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I enjoyed it. Definitely link the final version and any more you make.
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Thoughts as I listen:
Drop that bass drum an octave. or maybe 5 pitches minimum. I know its house, but the bass drum could be turned down a little bit in the beginning too. Its a little hard to hear the other instruments. This might be fixed when you drop it down though. Nice transition at 2:40 Turn the Bass up a hair at 2:45 I wish I could hear the melody more at 3:50. Decently smooth key change at 5:00. You can do more with this, right now it feels tacked on. I like it though, I just want more
All in all, good stuff!
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sweet, what did you use to produce this?
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On December 30 2010 12:23 Cadgers wrote: I enjoyed it. Definitely link the final version and any more you make.
Thanks alot! Ofcourse i will link the final version tomorrow hopefully =)
On December 30 2010 12:31 iGrok wrote:Thoughts as I listen: Drop that bass drum an octave. or maybe 5 pitches minimum. I know its house, but the bass drum could be turned down a little bit in the beginning too. Its a little hard to hear the other instruments. This might be fixed when you drop it down though. Nice transition at 2:40 Turn the Bass up a hair at 2:45 I wish I could hear the melody more at 3:50. Decently smooth key change at 5:00. You can do more with this, right now it feels tacked on. I like it though, I just want more All in all, good stuff!
Thanks ill try to adress most of that stuff, we're already working on some ideas to bring the track up another notch already, its getting late however so this will be fixed tomorrow. We will be adding some new instruments and fill up the song a bit more aswell and try to work on some transitions and the part after ~5min will probably be integrated in a bit better somehow .
On December 30 2010 12:51 splints wrote: sweet, what did you use to produce this?
Reason 4.0
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Hey, this is actually pretty good!
Hope to hear more of it
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On December 30 2010 12:58 Chairman Ray wrote: Hey, this is actually pretty good!
Hope to hear more of it
Thanks! Hopefully done tomorrow
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This is really nice to listen to when I'm reading^^ Going to check out more of your stuff now~
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Nice! Love the atmosphere and all the pads.
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I'm a fan of house music, so i really appreciated this song. It's very nice, and I think that you did a great job on it. Looking forward to future works! =D
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Very good, enjoyed that a lot. I agree with the commenter who suggested that you make the bass drum slightly quieter. I liked the overall drum beat a lot.
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Updated a bit
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