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DragoonPK
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
3259 Posts
Last Edited: 2010-09-11 22:18:33
September 11 2010 22:08 GMT
#1
I have been thinking alot lately about the possibilities of me being able to do something related to the video game industry. I mean quite frankly speaking, Bahrain is not the place to be for anything to do with gaming. Downtown San Fransisco is the place to be for all of that Jazz.

I have a huge passion of gaming in general, obviously BW and SC2 are some my favorite games ever but before that I used to play alot of Console and handheld games. I still continue to play Consoles and handhelds but SC2 currently takes the biggest spot of my day. I follow everything I possibly can about gaming, from IGN to Podcasts to the twitter of every publisher I know, to constantly visiting a ton of gaming sites. I have always wanted to try and become a reviewer or an Editor for a videogame related site or Magazine. But again my location provides a big obstacle in my way to trying out what I want.

However, recently I stumbled upon MEgamers.com ! Turns out its the only site in the Middle East that actually caters to gamers and one that has a pretty solid amount of followers. I also noticed they are low on reviewers and are open for any potential writers. So I decided that this might be an opportunity for me to try and do something. So I took my CV along with their request of a review I had recently done and sent it to them.

Hopefully this will sort of allow me to finally do something and become a reviewer :3. Do you guys have any tips you can give me regarding this matter? How would I be able to get through this huge geographical location blockade. In addition the review of FF13 I worte is in the spoilers down below, so please have a look and comment! Criticism is welcome!

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The Amount of prestige the Final Fantasy series has is tremendous, and with each title released the hype and expectation is extremely high. Final Fantasy 13 was announced back in 2006 when we first got a glimpse of the PS3 causing the huge fanbase to sit tightly and wait for 4 years until the first next-gen Final Fantasy finally hits consoles.


Final Fantasy 13 is set primarily in Cocoon, a sphere shaped world that floats over a much bigger world called Pulse. Cocoon and Pulse are extremely different places and have been constantly in war for generations, Cocoon is a very advanced world that is developed and catered to be a shelter from Pulse which is a jungle like world filled with vicious might creatures that will make you run for your life. Both of those worlds are monitored and controlled by godlike beings called the fal’cie, these fal’cie sometimes for unknown reasons create Lucie which are humans that have been given a Focus(a goal) and if they don’t successfully accomplish that focus they turn in to monsters and are never able to return back to their previous form. These terms may sound confusing in the beginning but as you progress through the game you get a better understanding of what is going in. The main story of the game revolves around the lovely Lighting, a young pink-haired woman in her quest to find a way to save her sister Sarah who got turned into a lucie by a Falcie from Pulse. You are joined by a diverse group of characters: Snow, Hope, Sazh, Fang, Vanielle who all have different reasons to help you accomplished the common goal of stopping Fal’cie from doing whatever the hell they want .


The battle system of Final Fantasy 13 is called ATB or active time battle. It’s sort of a mash between a turn based and real time RPG, you take control of 1 character the whole battle while the others are controlled by the AI and you can perform attacks that take away 1 or more spots in the ATB gauge. Once you used up all the spots on the ATB gauge then it takes a small period of time to refill. You start out with 2 spots in the beginning of the game however as your characters develop the gauges increase and you are able to do more stuff each time. There is also auto-battle which is uses the AI to make the best decisions for you based on the situation you are in. The problem some people have with auto-battle is that the AI is so smart that auto-battle is probably the easiest and best way to finish these battles. There are a lot of criticisms around auto-battle, however I think it’s a real time saver, would you rather go through the menus clicking attack 5 times or click auto-battle once and it does it for you? Either ways, you can choose to use it or not depending on your liking. The battle system revolves around “staggering” your opponent which basically means filling a gauge that causes your opponent to be open to massive amounts of damage. This is done by combing attacks onto an enemy filling the “stagger gauge” in the process. As you get through around 7 hours or so through your playthrough you will get introduced to” paradigms”. Paradigms are a set of roles available such as medic and commander that completely change the types of spells/magic/skills you can usefor each of your characters during battle, for example if you pick the Relentless Assault Paradigm you switch to roles that try to deal as much damage possible to the enemy. Paradigms open up a whole depth to the game as it requires you to know what roles to setup and when to switch to what role at a given time in battle. The leveling up system in the game is called the Crystarium which very similar to Final Fantasy X’s Sphere grid system as you basically get points from battle and you can level up the roles of each character.


