Jackson and the U-Turns

Pwntrucci[sR]

Canada1519 Posts

August 15 2010 05:15 GMT

Ello guys! How are you all doing !?! !?!?!?!?!?!?

!!?!?!???!?!

My buddies and I just recorded a soung, honest!
It was our first try, went not too bad !
Check it out! Actually its on facebook, I don't know if
you can view it, but try anyway ! !!!

cyall.

http://www.facebook.com/#!/video/video.php?v=461034955902&comments&ref=notif&notif_t=video_comment_tagged

Coagulation

United States9633 Posts

August 15 2010 06:03 GMT

GOOD SHIT

singer sounds a little like system of a down singer

KrAzYfoOL

Australia3037 Posts

August 15 2010 06:45 GMT

haha sounds great

zobz

Canada2175 Posts

August 15 2010 07:44 GMT

Cool beat, the way the snare emphasizes that first guitar riff. I like the idea of lots of transitions but some of the riffs you use are kind of boring and could flow better from one to the next. Vocals are incredibly dirty in a bad way, especially some of the harmonies, need to work that out better. Have fun.

Makankosappo

Canada61 Posts

August 15 2010 08:31 GMT

Drummer/shit singer here. What exactly do you mean by dirty? Is it the production, or the actual singing? Just asking for the sake of improvement XD Appreciate the constructive criticism.

Coagulation

United States9633 Posts

August 15 2010 08:37 GMT

i think your singing is fine you just need to work on hitting some of the notes with a little bit more emphasis to give it more depth and range.

about your harmony.. they are probably trying to say that your voice pitch is not properly matching the notes of the song.

Pwntrucci[sR]

Canada1519 Posts

August 15 2010 20:28 GMT

Thanks for the feedback guys, I'll post our next song when its done and hopefully we shall see some improvement :O :D

LegendaryDreams

Canada1350 Posts

August 15 2010 23:25 GMT

U-Turn

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