EPTWrite me a poem! - Page 3
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Aizen
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Elric
United Kingdom1327 Posts
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Sadness
Brazil552 Posts
Time go fast it won't To speed things up All I need is a fucking don't PS1: Sorry if that doesn't make sense, I never wrote a poem in english PS2: For those who don't get it, the last line should be "All I need is a fucking don't stop", but it wouldn't rhyme | ||
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Snet
United States3573 Posts
you squint alot also, it kinda creeps me out | ||
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vhallee
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+ Show Spoiler + although i imagined it being played at a faster pace. but im a fuckin noob at music  | ||
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MTF
United States1739 Posts
+ Show Spoiler + I obviously smiled more when I heard My Broodling Romance being done, but Evan's poem/song was the best. :D | ||
mikeymoo
Canada7170 Posts
On March 20 2008 22:23 Snet wrote: i like your fingernails you squint alot also, it kinda creeps me out Well if you noticed, I was looking outside the window and the sun was in my eyes A LOT. Also, I find that I'm more of a modest person, so the squinting and scratching my head is more due to a lack of self confidence if anything =[. Fingernails- yes they need to be clipped. Or was that a genuine comment? Mic quality- it will be fixed for he next one- I'll turn sensitivity down (as I sing quite loudly) and speak louder into the microphone. | ||
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mikeymoo
Canada7170 Posts
On March 20 2008 22:28 vhallee wrote: omg evan's poem was fantastic. + Show Spoiler + although i imagined it being played at a faster pace. but im a fuckin noob at music He said "nicely..." wtf was I supposed to do? lol | ||
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defenestrate
United States579 Posts
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yare
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It tried to discover the source of ambition After 27 pages nothing came to fruition There are still 9 days to wait yet I guess we will all just sit and fret Everyone has a plausible theory Will we all be the April's fools? What more can be said about us tools Hopefully the news isn't so dreary That we all turn teary T.t | ||
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pangshai
Chinatown5333 Posts
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LegendaryDreams
Canada1350 Posts
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Raithed
China7078 Posts
Smother me with all your might and I might stay the night, Come calm me when my heart isn't still and we look up the lights. Please don't worry, I'm just doing fine, Come back to me when you find the time. I don't care where you are or what you have to say I don't give a fuck or care enough to find the time today. I can't see you anymore cause I'm going blind. Don't bother me when I am at your sister's party, locking eyes, intertwine. wow, too emo. new poem! I walk the streets since I'm so poor, I borrow cars, but no girlfriend to call, "whore." I play Protoss yet I suck, I lack APM and bad luck. "Teamliquid is my refuge," I scream and whine, I'm so ugly when I look in the mirror, I wish I was blind. Kicking rocks outside because I have no consoles, Can't get good at Starcraft, I need a new proposal. WHY WHY WHY, I scream and yell. I punch and holler and jump until I fell. Nerf tanks! Nerf dragoons! Nerf Zerg too! Damn myself and damn this game, Since Raithed is asking for math help, he is to be blamed. I quit Starcraft, quit forums too? What would Rekrul do? My last option: to lurk Raithed, Finding my starvation and find faith. I got banned, WHY WHY WHY!? Oh, I get it, I'm the biggest douchebag of this land. | ||
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fanatacist
10319 Posts
OWNED That was nice. I like our little poetry war. | ||
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Raithed
China7078 Posts
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fanatacist
10319 Posts
On March 22 2008 12:42 Raithed wrote: hope mikeymoo does mine. >_> Your's isn't as musical ): I'm sure his genius will pull it off though. I will write a counter sometime maybe anyways. | ||
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evanthebouncy!
United States12816 Posts
On March 21 2008 08:09 mikeymoo wrote: He said "nicely..." wtf was I supposed to do? lol That was a space filler so I get first floor while I think of something interesting... I forgot to delete it. | ||
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mikeymoo
Canada7170 Posts
I think My Broodling Romance turned out the best due to two things: A: It was a good length for a song. TWOOOOOO: It had a chorus lol. So from now on if you don't have a chorus, I will take excerpts and make my own. Volume II will encompass every new poem posted here so far. Mike PS: If you could also PM me your songs, it would be very helpful. Then I can just go through my inbox to see what lies ahead. In volume III, I will suggest that you give me a tempo or style to work with. It takes me out of my comfort zone. | ||
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fanatacist
10319 Posts
Ooooooh Raithed In your words I now have faith That I have found your biggest secret You are stupid; you are an inbred Ooooooh Raithed No wonder you're not unscathed By the terrors of your childhood It is my fault, I never understood *quietly* did your alcoholic dad beat you too hard? did kids at school call you a retard? did your mom sell herself for food scraps to AIDS-infested whore-seeking chaps? *crescendo* OOOH RAITHED HOW COULD I HAVE BEEN SUCH A FOOL TO SEE THAT YOU'RE NOT JUST A TOOL YOU'RE A TRAUMATIZED LITTLE KID FROM THE HORRORS YOU WOULD NOT ADMIT IT'S OKAY, NOW I SEE THE LIGHT IT'S REALLY OKAY, IT'S REALLY ALRIGHT I'M SORRY FOR INSULTING YOUR INTELLIGENCE YOU WERE NEVER DESTINED FOR EXCELLENCE FROM THE START YOU'VE HAD JUST ONE FATE I CAN TELL BY THE WAY YOU LOOK- IT'S ALREADY TOO LATE *normal* To you, this life, it's all just a gaaameee You're clueless, you don't even know IT'S NAAAMEEEE OOH This game, we call it success But due to your past's duress It is clear you will never win If community college you fail in *crescendo* OOOH RAITHED HOW COULD I HAVE BEEN SO IGNORANT YOUR INCOMPREHENSION MAKES YOU BELLIGERANT BUT IT'S OKAY, I REALLY UNDERSTAND IT'S NOT IN YOUR VAGINA THAT YOU HAVE SAND *quiet - outro* it's all in your head, it's all in your head, hand against chest, hand against chest, over and over, allowing no rest, you present to me the retard's salute one plus one you can't compute it's all in your head, it's all in your heaadddd... | ||
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Raithed
China7078 Posts
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