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You've expressed explicitly your contempt for matrimony
You've student loans to pay and will not risk the alimony
We spend our days locked in a room content inside a bubble
and in the night time we go out and scour the streets for trouble
Hey, hey, marry me, Archie
Hey, hey, marry me, Archie
During the summer take me sailing out on the Atlantic
I won't set my sights on other seas, there is no need to panic
So honey take me by the hand and we can sign some papers
Forget the invitations floral arrangements and bread makers
Hey, hey, marry me, Archie
Hey, hey, marry me, Archie
Too late to go out, too young to stay in
They're talking about us living in sin
Hey, hey, marry me, Archie
Hey, hey, marry me, Archie
Hey, hey, marry me, Archie
Hey, hey, A.R.C.H.I.E, hey
 
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Interesting. Reads more like lyrics of a pop song than a lot of poetry I've read, but interesting all the same. Thanks for posting.
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Pretty interesting, I will agree with text it's a bit wierd, but that's good in some ways. Either way pretty good.
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it's not weird, it's perfect as lyrics to a pop song 
you should try singing to it
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Or putting it on a rap beat. Keep on writing
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i wrote one too
Walking through the trees
I never really know what's on your mind
Is it ever me, or just someone you've left behind?
Floating through a dream,
I never could make out the words you said
Sentences are bouncing back and forth
Inside my head
You don't have to leave
You could just stay here with me
Forget all the party police
We could find comfort in debauchery
Fighting through the fog
I can't believe it rained all summer long
When every day's a hurricane,
you know there's something wrong
I see you every day
It's hard to figure out what happens next
I cannot decipher conversation in your head
You don't have to leave
You could just stay here with me
Forget all the party police
We could find comfort in debauchery
i'm glad we can share. i feel like we know each other on a different level.
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I'm fascinated by the psychology behind a post like this... what motivated you to post a pop song, mislabel it poetry and then try to take credit for it? What was the goal here? I'm really puzzled.
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