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Shinkai's Garden of Words - Young Shoemaker

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Torte de Lini
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
Germany38463 Posts
Last Edited: 2018-01-03 19:01:51
May 19 2015 16:20 GMT
#1
I've been wanting to write this for a very long time. I've watched this film maybe 20 or so times and it is perhaps my top 10 despite it's relatively short runtime and razor-thin storyline. I've written bits and pieces about this movie, but never in full; so it can seem a bit all over the place and


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By the time I received this for Christmas, I had already seen the movie 20 or so times


Let me preface this by saying I don't watch anime. I think I've seen a total of 5 or 6 in my life and I sometimes revisit Gundam Wing for the sake of nostalgia. Anime is not my thing, it has become to formulaic and I'll just leave it at that.

However, when it is done right, with a beautiful contrast of color, detail and to emphasize emotion, the japanese animation style is perhaps the best to convey it. In this movie, Garden of Words (言の葉の庭, Kotonoha no Niwa), they have done all that in about 45 minutes. I continue to hold this film among my top 10 favourite films of all time. Granted, some might think I'm insane or even exaggerating at just how stupendous this film is, but for the life of me, I cannot look away when it is on and I cannot stop in the middle of it. this post may contain some spoilers, though, to be honest; it is still worth watching regardless


Takao, a high schooler who wants to be a shoemaker, always skips class to go sketch in the Japanese garden in the park. One day, Takao meets a mysterious woman named Yukino in the garden. They happen to run into each other on rainy days and start to get closer. Yukino is discouraged and tired of her life. Takao makes her shoes to try and snap her out of her depression. This is a story about the solitude and heartache that comes before love.


Following the release of Makoto Shinkai's previous film, 5 Centimeters Per Second (see spoiler), he went on to create his Garden of Words in 2013. Though short, a mere 45 minutes; it has not only surpassed the quality of his previous work; but was also subtle in its nuances, meanings and hidden symbolisms (that took me very long to notice).

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A bit older quality, but better story arc than that of Garden of Words, 5 Centimeters Per Second is the mature story of a Charlie Brown and the Little Red Haired Girl. The story of unrequited love, the pining for one another and the maturation of them going about their separate lives.


A faint sound of thunder
Cloudy skies
Perhaps it will rain
Will you not stay?

「鳴る神の 少し響みて さし曇り 雨も降らぬか 君を留めむ」


Though it is a famous tanka, it doesn't quite work in English. I believe the director takes a lot of his inspiration from Man'yōshū either in the past or now.

It's storyline is thin and it's biggest centerpieces are revealed from the get-go: rain, shoes/walking, solitude, insecurity. It's premise is opened with the tanka below and the music that sets the tone for the movie is no longer Tenmon from 5 Centimeters per Second, but rather Daisuki Kashiwa who made one of my favourite piano pieces in recent history:


Like the pitter-patter of rain, Kashiwa's music in Garden of Words is sublime, beautiful and endearing. With each moment, it sets a tone, it sets the pace and then elevates it with each and every instrument that's introduced as the song plays on.


If you listen for it during the movie, it either helps liaise onto new scenes, or heavily impacts the depth of emotions shown from the protagonists. When one character or another speaks to themselves, the music is not overbearing, but essential to each and every moment that's said or unsaid. For example, the best piano works is as we learn about Takao, the 15-year old who skips his mornings to go to the park and draw, lose himself in. We learn he wants to be a shoemaker, we learn of his day-to-day life of remedial jobs, aimlessness in school and his ability to lose himself in his own world. We learn of his insecurity about his age and his coming attraction of this mysterious woman he meets every rainy morning in the park. The basic interpretation of the plot (from my perspective) is that Yukino, the 27-year old who is now out of work; is trying to find her metaphorical legs to walk and, in a sense, Takao, the 15-year old student, wants to be someone of purpose, to be a shoemaker and metaphorical be an other's someone who makes them walk. It's a question of dependency and purpose. Not exactly a Cinderella story, but the analogous shoe-fitting-the-foot aspect is lead from the backstory of an older women (Yukino) whose lost her ability to stand, to walk and a mature boy (Takao), who's had an aimless understanding of what the next step in his life will be, with who will he be making shoes for.

