothing, and someone who always does his best. I think that is the right way of living, and I'm always doing my best to follow that." - Jaedong. /watch?v=jfghAzJqAp0
Rekrul
Profile Blog Joined November 2002
Korea (South)17174 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-01-29 08:48:01
January 29 2010 08:45 GMT
#19
then the answer is simple, confession first

forcing your way through a peice that you know can be a masterpiece but you just haven't acquired the 'writers feeling' to write it just yet is literary suicide (not that you don't know that, cough attention whoring / getting ur audience ready for ur work)
why so 진지해?
Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
January 29 2010 08:55 GMT
#20
On January 29 2010 17:45 Rekrul wrote:
then the answer is simple, confession first

forcing your way through a peice that you know can be a masterpiece but you just haven't acquired the 'writers feeling' to write it just yet is literary suicide (not that you don't know that, cough attention whoring / getting ur audience ready for ur work)


hmm, you've not brute-forced your way through any of your writing?

I'd say half the [good] writing i do flows naturally, and the other half takes about 6 times as long and is just brute force.

as much as i'm an attention whore, i don't like the way you put it: getting your audience ready for ur work. It implies my writing will be good/worth 'getting ready' for.

I already have performance anxiety in the bedroom, i don't need it with my writing. Take it easy? lol
Happiness only real when shared.
TheSituation
Profile Joined January 2010
United States32 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-01-29 09:11:33
January 29 2010 09:02 GMT
#21
+ Show Spoiler +
[image loading]


Which is hottest bro? If you pick me I will send private pics of the other situation.
What do you say to a guy who looks like rambo with his shirt off?
Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-01-29 09:08:03
January 29 2010 09:07 GMT
#22
is that necessary?

please remove the picture from your post.

i do not find it or you funny.
Happiness only real when shared.
Rekrul
Profile Blog Joined November 2002
Korea (South)17174 Posts
January 29 2010 09:10 GMT
#23
On January 29 2010 17:55 Mora wrote:
Show nested quote +
On January 29 2010 17:45 Rekrul wrote:
then the answer is simple, confession first

forcing your way through a peice that you know can be a masterpiece but you just haven't acquired the 'writers feeling' to write it just yet is literary suicide (not that you don't know that, cough attention whoring / getting ur audience ready for ur work)


hmm, you've not brute-forced your way through any of your writing?

I'd say half the [good] writing i do flows naturally, and the other half takes about 6 times as long and is just brute force.

as much as i'm an attention whore, i don't like the way you put it: getting your audience ready for ur work. It implies my writing will be good/worth 'getting ready' for.

I already have performance anxiety in the bedroom, i don't need it with my writing. Take it easy? lol


nah i can't write unless something is on my mind and i have a really bad hangover

other than that im fucked
why so 진지해?
TheSituation
Profile Joined January 2010
United States32 Posts
January 29 2010 09:11 GMT
#24
You know what? I respect that about you. Asked nicely even when I am clownin in your thread.

Aight bro.

Pic is gone.

But I cannot remove that shit. Something as hot as me should never be removed. I understand the shades though. Bitches would cream their panties if they saw this.
What do you say to a guy who looks like rambo with his shirt off?
Mora
Profile Blog Joined October 2002
Canada5235 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-01-29 09:31:16
January 29 2010 09:31 GMT
#25
On January 29 2010 18:11 TheSituation wrote:
You know what? I respect that about you. Asked nicely even when I am clownin in your thread.

Aight bro.

Pic is gone.

But I cannot remove that shit. Something as hot as me should never be removed. I understand the shades though. Bitches would cream their panties if they saw this.


whoa, thanks.

as for the guys... well, none of them are my type, but if the guy 2nd from the right didn't have a faux-hawk i might not be revolted?

cheers.
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