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A short story, fictional but historical

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March 31 2024 09:36 GMT
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Being a real history nerd, I've been thinking in the lines of "How could've Hannibal felt before the Lake Trasimene?" So I decided to develop it a little. I also did re-read Remarque's novels and once again I'm in awe of his style so I (poorly) try to emulate it while writing. I wrote in my native and obscure bulgarian language but I did my best to represent it correctly in English. Anyway, any feedback is greatly appreciated, here's the story:


The morning mist hung low over the waters of Lake Trasimene, a silent witness to the Carthaginian army's movements. Hannibal Barca, the mastermind behind the audacious crossing of the Alps, stood motionless, his gaze fixed on the undulating hills that cradled the Roman forces in their deceptive embrace.

In the quiet before the storm, Hannibal's thoughts wandered back to his homeland, to the promise he had once made to his father, Hamilcar Barca. The vow to never be a friend to Rome was etched into his soul, a constant echo in his heart. Yet, as he stood there, the weight of the lives under his command pressed heavily upon him. Each soldier, the sons of Carthage as well as the men from the countless tribes that had joined, had followed him through those horrific treacherous mountains, facing the wrath of nature and the hostility of different enemies. And they had not faltered, driven by the same burning desire for retribution that fueled Hannibal's every step.

The Battle of Lake Trasimene was not going to be just another clash of arms; it was the culmination of years of strategic brilliance and unyielding determination. Hannibal knew the Romans were formidable opponents, their discipline and might renowned throughout the known world, their vast empire was a testament of their skills as conquerors and as statesmen. But he also knew that they were unprepared for the kind of warfare he had brought to their doorstep.

As the first light of dawn broke through the haze, Hannibal's eyes reflected a fire that rivaled that of the rising sun. He turned to his officers, his voice steady and resolute, "Today, we fight not just for Carthage, but for the history that will remember us. We fight to show Rome that her empire is not invincible, to show her that the legions can bleed. We fight for the future of our children and the glory of our ancestors."

The soldiers listened, their spirits ignited by the words of their leader. They were ready to follow him into the jaws of death, for they believed in the vision he had painted—a world where Rome's eagles no longer cast shadows over their lands.

Upon seeing the advance of the Romans, Hannibal waited for the ideal time to spring his trap. As the trumpets gave the sound and the battle commenced, the Carthaginian army moved as one, a living testament to Hannibal's genius. The Romans, caught completely off guard by the ambush, found themselves trapped between the relentless Carthaginians and the unforgiving waters of the lake.

In the chaos of battle, Hannibal's mind was clear, every move calculated with the precision of a seasoned chess player. He watched as his cavalry cut through the Roman lines, as his infantry pushed forward with unyielding force. He couldn't help but wonder is this the fabled legion that brought fear through all the known world? Where is the consummate Roman horse, the fearsome equites that rivalled the Thessalians in skill? His Numidians effortlessly tore the semblance of Roman line and his infantry obliterated the isolated pockets of resistance with practised ease. This was no battle, Hannibal thought, this is a mere massacre. The sounds of clashing steel and the repugnant cries of the fallen filled the air, a grim symphony that heralded a new era.

When the dust settled, even the Roman consul Flaminius was found among the dead. The Battle of Lake Trasimene stood as a testament to Hannibal's prowess. Rome had been dealt a devastating blow, one that would echo through the annals of history. And as Hannibal looked upon the aftermath, he knew that this victory was but a step towards his ultimate goal—the gates of Rome itself.

Yet, in the depths of his heart, a shadow lingered, a question that remained unanswered. Would this path of conquest, violence and vengeance truly lead to the lasting peace he sought for his people? Or was it merely a fleeting triumph in the endless cycle of war?

Hannibal didn't find his answer. Perhaps it was lost to the winds that wailed across the blood-stained shores of Lake Trasimene, carrying with them the whispers of a future yet to be written, coupled with the steely resolve of the Roman republic.

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