On April 28 2012 01:40 arbiter_md wrote:
Quite nice, I like it!
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On April 28 2012 03:38 wo1fwood wrote:You might want to play with the levels a bit, they seem a bit off overall (some things overshadowing others perhaps a smidge too much). Maybe... I feel like there is a distinct foreground and background, and I'm not sure I like so much of a separation. I would agree that maybe it could use a little more nuance or changes, as it's a pretty straightforward core element but idk too much and it will get cluttered. I liked the opening though, and the older vibe that it gave, though I think that the separation of the granularity of this and the clarity of the added sounds contributes to the separation consideration I mentioned (not necessarily a bad thing but it might be too much). Finally, I dunno if you worked on this with headphones at all, but it overall seems very right heavy, which feels a little odd to my ears. Anyway, I definitely like the core idea, so take my suggestions however you will

Much appreciated! The levels was done in the last moments, originally a lot of the clips were more subdued. I´m thinking condensing it a bit and perhaps breaking up the drum/bass patterns. Thanks for the feedback, it´s great having someone listening to it with fresh ears. You're almost turned tonedeaf from hearing the same melodies over and over.