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Business School is fun. Right ?
I had to make a commercial for my "brand adv." class /:
My first thought was, ofc, TEAMLIQUID. Second, STARCRAFT.
But, since I'm in a "group" (because working together is fun. right ?), I'm also forced to be nice and to do listen to others' opinions (even if they all suck).
So, I couldn't do any TL or SC T.T No one here, teachers included, even know what it is (ok, International -Korean- Students do).
Well, we did Nike.
We... more "I" cuz "people" never do nothing. They just wank and give orders.
Basically, I had one day (more exactly "2 jours") to shoot everything. I wrote the scenario and did the post-prod.
And ofc, I've never done any of this before (ty Google, you are definitely my friend).
Here is the result I want to share with you guys :
VIDEO HERE PLEASE VOTE AND SHARE BECAUSE YOU ARE NICE :D
Oh, yeah. Football is Soccer, in English.
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haha, thats actually pretty impressive
nice job
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 I wanted to ask the TL Job DB to get some helps with shooting/editing/everything but don't have time
btw ty 
(I knew I should go to a Korean Business School. I would definitely do something related to SC there. Definitely.)
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Hong Kong20321 Posts
hahahah that was pretty cool lol. good job.
and...... was that UCL?
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Hehe nice. I really liked the ending. If you want some criticism, I found the music to be boring towards the end, but the rest was awesome. Good work.
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Heh a SC/TL one would have been awesome but seemingly no one in this country knows the game T_T
Still good job though.
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I dislike Nike very much, I also dislike commercials in general, but that was really really awesome.
Everything was good. 5 stars.
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United States24775 Posts
Yeah that was very good. After reading the OP I wasn't expecting such a good idea and well made video tbh!
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Very nice... other than the music at the beginning giving me seizures, the acting and video shooting was well done.
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That was a really cool ad. Unlike some people, I enjoyed the music.
Which of the guys were you ?
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Very cool!
Music was kind of confusing and I wasn't sure if something was wrong but overall very neat idea.
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motbob
United States12546 Posts
Your cinematography is really amazing in this vid :o
EDIT: you know what would have made it better? the room at the beginning isn't empty, there's a class going on that he's bailing out of. And the goalie at the end is the professor
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Well, it was pretty hard to get people involved :/
Actually, I my scenario was based on professor at the end but before the camera it's kinda hard to see the difference between Professor and Students so I put a security guy.
Oh and it's Royal Holloway Universsity of London, not UCL. I'm in exchange here.
PS : I've chosen the music on purpose. I wanted to make something "new" so the movie is more like a "thriller" than just a classic Nike ad with crazy skills and funny music.
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it's pretty good. the only improvement i can think of is the font of the text at the end.
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Wow, very impressive. I think the elevator scene would have been more effective without the dancing, and the ball should have been more visible at times (a bit too obvious that you're simply running down stairs in that fairly long cut).
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actually, he was really dribbling WITH the ball LOL.
Yeah, i was wondering if I have to cut the dancing or not but finally, I liked it :/
tx guys for the feedbacks btw, it helps me a lot for my final report :D
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Snet
United States3573 Posts
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Quite good indeed. But way to long for a commercial. Cut it down to 1 min or even lower 
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I wanted to make a 30s initially but i've actually found that Nike Football commercials are pretty long (average 2min in France).
But you may have a point here since it would prolly cost eyeballs if it has to be broadcasted.
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FuDDx
United States5015 Posts
Great stuff great job. ^_^
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Lolz, nice commercial : ) but the beginning could be shortened a little more
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Braavos36400 Posts
its pretty good, good concept
my suggestion would be (and i say this humbly as possible since i'm not a video expert) that you should have shortened it by a lot, just cutting extra seconds here and there on every shot because the music was definitely faster paced than the way you had it going
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On November 18 2009 03:09 Hot_Bid wrote:
its pretty good, good concept
my suggestion would be (and i say this humbly as possible since i'm not a video expert) that you should have shortened it by a lot, just cutting extra seconds here and there on every shot because the music was definitely faster paced than the way you had it going
yeah, you might have a point here but I wanted to play with the pace to show the same feeling than a real soccer match : sprint/slow/sprint/slow.
but it's actually easier in mind than doing irl :D
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That was actually pretty cool:D
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Very good especially since you had that much experience and time.
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Really good work. Thanks for sharing.
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That was way better than I was expecting from the OP, nice job!
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Make it again but switch to handball at the end. :D
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