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XCetron
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Plexa
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LosingID8
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LosingID8
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Nazarene
Denmark996 Posts
I can't see the last pic though ; < | ||
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Spenguin
Australia3316 Posts
 5/5 ! | ||
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nemY
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MasterReY
Germany2708 Posts
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HamerD
United Kingdom1922 Posts
If TL can encourage people to make such huge first posts, desperately hiding their TL name with a pimp 1 letter-er, it's pretty encouraging shit xD TL hwaiting! | ||
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anotak
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Ack1027
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Agavond
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On June 12 2008 17:15 Ack1027 wrote: The story was good until you continued to use the hyena comparison. It got old real fast =/ I think the story concludes better with the comparison, gives it more of a imaginative premise. If the story were to end with a idealistic "kid grows up and goes to college" then sure enough the reader will lose that imagination that the author had created in the beginning. | ||
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Agavond
448 Posts
On June 12 2008 17:15 Ack1027 wrote: The story was good until you continued to use the hyena comparison. It got old real fast =/ I think the story concludes better with the comparison, gives it more of a imaginative premise. If the story were to end with a idealistic "kid grows up and goes to college" then sure enough the reader will lose that imagination that the author had created in the beginning. | ||
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evanthebouncy!
United States12796 Posts
Good luck! | ||
RaGe
Belgium9947 Posts
On June 12 2008 15:45 Plexa wrote: go staff powerrrrrr | ||
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Energies
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alffla
Hong Kong20321 Posts
so ur actually someone else on tl or soomething? | ||
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Equinox_kr
United States7395 Posts
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il0seonpurpose
Korea (South)5638 Posts
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Heggie
United Kingdom167 Posts
Because of my personal experience I find it very odd reading about inharmonious family lives. Seriously, to me the idea of actually disliking one of ones siblings seems bizzare. Does the OP's description of his family ring true for anyone else? I'm not making a criticism of you here, rather it reflects upon my sheltered upbringing I supose. | ||
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