EPTOtherwise, good read.
[Code S] "The Chosen 8" 2012 GSL Season 3 Day 1 - Page 10
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Serpest
United States603 Posts
Otherwise, good read. | ||
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neoghaleon55
United States7435 Posts
On July 11 2012 14:15 Serpest wrote: I'm sorry, did you just call Seed queer? And while I appreciate the effort you put into the preview, I think you're missing a certain professionalism. Granted we all have our favourite players and teams, but I would think that if you're providing a preview, you would at least care to make it partially unbiased (i.e. Taeja - yes I know he's on liquid and you have to hype him. Just don't go overboard). Otherwise, good read. I agree, that queer sentence is so out of place and it makes no sense, unless Seed IS actually gay. I just don't get it. | ||
Seeker
Where dat snitch at?37025 Posts
On July 11 2012 14:18 neoghaleon55 wrote: I agree, that queer sentence is so out of place and it makes no sense, unless Seed IS actually gay. I just don't get it. -___-;; It's a joke. Family Guy reference | ||
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neoghaleon55
United States7435 Posts
tsk tsk....so unprofessional *shakes head* lol I'm stepping on seeker's balls a lot these past few days  | ||
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Seeker
Where dat snitch at?37025 Posts
On July 11 2012 14:15 Serpest wrote: I'm sorry, did you just call Seed queer? And while I appreciate the effort you put into the preview, I think you're missing a certain professionalism. Granted we all have our favourite players and teams, but I would think that if you're providing a preview, you would at least care to make it partially unbiased (i.e. Taeja - yes I know he's on liquid and you have to hype him. Just don't go overboard). Otherwise, good read. What? I hyped up each player. Not just TaeJa | ||
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Dodgin
Canada39254 Posts
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polyphonyEX
United States2539 Posts
On July 11 2012 14:15 Serpest wrote: I'm sorry, did you just call Seed queer? And while I appreciate the effort you put into the preview, I think you're missing a certain professionalism. Granted we all have our favourite players and teams, but I would think that if you're providing a preview, you would at least care to make it partially unbiased (i.e. Taeja - yes I know he's on liquid and you have to hype him. Just don't go overboard). Otherwise, good read. He. is. trying. to. be. FUNNY!!! | ||
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McFeser
United States2458 Posts
On July 11 2012 14:11 neoghaleon55 wrote: You might want to clarify which ones besides "because header," else your opinion comes across as ambivalent and confusing. "make your writing as stylistic and entertaining as possible" . . . "[but] I would like it if it was cleaned up a little". There's nothing ambivalent about that. It's ambiguous, yeah, but only because Seeker can decide which criticisms he wants to listen to and which he wants to ignore. I'm refining your criticisms, therefore it would be redundant to say this specific sentence sounds good and this one does not. Instead I'm saying only to care marginally about those things, while focuses on the narration (Which I think could be even more stylistic) Also some of things that you thought were were (and I'd list them if I cared) were either not a big deal or were actually grammatically correct. Edit: On July 11 2012 14:25 Dodgin wrote: This is like the GSL season 1 finals banner all over again. I'm just trying to be helpful  | ||
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SenorChang
Australia4730 Posts
maybe put spoilers under the player name with your paragraph inside it? so it's still there for those who want to read it | ||
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Seeker
Where dat snitch at?37025 Posts
Ever since day 1 of my Live Reporting back in November, I've always tried to add quirky little things into my OPs. It's just who I am. I like to see ppl laugh and smile. I honestly just don't give a crap about making it look professional. Why would I do that? Do I get paid? Am I rewarded in some way? Am I going to get recognized by some writing company? No. You know what I AM going to get? Laughter and joy from my viewers. Hype for the upcoming matches. And most important of all, we all feel like family. My intention was not to make this into a joke. It was to get everyone close and laughing and having a good time, From here on out, I will not be adjusting myself to satisfy the complainers. I'll still take criticism and feedback and change things if it is indeed a problem. But from what I can tell, the majority of the people like what I do. I'm sorry but that's just the way it is. I am not perfect. Nor can I satisfy everyone. Please just try to understand why I do things the way I do them. | ||
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Seeker
Where dat snitch at?37025 Posts
On July 11 2012 14:37 SenorChang wrote: too much stuff in the OP for me maybe put spoilers under the player name with your paragraph inside it? so it's still there for those who want to read it No, I'm not going to do that. I put it that way on purpose with no spoilers cause I want it to be the first thing people see. So that it gets them hyped. | ||
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KiNGxXx
7928 Posts
On July 11 2012 14:37 SenorChang wrote: too much stuff in the OP for me maybe put spoilers under the player name with your paragraph inside it? so it's still there for those who want to read it Yeah, sign. I like those writeups though. Nice work, Seeker. But the OP should look clean. Maybe put it in the second post? | ||
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Ruscour
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neoghaleon55
United States7435 Posts
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neoghaleon55
United States7435 Posts
On July 11 2012 14:25 Dodgin wrote: This is like the GSL season 1 finals banner all over again. Biased!! Off with his head!! | ||
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KiNGxXx
7928 Posts
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samurai80
Japan4225 Posts
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Bagration
United States18282 Posts
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Zambrah
United States7306 Posts
If its any consolation, I liked the write up and I got the joke. <3 | ||
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syntox
Australia26 Posts
watch when taeja gets rocked tonight and all the liquid fanboys start crying protoss imba | ||
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