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United States12125 Posts
your last breath. as soft as it was, hit me like a train.
and then the pain, the yearning for one more word,
one more “hi, how was your day?”
but instead you close your eyes, you fade away,
no more meals together, no time to play
our favorite game that you’d always say,
“only exists, only for us”,
that game we made up on the bus
ride home, we were oh so bored
i’d forgotten to pull the cord
to let us off, we were stuck for another hour
oh what forced imagination beholds, the beauty, the power
our combined intellect on that “forever bus ride”
invented the game, we’d never forget
about kingdoms, warriors, wars and debt
and sacrifice, pillaging, crusades… and death.
your last breath…
i hate you. i hate you.
don’t you see?
you weren’t supposed to play the game… without me.
  
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can't tell if i can make a dota joke here... or if serious thread :S
hope you feel better mizu status!
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All I know is that I just lost the game...
Edit: Hope you are okay if this is serious.
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about kingdoms, warriors, wars and debt
and sacrifice, pillaging, crusades… and death.
your last breath…
Best part. could do some old skool rap with that. nice work. gotta watch sea's last game on stream now!
edit: wow thats obviously about death.. sorry for your loss. wow. sorry for being insensitive
edit 2: but its war. so like i dunno? the bus chord also sound like the death chord to pull at a hospital.. so idk what is sybolism/imagery of emotoins. whatever.
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Bisutopia19138 Posts
I feel I won't ever understand what it meant to you.
Because you and the other person were meant to play that game together.
And that world is completely your own between the two of you.
But I'll be careful if I happen to accidentally wander inside your world,
not to touch anything and to pass through quietly with respect.
<3
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and BAM, the hook latched on the king.
from the window, a pale face turned pink above the crimson red reflection of Dark Moon.
Pulled, through the window, through the gates
through the far Great river that separated the 2 continents of the world.
Through the enemy lines and towers.
The Test of Faith had never failed the psycho butcher.
Dire remained, stronk.
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United States9929 Posts
I lost the game. Damn it.
srs though, feel better.
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GG I lost.
hope u feel better
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Is this about paper raging at you in dota
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mizu of many
opportunity's plenty
vendetta is fun
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That was pretty good. I have no idea what its about, but my imagination painted a pretty good-feeling picture of a young boy and girl on a school bus, but for some reason they got stuck so they played an amazingly deep game with each other...but then one day the girl let him down by playing the game with someone else? I like these open-ended poems.
"All the fun's in how you say a thing" - Robert Frost
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FUCK, I haven't lost the game in like 2 years.
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EPT