In terms of visuals Final Fantasy 13 is a stunning game, Square Enix sure did its job to ensure that playing this game is breathtaking on its own extent. The textures are rich, the colors feel very natural and the diversity of environments that you can experience in this game from frozen lakes to vast lowlands is quite astonishing. The Pre-rendered (CGI) Cutscenes in this game is comparable to watching Avatar on blu-ray, you can visually see every single detail from Snow’s facial hair , to the curves and details of an airship. The addition of the ability to upscale to a 1080p capable HDTV on the PS3 version enhances the experience even more, so big props to the folks and Square Enix for that welcome addition.


The soundtrack for Final Fantasy 13 is gorgeous, carefully orchestrator pieces of music that molds perfectly the amazing graphics of the game however, sometimes I feel some pieces of music are repeated more than usual and the battle theme although still epic gets too repetitive. As for the voice casting its somewhat of a mixture of horrible to amazing, on one hand you have Ali Hillis voicing Lighting and doing a great job of bringing the character to life, on the other hand you have Georgia Van Cuylenburgh voicing Vanielle which might be cute at first but it gets very very annoying after the first 2 hours of hearing her voice over and over again.


The game in a sense is very linear, literally. I mean you constantly go in straight lines for the first 10 chapters of the game, and then suddenly you get thrown into these huge areas where you can actually start side questing through Missions and target hunts, in addition to exploration. Even though the game can take you around 40 hours to finish and another 40 or so depending on what you do to complete everything in the game, I still feel that compared to previous titles in the series this one doesn’t have that many post game exploration and side quests which disappointed me somewhat. Still Final Fantasy 13 is an enjoyable experience and is one of the best JRPGs in the current next-gen market.


Graphics 9.5
- Some of the best graphics for any game out there in the market, CGI reminds me of avatar on blu-ray.


Gameplay: 8.5
- The gameplay is fun and engaging, however the depth only start occurring later in the game and the auto-battle feature might really frustrate the hardcore audience.


Sound: 8.0
- The soundtrack is incredible but sometimes repetitive, voice acting is all over the place from bad to amazing.


Value: 8.5
- Will take a lot of time to finish all the sidequests and finish all the post end game missions but I still expected more from a JRPG specially a Final Fantasy title.


Fun Factor: 9.0
- The story, the gameplay, and the world will keep you entertained for the whole trip.


Overall: 8.5
- Final Fantasy is a great JRPG to its own extent, but the linearity and voice acting are the biggest stones blocking it from becoming the best title in the series.

Note: The scale I used and how the review is broken down is according to the websites guildlines for writing a review.


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moopie
Profile Joined July 2009
12605 Posts
September 11 2010 22:28 GMT
#2
If you want to write game reviews, geographical location won't stop you. Start up a gaming blog (yes there are thousands of them, but don't let that stop you), and write. Enough good content will generate followers and feedback. As long as you enjoy what you are doing, go for it. If your goal is to join an already existing gaming-site for reviews, think of your own blog as a portfolio or a jumping off point.
I'm going to sleep, let me get some of that carpet.
ShaperofDreams
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
Canada2492 Posts
September 11 2010 22:29 GMT
#3
Great review but you really want to be able to write with flare. My advice is to research sentence structure and punctuation so you know how to manipulate them to create personality and really interesting structures. You'll need to give people a reason to listen to you.

example: zero punctuation uses ridiculous analogies and comparisons; he uses surprising adjectives that carry a lot of emotional baggage with them to describe the different aspects of the games that he reviews.

His style uses a lot of really long or really short sentences to give his writing a British wit (his accent doesn't hurt either).
Bitches don't know about my overlord. FUCK OFF ALDARIS I HAVE ENOUGH PYLONS. My Balls are as smooth as Eggs.
DragoonPK
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
3259 Posts
September 11 2010 22:31 GMT
#4
On September 12 2010 07:28 moopie wrote:
If you want to write game reviews, geographical location won't stop you. Start up a gaming blog (yes there are thousands of them, but don't let that stop you), and write. Enough good content will generate followers and feedback. As long as you enjoy what you are doing, go for it. If your goal is to join an already existing gaming-site for reviews, think of your own blog as a portfolio or a jumping off point.