Shinkai's characters are barely outlined beyond being encountered or pestered by an internal problem then interacting with their other "half" so to speak (as they either share the same problem or mutually fit in one another's dysfunction). Their backstory is barely known, small tidbits to provide further analysis of why they are the way they are (for example: the boy is very mature for his age because his mother is very immature, sometimes irresponsible; to the point of living her own life and leaving him to grow up and support himself) while the young female adult is a bit of the contrary: caught on the wrong side of high-school predicaments and is now finding herself independent, lost and unable to fill the void of her time, significance, self.

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While Hayao Miyazaki illustrates mature rites of passages through a young form of imaginative scenarios, fantastical beings and perfect illustrations of the nuanced movement and thoughts of the young. Makoto Shinkai is more realistic and yet, the scenes he animates, sets up and contextualizes in story is nothing less than spectacular, almost unbelievable. The colours are superficial and fantastical vibrance to the point of poetic exaggeration.

Since the film is too short, Shinkai takes advantage of every symbolism he can fit in the film. For example, he flips the significance of rain that one would be accustom to from writers like Fitzgerald and enamors it with a zen-like perpetuation between the characters, who are so internally distraught and insecure. The use of personal space symbolized by umbrellas, the distance of their, imperfect selves, to the quiet and sudden at-peace minds they have when shielded by the rain, their morning obligations (school) and hidden from the world thanks to the garden. The symbolism of shoes is evident, though not clear-cut. That shoes are meant to symbolize their ability to walk, to go farther: that they protect you and give you steps. When Takao is making shoes for her, he's confessing a love and need to protect her, protect his "world's secret". It's romantic and tragic that he is so-shortsighted when he always looks to the skies and horizon to see hope and aspire for more.

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The umbrellas, once kept near or opened with them from the start, is now hidden to the side as a pinnacle scene happens between the two protagonists.


In the director's commentary, he denotes how much effort he puts into setting up different forms of rains: stormy weather, quiet tapping and its battle against the sun; illuminating the very ground it refreshes; fills up any blemishes the ground may have. The rain has its own mood and tempo as mentioned before and the director makes sure to keep the scene lined up with Kashiwa's music.

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Below, is a spoiler for the film. More in touch with Yukino for why she acts the way she does. I also want to mention that the final scene is perhaps one I dislike the most, not because it isn't a beautiful scene where they lay everything out on the table, after he puts himself out there, but because the crying bit is a bit awkward for me as a viewer. The lead-up to it however, is incredible to watch. As he yells, screams, releases his anger, frustration with himself, with the unsaid words and everything.

Character Elaboration with minor spoilers
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[image loading] finally feeling strong enough on her own, she chases after Takao, after the one who got her to stand, to walk and now run. They will leave each other after this fateful encounter, but not lose touch with one another and he later receives a letter from her.


Yukino is inherently ambiguous in her emotions. She's confused in what she feels and how she should feel. She corrects Takao because she doesn't want anything to happen that would cause as much turmoil, public judgement and hurt as what happened with her at her job. She is a mixed bag of feelings, leading Takao on with a mysterious Tanka, not being forward about who she was in relation to him and, more importantly, letting him make up his mind as she couldn't make up her own.


In short, this is among my favourite films of all time. I love almost everything about it and it definitely lines up with a lot of what I love in stories, people, subtleties and weather. I enjoy the art and music the most and the characters second. It's true that this movie is not exactly award-winning, but I feel it achieves a lot in its short runtime and is easy enough for me to understand.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ga1n9pnT2O8


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Torte de Lini
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
Germany38463 Posts
Last Edited: 2015-05-20 08:24:46
May 19 2015 16:22 GMT
#2
I've written small bits about this movie for a full-year, never fully committing to putting my thoughts about it in full. However, after seeing this movie for the bazillionth time, I wanted to finally write it all out.

