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JonnyLaw
United States3482 Posts
When you co-cast with Moletrap sometimes the conversations sound argumentative. One of you will comment and the other will question the truth of it. If you two can work on this and brush things off that don't matter the cast would flow so much better. Keep up the hard work man. Examples: "This looks terrible." With a response of "No." Or "It looks like he'll..." With a response of "No." If the comments happen and brushed over everything flows better. | ||
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Dubsy
Canada186 Posts
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Dubsy
Canada186 Posts
On January 31 2012 01:41 Achaia wrote: The other day during a cast Moletrap literally repeated the same thing that Khaldor had just said. . That's pretty much exactly what Tasteless does. That's what's infuriating about Tastosis to me. Artosis makes a few really sharp observations and then Tasteless tries to say them... Louder? Maybe Artosis just jumps on the cupcakes and knocks them out of the park so Tasteless doesn't have much to add but WAY too many conversations go like this: A: Wow that was such a good drop! T: That was actually such a good drop A: Oh no losing that observer is just so bad for him. T: That is actually so bad. A: Perfect forcefields go down! T: That is actually perfect forcefields. E: Not trying to derail the topic, just pointing out that I actually like that Khaldor sometimes gets a bit argumentative because it keeps both casters honest and it's a hell of a lot more watchable. | ||
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m4inbrain
1505 Posts
But i have criticism as well. You are really fast with jumping the gun ("thats gg", "that was a bad engagement" - even if it wasnt). Try to cast what actually happens, not what could be in 2 minutes. Of course you can give predictions, but often you just jump the gun and overestimate stuff. At least it feels like. Ah, and get your hardware at home straight, your mic actually gave me a headache. -.- Ansonsten, weitermachen. Machst keinen schlechten Job, allerdings versuch Moletrap nicht unterzubuttern (aufn Kopp haun), das wirkte heute ein wenig unprofessionell irgendwie. (suggestion about stopping stuff like smacking moletrap in the head and not "bully" him because it looks unprofessional - but i can say it more clearly in german) | ||
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Meta
United States6225 Posts
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People_0f_Color
177 Posts
Also, hardy har har that someone with my name would be commenting about that, I get it. Besides that, love your style. | ||
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oOOoOphidian
United States1402 Posts
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Rodberd
Germany531 Posts
but im honest, i dont like you as a caster. maybe its a sympathie-thing but i dont like the way how you appear during the casts for the GSL. the german stuff was fine, but i dont think you fit in the GSL-casting area. Ofc i should give you the chance to improve your casting, but i cant really tell why i dont like it. from my point of view, wolf/moletrap/doa have been better caster. i dont compare your casting with their casting, but you cant just fill the gap that there is. let me see more GSTL and Code A, maybe i can give a more d etailed explanaitio why i dont like your casting. | ||
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ChaosTerran
Austria844 Posts
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NuclearJudas
6546 Posts
On February 04 2012 17:29 ChaosTerran wrote: I like your casting. You are not as good as Wolf imo, but you are way better than Khaldor, Khaldor is just not my cup of tea. Unintentional comedy is the best comedy. OT: Love you Khaldor, keep up the good work. | ||
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Zealot Lord
Hong Kong744 Posts
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ImHuko
United States996 Posts
On February 04 2012 16:26 JonnyLaw wrote: Hey Khaldor, love your commentating! When you co-cast with Moletrap sometimes the conversations sound argumentative. One of you will comment and the other will question the truth of it. If you two can work on this and brush things off that don't matter the cast would flow so much better. Keep up the hard work man. Examples: "This looks terrible." With a response of "No." Or "It looks like he'll..." With a response of "No." If the comments happen and brushed over everything flows better. Everything sounds argumentative with Moletrap | ||
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Blade Fox
United States215 Posts
I'd suggest they pair you with Wolf I'm 100% sure it'd be more natural. Mole trap seems to just make casting awkward I don't know how he does it but he does indeed do it. No offense to mole trap but there's caster chemistry and then there's no caster chemistry. | ||
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Proseat
Germany5113 Posts
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FlamingTurd
United States1059 Posts
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arkedos
Germany1426 Posts
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FlamingTurd
United States1059 Posts
On February 04 2012 17:44 Proseat wrote: Khaldor, loosen your tongue more when you speak and try to enunciate the endings of words better. Don't swallow the plurals just because it's done so in German (one marauder -> two marauders). Try to not use the same words/phrases over and over. Also mind the difference between this/that and these/those as well as much/many. Other than that, you're doing a good job. I also agree with what he said. These are just some of the smaller things that are definitely noticeable, but are not huge by any means. Perhaps studying them wouldn't be a terrible thing since it just gets you that much closer to speaking perfectly :-D | ||
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leveller
Sweden1840 Posts
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yakitate304
United States655 Posts
Your accent isn't problematic (at least for me) and I feel that you've made good strides in becoming more understandable and clear with your phrasing. Props for putting yourself out there for evaluation and self-improvement. I know you'll continue to get better! | ||
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Bumrusherr
Australia6 Posts
I'm sorry but there has been many an occasion where I have questioned your knowlege of the game. Sure you get the job done and keep up with what's happening in the game but there are a few aspects of your casting that could hinder your development as a respected caster. For example, your tone of voice while casting is very variable, sometimes when something SIGNIFICANT is happening, your tone makes it sound like it's not a very big deal, misleading the audience, and sometimes when something INSIGNIFICANT is happening, you act like it's a tide turner in the game. Just my two cents, iron out this kink and no complaints from me ! | ||
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