Thanks moopie, if you can take a look at my review and criticizes it , then it would be lovely! A question, what attracts people to reviews? Is it just how good the writing is, or does the personality and style of the reviewer matter just as much? Whats your opinion?
ShaperofDreams
Profile Blog Joined December 2008
Canada2492 Posts
September 11 2010 22:33 GMT
#5
Check out writing with style by heather pyrcz. its oxford good stuff.

my credibility for giving advice: not too much (im still a student) but i did just finish editing a book on surgery that will be published in a couple months.
Bitches don't know about my overlord. FUCK OFF ALDARIS I HAVE ENOUGH PYLONS. My Balls are as smooth as Eggs.
DragoonPK
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
3259 Posts
September 11 2010 22:36 GMT
#6
On September 12 2010 07:29 ShaperofDreams wrote:
Great review but you really want to be able to write with flare. My advice is to research sentence structure and punctuation so you know how to manipulate them to create personality and really interesting structures. You'll need to give people a reason to listen to you.

example: zero punctuation uses ridiculous analogies and comparisons; he uses surprising adjectives that carry a lot of emotional baggage with them to describe the different aspects of the games that he reviews.

His style uses a lot of really long or really short sentences to give his writing a British wit (his accent doesn't hurt either).


Yeah I am researching that right now, english is my 2nd language but I know it since Kindergarden so thats not that big of a deal I guess. I also feel that lots of reviewers are either bias or just ignorant about alot of other stuff :/, I mean I read one guys blog that claimed that WOW is the pinnacle of PC gaming which is quite frankly not a 100% true. I mean yeah WOW is the pinnacle of MMORPGs, It did sort of setup the current gen MMORPG genre, but you know if you put it against something like Half Life 2 or Portal then its pretty hard to justify that statement.
Karliath
Profile Blog Joined April 2010
United States2214 Posts
September 11 2010 22:39 GMT
#7
www.bitmob.com is a community website where everyone is allowed to write articles/reviews. While all of them are posted on a "mobfeed," the best ones are featured on the front page. As such, they have a lot of tools and articles about how to write better, concerning video games. Perhaps you wouldn't want to actually write there, but there's a lot you can learn from.

In my opinion, the best reviews are the ones that address every point and part of the game clearly. This includes the gameplay, graphics, music, storyline, etc. However, these reviews are pretty standard, and can be found everywhere, like ign.com and gamespot.com

The most interesting reviews are the ones that take a personal standpoint, usually focusing on a specific part of the game and why that aspect makes the game a good game. In these cases, you would not talk about graphics or music or some of the more "arbitrary" things. For example, your whole review could be based on how the atmosphere of the game affects your mood and your enjoyment of the game.

Obviously, if you are writing general reviews, the first option would be better. If you are looking for something more fun and interesting, and your article does not require that you hit all of the points, the latter would be much better to read.
DragoonPK
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
3259 Posts
September 11 2010 23:22 GMT
#8
Yeah I'm aiming for a more traditional review but with a sense of personality in there that makes it yours. Like not robot material review where you are like super analytical etc.
Catch]22
Profile Blog Joined July 2009
Sweden2683 Posts
September 12 2010 01:26 GMT
#9
You forgot to mention that FF13 is pretty much a remake of FF7 with a less involving fighting/skill system.
DragoonPK
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
3259 Posts
September 12 2010 10:54 GMT
#10
On September 12 2010 10:26 Catch]22 wrote:
You forgot to mention that FF13 is pretty much a remake of FF7 with a less involving fighting/skill system.

The heroine , Lighting is defiantly a female version of cloud. But FF7 is just too different story wise and character wise that I just dont your statement.
DragoonPK
Profile Blog Joined July 2007
3259 Posts
September 12 2010 10:54 GMT
#11
And who the hell is writing every blog I make a 1 T.T
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