I apologize for the pseudo-intellectual writing, no editing really made here.



I FORGOT TO ADD! If you're unsure if you like his art and story direction, here's a short film that encapsulates pretty much how he's like. Thin storyline with themes obvious right from the start.
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Yorbon
Profile Joined December 2011
Netherlands4272 Posts
May 19 2015 17:56 GMT
#3
Hm, I have come across it multiple times randomly and everytime I somehow ended up not watching it. I guess I'll give it a try soon(tm)..

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And I totally agree that most anime are very formulaic
Zealously
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East Gorteau22261 Posts
May 19 2015 18:20 GMT
#4
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fluidrone
Profile Blog Joined January 2015
France1478 Posts
May 19 2015 18:34 GMT
#5
Thank you, (apart from "akira" and other old stuff, I hate "anime") your enthusiasm / passion will make me watch it (seems like something my better half would like to watch with me ).
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solidbebe
Profile Blog Joined November 2010
Netherlands4921 Posts
May 19 2015 19:11 GMT
#6
I've not really read your post because of spoilers, but from the small bits and pieces I have seen/read this looks like a very nice movie. Thanks for brining it to my attention, will definitely watch it. Might come back later to actually read your whole post and post my thoughts on it
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Faust852
Profile Joined February 2012
Luxembourg4004 Posts
May 19 2015 19:37 GMT
#7
Kashiwa Daisuke is one of my favourite music artists and Garden of Words is one of the best animation movie of all time, both graphically and scenaristically.
Miragee
Profile Joined December 2009
8509 Posts
May 19 2015 21:13 GMT
#8
I watched this movie for the first time just two days ago and it was great. Very relaxing, great atmosphere and stunning visuals. I liked it a lot.
itsjustatank
Profile Blog Joined November 2010
Hong Kong9154 Posts
May 20 2015 04:40 GMT
#9
On May 20 2015 03:20 Zealously wrote:
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I need to be able to upvote on TL.
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Torte de Lini
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
Germany38463 Posts
Last Edited: 2015-05-20 08:21:06
May 20 2015 08:18 GMT
#10
On May 20 2015 02:56 Yorbon wrote:
Hm, I have come across it multiple times randomly and everytime I somehow ended up not watching it. I guess I'll give it a try soon(tm)..

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And I totally agree that most anime are very formulaic


Let me know if you like it!

On May 20 2015 03:20 Zealously wrote:

Thanks

On May 20 2015 03:34 fluidrone wrote:
Thank you, (apart from "akira" and other old stuff, I hate "anime") your enthusiasm / passion will make me watch it (seems like something my better half would like to watch with me ).


Please, tell me what you think of it. It's definitely not for everyone but I have a hard time not finding someone who didn't enjoy the artwork (done by the art director who did Girl Who Leapt Through Time) or the music.

It's just a beautiful movie, but doesn't try to scratch your emotional strings or anything outrageous like that.

On May 20 2015 04:11 solidbebe wrote:
I've not really read your post because of spoilers, but from the small bits and pieces I have seen/read this looks like a very nice movie. Thanks for brining it to my attention, will definitely watch it. Might come back later to actually read your whole post and post my thoughts on it


I avoided a lot of spoilers of most kind; so in short, the post is good, but if that means you'll watch it, then no complains here!

Hope you come back!

On May 20 2015 04:37 Faust852 wrote:
Kashiwa Daisuke is one of my favourite music artists and Garden of Words is one of the best animation movie of all time, both graphically and scenaristically.


Amen!

On May 20 2015 06:13 Miragee wrote:
I watched this movie for the first time just two days ago and it was great. Very relaxing, great atmosphere and stunning visuals. I liked it a lot.


Agreed! Way better than Children Who Case Lost Voices, but that's a whole 'nother bag to discuss and analyze, I've only seen that one once and it's pacing doesn't really want me to try it again.

