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WindOw
Sweden407 Posts
 Updated: Will be probably be updated more in a while http://soundcloud.com/altitude08/altitude-08-deep-orbit-presents-equilibrium-winter-halo-demo-mix-2 Feedback and constructive criticism are welcomed. Ps im still searching for people here on TL that also produces and would like to share feedback and or tips and advices. Ds cheers and enjoy!  | ||
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Cadgers
United States514 Posts
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iGrok
United States5142 Posts
Drop that bass drum an octave. or maybe 5 pitches minimum. I know its house, but the bass drum could be turned down a little bit in the beginning too. Its a little hard to hear the other instruments. This might be fixed when you drop it down though. Nice transition at 2:40 Turn the Bass up a hair at 2:45 I wish I could hear the melody more at 3:50. Decently smooth key change at 5:00. You can do more with this, right now it feels tacked on. I like it though, I just want more All in all, good stuff! | ||
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splints
Canada85 Posts
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WindOw
Sweden407 Posts
On December 30 2010 12:23 Cadgers wrote: I enjoyed it. Definitely link the final version and any more you make. Thanks alot! Ofcourse i will link the final version tomorrow hopefully =) On December 30 2010 12:31 iGrok wrote: Thoughts as I listen: Drop that bass drum an octave. or maybe 5 pitches minimum. I know its house, but the bass drum could be turned down a little bit in the beginning too. Its a little hard to hear the other instruments. This might be fixed when you drop it down though. Nice transition at 2:40 Turn the Bass up a hair at 2:45 I wish I could hear the melody more at 3:50. Decently smooth key change at 5:00. You can do more with this, right now it feels tacked on. I like it though, I just want more All in all, good stuff! Thanks ill try to adress most of that stuff, we're already working on some ideas to bring the track up another notch already, its getting late however so this will be fixed tomorrow. We will be adding some new instruments and fill up the song a bit more aswell and try to work on some transitions and the part after ~5min will probably be integrated in a bit better somehow . On December 30 2010 12:51 splints wrote: sweet, what did you use to produce this? Reason 4.0 | ||
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Chairman Ray
United States11903 Posts
Hope to hear more of it | ||
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WindOw
Sweden407 Posts
On December 30 2010 12:58 Chairman Ray wrote: Hey, this is actually pretty good! Hope to hear more of it Thanks! Hopefully done tomorrow | ||
flamewheel
FREEAGLELAND26782 Posts
Going to check out more of your stuff now~ | ||
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instantdry
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blahman3344
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tarpman
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