no offence but the production wasn't that great and it caused your voice to sound a bit high, and painful for my ears, the lyrics are ok, but you might want to get a better mic or something

Bacon-X

United States266 Posts

May 17 2011 00:16 GMT

#22

Thanks to all your responses so far. Okay okay, that was only rap #1. I've written raps with less cursing (for example in one song I say "shit" only twice, thats it)

And yeah, those other raps reference StarCraft so much better. I agree. I really did this one for fun though. It's all for enjoyment and laughter, I don't see why other people so offended by it lol. I'm a rapper and I curse so what haha. But yeah I agree it is excessive in that particular rap.

I'll update this thread with my next raps. I'll post a good old one I wrote tomorrow. It's my protoss rap ^^;

Bacon-X

United States266 Posts

May 17 2011 00:18 GMT

#23

On May 17 2011 09:09 Datum wrote:
Actually not bad, but your inability to accept the criticisms of others is quite offputting. I would suggest cleaning up your rap (nobody on TL wants to hear the N-word), and adopting a more humble attitude. Take that "anyone who says its terrible obviously doesn't listen to rap music" to YouTube. That being said, I could see you doing something a little better in the future.

Okay. This was a nice experience for me. I learned what people from TL prefer. And I shall take that advice. =D

douche

Sweden42 Posts

May 17 2011 00:22 GMT

#24

He cant be serious

Broodlings

United States157 Posts

May 17 2011 00:24 GMT

#25

I lol'd this rap is legit

Bacon-X

United States266 Posts

May 17 2011 00:28 GMT

#26

On May 17 2011 09:24 Broodlings wrote:
I lol'd this rap is legit

FUCK YEAH! LOL! someone feels me

PhiliBiRD

United States2643 Posts

May 17 2011 00:33 GMT

#27

dont think this is a troll. its just his take on starcraft gangsta style!

ignore the dicks and learn from the people who give serious advice. gl

iSTime

1579 Posts

May 17 2011 00:39 GMT

#28

On May 17 2011 09:08 FMJ wrote:
I thought the rule was only black people could say the N word publicly.

He looks at least half black, no?

Maybe if you added a NSFW tag or something people would stop being such haters. At least then people who are easily offended can only blame themselves.

mardi

United States1164 Posts

May 17 2011 00:44 GMT

#29

lol you remind me of waka flocka. people might take you more seriously if you don't use lex luger type beats lol.

Bacon-X

United States266 Posts

May 17 2011 01:15 GMT

#30

On May 17 2011 09:44 mardi wrote:
lol you remind me of waka flocka. people might take you more seriously if you don't use lex luger type beats lol.

lol WTF that beat is hard! and it's rick ross btw xD

EggYsc2

620 Posts

May 17 2011 01:20 GMT

#31

Its not bad
its what rap really is if you guys listen to any modern day stuff
what husky does isnt really a rap
this is legit

that being said its a bit corny about rapping about a video game but it wasnt bad
keep it up maybe better prodcution it will sound alot better

Papulatus

United States669 Posts

May 17 2011 01:27 GMT

#32

yo whats with all the hate this is st8 gangsta representin dat teamliquid.net

TL FO EVER

Bacon-X

United States266 Posts

May 17 2011 01:30 GMT

#33

On May 17 2011 10:27 Papulatus wrote:
yo whats with all the hate this is st8 gangsta representin dat teamliquid.net

TL FO EVER

Someone feels me around here haha yeaaah. I'm sayin whats up to teamliquid here haha. I'm gonna make a rap about teamliquid. Coming soon... very soon...
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by tomorrow~

:D