On May 20 2015 13:40 itsjustatank wrote:
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On May 20 2015 03:20 Zealously wrote:
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I need to be able to upvote on TL.


Comments are superior
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Torte de Lini
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
Germany38463 Posts
Last Edited: 2015-05-20 08:25:35
May 20 2015 08:24 GMT
#11
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KSwbnUQJGnA


I FORGOT TO ADD! If you're unsure if you like his art and story direction, here's a short film that encapsulates pretty much how he's like. Thin storyline with themes obvious right from the start.
https://twitter.com/#!/TorteDeLini (@TorteDeLini)
spinesheath
Profile Blog Joined June 2009
Germany8679 Posts
May 20 2015 17:23 GMT
#12
I watched it about a year ago or so, it's definitely a great one and well suited for people with little experience with the medium (anime).

Nice writeup too. You should fix the quotation marks (「」) around the tanka though, either have one at each end or none at all
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Torte de Lini
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
Germany38463 Posts
May 21 2015 09:12 GMT
#13
On May 21 2015 02:23 spinesheath wrote:
I watched it about a year ago or so, it's definitely a great one and well suited for people with little experience with the medium (anime).

Nice writeup too. You should fix the quotation marks (「」) around the tanka though, either have one at each end or none at all


Whoops, thanks!
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Gofarman
Profile Joined June 2010
Canada645 Posts
May 23 2015 19:51 GMT
#14
It was very good, thanks for the recommend. It's probably only the 4th or 5th foreign video I've seen. The subs were really smooth.
NuclearJudas
Profile Blog Joined July 2011
6546 Posts
May 24 2015 15:03 GMT
#15
I absolutely adore this film. Packs a huge emotional punch despite its limited time. Very nice write-up!
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Torte de Lini
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
Germany38463 Posts
Last Edited: 2015-05-25 10:54:59
May 25 2015 10:54 GMT
#16
On May 24 2015 04:51 Gofarman wrote:
It was very good, thanks for the recommend. It's probably only the 4th or 5th foreign video I've seen. The subs were really smooth.


That is so great to hear, yes!

On May 25 2015 00:03 NuclearJudas wrote:
I absolutely adore this film. Packs a huge emotional punch despite its limited time. Very nice write-up!


It's entrancing watching it, I could watch it on repeat all day.
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ShurykaN
Profile Blog Joined June 2011
United States338 Posts
May 25 2015 23:16 GMT
#17
It speaks bounds that the largest criticism of this film I have is that it's too short.
Torte de Lini
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
Germany38463 Posts
May 26 2015 06:59 GMT
#18
On May 26 2015 08:16 ShurykaN wrote:
It speaks bounds that the largest criticism of this film I have is that it's too short.


I agree, but we've actually seen Shinkai do longer films and he does make it feel long; I actually think he can't do them to be frank, not enough material and puts too much focus and emphasis on context for each individual scene, almost a fixation.

If he made longer films, it's pretty much the same routine but now longer, making it more dreadful and exhausting for the viewer.

His movies like: Children Who Chase Lost Voices and Beyond the Clouds (The Place Promised in our Early Days) are longer movies (90+ minutes) and they feel exactly as I mention above.
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Talaris
Profile Joined March 2011
Switzerland753 Posts
May 26 2015 18:03 GMT
#19
Thanks for the recommendation, it was beautiful to watch, a film to drop off any burdens/concerns of the real world and just be enthralled by the scenery and the small storyline.
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Torte de Lini
Profile Blog Joined September 2010
Germany38463 Posts
May 26 2015 19:46 GMT
#20
On May 27 2015 03:03 Talaris wrote:
Thanks for the recommendation, it was beautiful to watch, a film to drop off any burdens/concerns of the real world and just be enthralled by the scenery and the small storyline.


My God, this is exactly how it feels watching it.

I think that is what the film captures the best, the feeling of isolation; dissolvement of your world around just as the characters do when they go to the park.
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